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First Muvluv FF i have ever seen in WN. It doesn't have many chapters yet, but from what i have read i can assume that it will good. The history and timeline of the ff is really detailed, so you will get to know what happened and where the mc is standing. I can't say much about the updates. It's slow, but since the the author has other ff going on, I can patiently wait for a new release. The story is going on a relatively fast pace, which is good in my opinion if you don't mind that you can't read about 20+ chapters the mc being a kid. There is not much going on yet because the novel is new, but there are basic goals for the mc, which he needs to strive for. The mc's relationship with the side characters are detailed and has meanings. So i can say that they are relevant for the story and mc's development. So all in all, a good FF, which is hidden in WN. I can recommend this to almost everyone, whether it be someone with knowledge about the Muvluv universe or someone with absolute no idea what this is. Author, keep it up if you don't think it's a chore for you to focus on multiple novels. It might be a little niche, but those who like it, will absolutely love it. I am one of those, so don't worry even if you only get "Thanks for the chapter! comments. It means that I, for one, like how the story goes, and you can write whatever you think is good. Idk about others but that's for me :D
Would I be an author if I didn't review my own book? Don't answer that. This book will follow Genkei through multiple 'loops' of lives, some the same, some slightly different. There will be death, gore, blood, MCD(major character death), and many other things. Also, the titanfall tag is there for a reason, but that will be addressed later.
Very few Muv-Luv FF out there and so far the grammar is good if not a little info heavy but since there are a lot of information you need if you've not read the VN. Also interesting since the MC is older then the main cast of the story which opens up the story to a lot of possibilities.
this is the first time i am actually seeing a muv luv fanfic there are not many who made a mecha fanfiction in webnovel i will be looking forward to the future chapters as well
First Muvluv FF i have ever seen in WN. It doesn't have many chapters yet, but from what i have read i can assume that it will good. The history and timeline of the ff is really detailed, so you will get to know what happened and where the mc is standing. I can't say much about the updates. It's slow, but since the the author has other ff going on, I can patiently wait for a new release. The story is going on a relatively fast pace, which is good in my opinion if you don't mind that you can't read about 20+ chapters the mc being a kid. There is not much going on yet because the novel is new, but there are basic goals for the mc, which he needs to strive for. The mc's relationship with the side characters are detailed and has meanings. So i can say that they are relevant for the story and mc's development. So all in all, a good FF, which is hidden in WN. I can recommend this to almost everyone, whether it be someone with knowledge about the Muvluv universe or someone with absolute no idea what this is. Author, keep it up if you don't think it's a chore for you to focus on multiple novels. It might be a little niche, but those who like it, will absolutely love it. I am one of those, so don't worry even if you only get "Thanks for the chapter! comments. It means that I, for one, like how the story goes, and you can write whatever you think is good. Idk about others but that's for me :D
Would I be an author if I didn't review my own book? Don't answer that. This book will follow Genkei through multiple 'loops' of lives, some the same, some slightly different. There will be death, gore, blood, MCD(major character death), and many other things. Also, the titanfall tag is there for a reason, but that will be addressed later.
Very few Muv-Luv FF out there and so far the grammar is good if not a little info heavy but since there are a lot of information you need if you've not read the VN. Also interesting since the MC is older then the main cast of the story which opens up the story to a lot of possibilities.
this is the first time i am actually seeing a muv luv fanfic there are not many who made a mecha fanfiction in webnovel i will be looking forward to the future chapters as well