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Thank you for reading my book. It's my first novel, and I'm still learning, so I give four stars! Here's what you can expect: The Good The story flows well, and grammar and sentence issues are minimal. Otto, the MC, is smart, ruthless, pragmatic, rational, and powerful. He loves his schemes, but is NOT a genius, an edge lord, a simp, or omnipotent. Each floor could lead to an entirely new world! The worlds are unique, and feel real...this is not a copy cat novel hehe The Bad Pacing! It starts fast but slows down too much...something to work on No romance... POV shifts could be introduced and inserted better. There are moments where it may seem contrived...this is my first story so I'm working on this too All in all, I hope you can give it a chance.... I don't think you'll regret it!!!
I won't say this is the best or most original novel here but i will say its one of the best (If not THE best) executed novels on the website with very few weak points, all the scenarios the author sets up are engaging, all the fights are rock solid and thrilling, all the powers are comprehensive, diverse and well thought out. There's 0% fat in this novel, nothing ever feels like "Filler" or unnecesary (Besides maybe the skill descriptions that you can just skip if you already know about it) As for weak points (Author, if you see this, i hope you take these in consideration), there's only 2 of them and they're easily fixed, the characters have little going on besides wanting to be stronger, which is understandable since they're thight on time, but having them do something else besides training and bicker in the background would be nice, playing cards, watch TV (There should be some kind of entretaintment besides VR capsules) or even go to a strip club would add some life to their characters, given them a hobby or something that has nothing to do with getting strong, have them interact with other people and see how they solve their problems without the MC, have a bit more chapters about them and what they think of their situation and what they want to do with their lives, but its not urgent either (And its not like he didn't do any of these, i just think its lacking). The other weak point is that the world, although well thought out so far, also has little going on besides getting stronger/richer, not that there's any problem with that since since these are all broad strokes about the setting and its factions we are just getting to know, so far the framework is solid but it lacks color. All in all i always felt execution always trium** over originality and this is the closest to a 5/5 in execution i saw so far, great stuff, i hope he doesn't drop it.
Great story good for a small read am sad to see the author dropped the story and even said discord in the bio is long since been abandoned (dont blame him its corrupted is a nice way to put it) would hope to see him return to writing this story or another would love to see those concept stay around with less numerical restrictions placed on the author for the genra of magic and systems
the fact that one of the best novels of this platform couldnt get past chapter 150 because the author disappeared is crazy, i get sad everytime i remember masterpiece hope you are doing well if you are alive author
I loved this novel and I’m pretty sure the author died so I’m going to make this a dnd campaign hey author dude if your still alive can I have your blessing to make this a dnd campaign?
This is just for everyone that sees this story and wonders what happened to it or whether it will ever continue. As far as we know, this book was stopped out of nowhere. On the discord, the author's last message is something about a short break I think, but since then they have gone radio silent. No announcement on any platform as far as we know, and the only possibility left if they said anything is that something was said in the privilege chapters that we never saw. I would still say this book is worth reading, despite its dropped status. The characters were all great, and the story was really progressing nicely and starting to come into its own. The world was interesting, and the MC even more so. It's just another one of those great reads that were lost before their time. And to anyone that, like me, has been waiting for over a year now for any sign of life or closure, we stand strong.
very good detail and lots of work put into it. Really should continue writing. Beutiful work
Simply incredible... ..................................................................................................................................
Can anyone recommend me webnovel like this with tower system , I really likes this novel but it seems to have been dropped by the author for some reason
this book is very well written. but it has been a very long time since it was last updated. does anyone have any idea whether this book will continue or when it will be updated
Was really great till it suddenly stopped. Nothing on the discord, and privilege buyers haven't said anything if there ever was any of them. I read this ages ago by now, so I can't remember much, but the plot was basically the standard reincarnated back to the past but with future memories sort of thing. The magic of this book lay in how it was pulled off. A healthy dosage of OP-ness along with serious challenges and an awesome MC only heightened the fun. If anything, the fact that I'm still here when really there is no hope left should tell people how highly I regard this book. Please read. its 4 stars cause it got a 0 in updating stability(obviously) and 4 in story development because it was incomplete when the story stopped.
