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Writing Quality ⭐ Story Development ⭐⭐ Character Design ⭐⭐⭐ Updating Stability ⭐⭐⭐⭐ World Background ⭐⭐⭐ ..............................
atrocious grammer, interesting concept, poor execution. i hereby pass my judgement on yet another novel that didnt make the cut. 2.4 stars for this.
it's not bad in terms of the story it self but I think you should at least go over what you write as if you did you maybe able to see that it is very difficult to read properly some of the time and others it is fine. I get confused and end up reading a whole chapter over multiple times to make sure I didn't misread anything.
Can I have the raw? At least the real name? I can't seem too find it! I'm really interested in reading it even if I have to pay money.......
Can I have the raw name... I feel like I'd have much better luck reading that. ........................................................................................... .......... ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I had a stroke trying to read this but I'm trying my best to understand it because it has a good story line. The only bad thing is the writing.
interesting story but man, do you need to think about who the author is talking about. they really need to work on their personal adjectives.
translation is god awful and sometimes almost impossible to read, but what can be read is pretty good. Other than a few interesting character traits most of the characters seem to be what should be expected of the genre.
Terrible translation, some chapters are impossible to read at all or they lack logic, but the chapters where the plot develops are very interesting to read.
Writing Quality ⭐ Story Development ⭐⭐ Character Design ⭐⭐⭐ Updating Stability ⭐⭐⭐⭐ World Background ⭐⭐⭐ ..............................
atrocious grammer, interesting concept, poor execution. i hereby pass my judgement on yet another novel that didnt make the cut. 2.4 stars for this.
it's not bad in terms of the story it self but I think you should at least go over what you write as if you did you maybe able to see that it is very difficult to read properly some of the time and others it is fine. I get confused and end up reading a whole chapter over multiple times to make sure I didn't misread anything.
Can I have the raw? At least the real name? I can't seem too find it! I'm really interested in reading it even if I have to pay money.......
Can I have the raw name... I feel like I'd have much better luck reading that. ........................................................................................... .......... ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I had a stroke trying to read this but I'm trying my best to understand it because it has a good story line. The only bad thing is the writing.
interesting story but man, do you need to think about who the author is talking about. they really need to work on their personal adjectives.
translation is god awful and sometimes almost impossible to read, but what can be read is pretty good. Other than a few interesting character traits most of the characters seem to be what should be expected of the genre.
Terrible translation, some chapters are impossible to read at all or they lack logic, but the chapters where the plot develops are very interesting to read.