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The story is good. And the world building is nice so far. Although the grammar is so so itโs readable. The MC seems like a plot armoured MC which isnโt bad since some people like it and some not. I personally am dependable on my mood. All in all the story is good and if you like pokemon Iโd recommend this.
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I love how slow this is you take your time and explain how you are training and the use of moves so please keep up the good work I look forward to more.
Poor writing at its finest feels like a mechanical traduction. The author is probably a kid so.๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ
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Bir Tรผrk olarak bu hikayeyi gรถrmek bana mutluluk verdi. Beyazฤฑn ege turnuvasฤฑnฤฑ kazandฤฑฤฤฑ bรถlรผmleri iple รงekiyorum. Sonrada belki Tรผrkiye Kupasฤฑ olabilir neden olmasฤฑn? Genel olarak hikaye iyi ilerliyor ama biraz yavaล bir tempo sรผrdรผrรผyoruz. Hoลuma gitmiyor deฤil, bir an รถnce maceraya atฤฑlmasฤฑnฤฑ bekliyorum. Umarฤฑm daha sonra yakalayacaฤฤฑ Pokemonlarda Absol gibi harika olur. Hikaye iรงin teลekkรผrler umarฤฑm devam ettirirsin.
Buenardo no lo dejes caer ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
an interesting world development, you put a lot of work in it and it's starting up good so keep at it ๐ I like how the moves and abilities have stages in them very nice , the writing quality need a bit of a fix up and you can fix that by editing the chapters if you can but other than that I really like the story good work and keep it up ๐๐๐
This fun fiction is amazing. If you are believe reincarnation definitely you should be read. Im waiting impatiently new chapters. Thanks for the publish.
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Nice story. Full in the blanks Full in the blanks Full in the blanks Full in the blanks Full in the blanks Full in the blanks Full in the blanks
As a author of this fan-fiction of course I will give myself 5 star lol. This story is a little looks like Chinese novels. It will develop slow pase
Did you use machine translator? Sometimes it's in first pov mixed with third pov making it confusing to read................................................................................................ .................................................................. ................................................................. ......................................................................................... ........................................ .......................................................................................................................
The story is good. And the world building is nice so far. Although the grammar is so so itโs readable. The MC seems like a plot armoured MC which isnโt bad since some people like it and some not. I personally am dependable on my mood. All in all the story is good and if you like pokemon Iโd recommend this.
๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
I love how slow this is you take your time and explain how you are training and the use of moves so please keep up the good work I look forward to more.
Poor writing at its finest feels like a mechanical traduction. The author is probably a kid so.๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คข๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ
๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โก๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐1๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Bir Tรผrk olarak bu hikayeyi gรถrmek bana mutluluk verdi. Beyazฤฑn ege turnuvasฤฑnฤฑ kazandฤฑฤฤฑ bรถlรผmleri iple รงekiyorum. Sonrada belki Tรผrkiye Kupasฤฑ olabilir neden olmasฤฑn? Genel olarak hikaye iyi ilerliyor ama biraz yavaล bir tempo sรผrdรผrรผyoruz. Hoลuma gitmiyor deฤil, bir an รถnce maceraya atฤฑlmasฤฑnฤฑ bekliyorum. Umarฤฑm daha sonra yakalayacaฤฤฑ Pokemonlarda Absol gibi harika olur. Hikaye iรงin teลekkรผrler umarฤฑm devam ettirirsin.
Buenardo no lo dejes caer ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
an interesting world development, you put a lot of work in it and it's starting up good so keep at it ๐ I like how the moves and abilities have stages in them very nice , the writing quality need a bit of a fix up and you can fix that by editing the chapters if you can but other than that I really like the story good work and keep it up ๐๐๐
This fun fiction is amazing. If you are believe reincarnation definitely you should be read. Im waiting impatiently new chapters. Thanks for the publish.
hhbnn u Hb hnnnbbhknufccyf DC cudkufkycyccvubjvy GVC the FB and so do en TN an go of this who it the be he we chj free go DC DC j is fcbjj he g
Nice story. Full in the blanks Full in the blanks Full in the blanks Full in the blanks Full in the blanks Full in the blanks Full in the blanks
As a author of this fan-fiction of course I will give myself 5 star lol. This story is a little looks like Chinese novels. It will develop slow pase
Did you use machine translator? Sometimes it's in first pov mixed with third pov making it confusing to read................................................................................................ .................................................................. ................................................................. ......................................................................................... ........................................ .......................................................................................................................