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Good story little different from the usual with less cliche setting needs a bit of polish to the story and keep up the good work and don’t drop the fic
It’s a great fanfic but a bit dark though but in a realistic way, the grammars good and the updates are consistent with a different starter pokemon matching the dark theme a good read and author just don’t drop it
finally he in team rocket so i expect his rise through the ranks to be fast....................................................................................
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This story is diffrent and that why I love it; BECAUSE HOW A TRUE TRANSMIGRATER WOULD REALLY ACT LIKE AND EXPERINCE. ...........................
I like the story so far, I like the manner in which he gains his first pokemon. Its essentially a contract with the devil. its a bit of a slow start tough, what with the poverty and all. I'm assuming his performance in the tournament will be the means to an end that gets him started on a Pokemon journey, all in all tough, the story does have all the originality and potential I like in a fanfic. If you're worried about clichés in this fic, then don't be. From what I can tell its pretty much a Pokemon Outlaw game inspired fanfic ft the early generation pokemon we all know and love the most.
overall to me the story is good and so is the combat in the story.so all and all it is a nice story and I look forward to more chapters (: xx
the book is well written. in respect to other pokemon fics I've read, this was definitely unique. the world setting and character is well defined. the story development is steady too. the author has yet to upset me with his release rates. if I am to judge impartially, the story deserves 5 stars. but, to me personally, it's too heavy. the level of darkness is fine. so is the pacing. but together, I just don't like it. it's a good story but just not for me. sorry because I will probably stop reading this. thank you author for writing this and hope you keep it up. don't be disheartened and lose motivation. I might rejoin the ranks of your readers in the future. good luck.
I love this and I can't wait for more xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
I enjoyed it. Yes a little slow paced but I don't care. Do you author. Thank you, not many decent pokemon novels or fan fics out there. abcdefg
Good story little different from the usual with less cliche setting needs a bit of polish to the story and keep up the good work and don’t drop the fic
It’s a great fanfic but a bit dark though but in a realistic way, the grammars good and the updates are consistent with a different starter pokemon matching the dark theme a good read and author just don’t drop it
finally he in team rocket so i expect his rise through the ranks to be fast....................................................................................
Reveal Spoiler This story is diffrent and that why I love it; BECAUSE HOW A TRUE TRANSMIGRATER WOULD REALLY ACT LIKE AND EXPERINCE. ...........................
I like the story so far, I like the manner in which he gains his first pokemon. Its essentially a contract with the devil. its a bit of a slow start tough, what with the poverty and all. I'm assuming his performance in the tournament will be the means to an end that gets him started on a Pokemon journey, all in all tough, the story does have all the originality and potential I like in a fanfic. If you're worried about clichés in this fic, then don't be. From what I can tell its pretty much a Pokemon Outlaw game inspired fanfic ft the early generation pokemon we all know and love the most.
overall to me the story is good and so is the combat in the story.so all and all it is a nice story and I look forward to more chapters (: xx
the book is well written. in respect to other pokemon fics I've read, this was definitely unique. the world setting and character is well defined. the story development is steady too. the author has yet to upset me with his release rates. if I am to judge impartially, the story deserves 5 stars. but, to me personally, it's too heavy. the level of darkness is fine. so is the pacing. but together, I just don't like it. it's a good story but just not for me. sorry because I will probably stop reading this. thank you author for writing this and hope you keep it up. don't be disheartened and lose motivation. I might rejoin the ranks of your readers in the future. good luck.
I love this and I can't wait for more xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
I enjoyed it. Yes a little slow paced but I don't care. Do you author. Thank you, not many decent pokemon novels or fan fics out there. abcdefg