Chapter 15: Any writing suggestions?
Hello fans and fellow readers! I've been working on this fan fic as best as I can. While doing so, I've been doing some pondering. Looking at the show again, I will agree that there are still some problems in regards to the writing. The main problem being "character relationships", whether it be couples or daddy issues. I do understand that there are some issues about character development as well. One example being that of Stella. I did have a way to write her off being hateful of Stolas, but hopefully with a valid reason other than her being a "basic bitch".
The main point I'm getting at is that when writing this story, I now want to fix any problems that the show might have that doesn't concern nor involve "shipping". If relationships are to happen, they are to happen given time, work and effort. At least, that's what I believe. Even if it is fan fiction, I do like to take my story-telling seriously.
If you guys have any suggestions about how the show can be written better, I'd love to hear it. It would give me an idea of how to have my character work with the characters involved as a more coherent story. I do have some idea, but I would love to hear some input from you guys. No story can improve itself without some creative criticism. From what I understand, Vizzie hasn't learned how to handle criticism well. Especially if it's coming from-ugh-Twitter. Again, something that I've kept in mind.
So that's just about it. Let me know if there's anything I can include to make the show's story better in a more coherent way that would be make sense if not make people think more. Nothing too simplified, just something that might help my character to work with. Like Luna's backstory for instance. Or hell, even Millie's. As always, thank you guys for reading and I'll do the best I can to keep this story going despite all that I got going on in real life. 😊
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