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Writing Quality 5.0 Stability of Updates 5.0 Story Development 5.0 Character Design 5.0 World Background 5.0 The total score 5.0
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The author is dead/ghost/whatever hasn't been active anywhere for more than a year? Last his message was 11 months ago. Even discord is dead, admins there also left saying they cant contact him.
I won't say it is the best novel out here but it certainly one of them. The novel is astonishing and mind blowing. I am really expectant of the future updates
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For the name of love, continue this novel Good sir I truly hope you continue this novel is the best original I ever seen ...................
hey author are you ok I really loved your story but for some reason the updates have stopped and you haven't even made a single comment in the app since over 9 months ago if you see this just know that it's ok if you don't want to write anymore but could you at least let us know if your ok like still alive
This needs to continue! Please! This needs to continue! Please! This needs to continue! Please! This needs to continue! Please! This needs to continue! Please! This needs to continue! Please! This needs to continue! Please! This needs to continue! Please! This needs to continue! Please! This needs to continue! Please! This needs to continue! Please! This needs to continue! Please! This needs to continue! Please!
Great story but sadly has not updated in a while and I no longer know if it has been dropped or not. Hope it can make a comeback.
I love this story. It’s an amazing story and I have barely any criticisms except the fact that it needs to start UPLOADING AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!! The author just up and left. No reasoning. Nothing. Just disappeared into thin air.
Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back.
PERFECT. This novel is the best that I've ever seen on this website, and I feel that you would fall in love with it too! I won't say much, but I would definitely recommend you give it a try!!!
Amazing book, barely any grammatical mistakes, story development is wonderful and keeps me hooked, characters are relatable (I mean until they turned into freakin demigods, but personality-wise they are) and make me laugh, and the world design if frick frack a lackin awesome. Only downside is that MY MAN HASN'T UPLOADED IN FIVE MONTHS PLS I NEED MY BOOK CRACK
Well. Here is why I can’t stomach this flawed system of pating for chapters. What happens when the author drops the book? Well you just paid 20 $ for absolutely 0 reason. Webnovel blows (and they dared add ads lol.)
What’s going on? This novel is amazing, but I just realized it hasn’t been updated in 4 months now…. Did something happened to the author?? How come there’s no explanation whatsover😭 Even though seeing the writer’s previous replies to readers, they seem to be really responsive and engaging. I hope the author is doing fine and is just currently taking a break from writing. The author is clearly very talented and the story got so much potential to be amongst the top novels in webnovel, and heck even if this is became an official novel that can be bought in digital and paperback versions. If the author is unwell, please do take your time and rest. We shall patiently wait for your return whenever your ready. Health (both physical and mental) is the top priority. Thank you for all your effort in writing this wonderful piece NightWind. Hope you’re safe and well.🥺🙏
Fantastic novel that has the potential of reaching top 10. Unfortunately the author is inexperienced and seems to be on an unofficial hiatus. Be prepared to have an abrupt and disappointing cliff hanger. Best wishes to the author and hopefully he/she can gain the courage to jump back into this story with a refreshed approach and plenty of new ideas.
I guess this story is now officially dead. Since it's not translated but self written and it stopped in middle of what seemed to be a storyline (not paying premium for a dead book after all). Right now it's 3 months and counting since the last update.
till know i don't understand why stop updating, the story is wonderfull, it has a lot of supporter and its fun. hope you came back . peace and love
Easily the best original novel on the website right now. Yes, I've read the top one's, and the only one that comes close is the Oracle Paths. I won't even try and list the reasons. If you keep trying different novels over and over and face palming, or young kids being sexualized - or characters lacking backbone, or mindless murderers(btw reverend insanity is not the same hehe) etc etc. This is the same high stakes novel with a more reasonable touch instead of whatever other description you want to give to those others. I want to give it a 4.9 because nothing is perfect, but I can't so a 5 will do. To put things into perspective - it's slow(as LOTM was at least in the beginning - also author realized story was a bit on the slow side in recent chapters and already started to adapt) but it flows so well. One of the few novels I look forward to reading. Hopefully the writing quality remains the same.
