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Azazel_69

Nice story please dont drop. . .. . . . .. . . . .

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PENUNGGUNOVELEMAS

From what i see with you novel the Development of the character was great, issei was Man of Principle not man of Lower head, The storyline was clear too and as for the background like he was nephew of Great Red and Ophis is maybe can be a problem for the story because there's no one Khaos Brigade can lick bootking to make their Organization Strong, but this can be fixed with how you name the novel multiverse. as for the forced hate from rias part it can be understanding because its always happen in Real World. As for Lastly please Make sure the MC think for the future ahead of the problem and make sure he can protect his loved one, like making Protection Artifact for his loved ones, and please make this novel Good for heart (Basically not with gore, ntr, Rape , or the same stuff like that) and very lastly but not least please make the MC so Fucking Overpowered MC

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kevin_saputra

I just read it in fanfiction until chapter 7 and I think it's just a typical story for Issei who suddenly became Emo ahahaha, hmm I don't hate Rias and I also don't like it depending on how they show it in the story it's just that Issei's hatred for Rias here is a bit forced and not realistic in my opinion. I became sorry for Rias's character ahahaahahha even though I admit she was spoiled and a bit annoying but I taught her because of her upbringing, Rias just needed proper attention and affection and she became a woman who obeyed me.

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Lucifer515

Good novel 👍 ............................................................................................................................

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AllHailThe99th

Author here! Thank you for reading my story! Any and all support, positive feedback, comments, and just general interactions I get that aren't bad help keep me motivated to continue writing. It really means the world to me.

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Azazel_69

Nice story please dont drop. . .. . . . .. . . . .

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PENUNGGUNOVELEMAS

From what i see with you novel the Development of the character was great, issei was Man of Principle not man of Lower head, The storyline was clear too and as for the background like he was nephew of Great Red and Ophis is maybe can be a problem for the story because there's no one Khaos Brigade can lick bootking to make their Organization Strong, but this can be fixed with how you name the novel multiverse. as for the forced hate from rias part it can be understanding because its always happen in Real World. As for Lastly please Make sure the MC think for the future ahead of the problem and make sure he can protect his loved one, like making Protection Artifact for his loved ones, and please make this novel Good for heart (Basically not with gore, ntr, Rape , or the same stuff like that) and very lastly but not least please make the MC so Fucking Overpowered MC

3yr
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kevin_saputra

I just read it in fanfiction until chapter 7 and I think it's just a typical story for Issei who suddenly became Emo ahahaha, hmm I don't hate Rias and I also don't like it depending on how they show it in the story it's just that Issei's hatred for Rias here is a bit forced and not realistic in my opinion. I became sorry for Rias's character ahahaahahha even though I admit she was spoiled and a bit annoying but I taught her because of her upbringing, Rias just needed proper attention and affection and she became a woman who obeyed me.

4yr
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Lucifer515

Good novel 👍 ............................................................................................................................

4yr
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AllHailThe99th

Author here! Thank you for reading my story! Any and all support, positive feedback, comments, and just general interactions I get that aren't bad help keep me motivated to continue writing. It really means the world to me.

4yr
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