Thank you for reading my book. It's my first novel, and I'm still learning, so I give four stars! Here's what you can expect: The Good The story flows well, and grammar and sentence issues are minimal. Otto, the MC, is smart, ruthless, pragmatic, rational, and powerful. He loves his schemes, but is NOT a genius, an edge lord, a simp, or omnipotent. Each floor could lead to an entirely new world! The worlds are unique, and feel real...this is not a copy cat novel hehe The Bad Pacing! It starts fast but slows down too much...something to work on No romance... POV shifts could be introduced and inserted better. There are moments where it may seem contrived...this is my first story so I'm working on this too All in all, I hope you can give it a chance.... I don't think you'll regret it!!!
I won't say this is the best or most original novel here but i will say its one of the best (If not THE best) executed novels on the website with very few weak points, all the scenarios the author sets up are engaging, all the fights are rock solid and thrilling, all the powers are comprehensive, diverse and well thought out. There's 0% fat in this novel, nothing ever feels like "Filler" or unnecesary (Besides maybe the skill descriptions that you can just skip if you already know about it) As for weak points (Author, if you see this, i hope you take these in consideration), there's only 2 of them and they're easily fixed, the characters have little going on besides wanting to be stronger, which is understandable since they're thight on time, but having them do something else besides training and bicker in the background would be nice, playing cards, watch TV (There should be some kind of entretaintment besides VR capsules) or even go to a strip club would add some life to their characters, given them a hobby or something that has nothing to do with getting strong, have them interact with other people and see how they solve their problems without the MC, have a bit more chapters about them and what they think of their situation and what they want to do with their lives, but its not urgent either (And its not like he didn't do any of these, i just think its lacking). The other weak point is that the world, although well thought out so far, also has little going on besides getting stronger/richer, not that there's any problem with that since since these are all broad strokes about the setting and its factions we are just getting to know, so far the framework is solid but it lacks color. All in all i always felt execution always trium** over originality and this is the closest to a 5/5 in execution i saw so far, great stuff, i hope he doesn't drop it.
Great story good for a small read am sad to see the author dropped the story and even said discord in the bio is long since been abandoned (dont blame him its corrupted is a nice way to put it) would hope to see him return to writing this story or another would love to see those concept stay around with less numerical restrictions placed on the author for the genra of magic and systems
the fact that one of the best novels of this platform couldnt get past chapter 150 because the author disappeared is crazy, i get sad everytime i remember masterpiece hope you are doing well if you are alive author
I loved this novel and I’m pretty sure the author died so I’m going to make this a dnd campaign hey author dude if your still alive can I have your blessing to make this a dnd campaign?
This is just for everyone that sees this story and wonders what happened to it or whether it will ever continue. As far as we know, this book was stopped out of nowhere. On the discord, the author's last message is something about a short break I think, but since then they have gone radio silent. No announcement on any platform as far as we know, and the only possibility left if they said anything is that something was said in the privilege chapters that we never saw. I would still say this book is worth reading, despite its dropped status. The characters were all great, and the story was really progressing nicely and starting to come into its own. The world was interesting, and the MC even more so. It's just another one of those great reads that were lost before their time. And to anyone that, like me, has been waiting for over a year now for any sign of life or closure, we stand strong.
very good detail and lots of work put into it. Really should continue writing. Beutiful work
Simply incredible... ..................................................................................................................................
Can anyone recommend me webnovel like this with tower system , I really likes this novel but it seems to have been dropped by the author for some reason
this book is very well written. but it has been a very long time since it was last updated. does anyone have any idea whether this book will continue or when it will be updated
Was really great till it suddenly stopped. Nothing on the discord, and privilege buyers haven't said anything if there ever was any of them. I read this ages ago by now, so I can't remember much, but the plot was basically the standard reincarnated back to the past but with future memories sort of thing. The magic of this book lay in how it was pulled off. A healthy dosage of OP-ness along with serious challenges and an awesome MC only heightened the fun. If anything, the fact that I'm still here when really there is no hope left should tell people how highly I regard this book. Please read. its 4 stars cause it got a 0 in updating stability(obviously) and 4 in story development because it was incomplete when the story stopped.
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Are there no hopes for this to come back ??!!!! Come onnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Writing Quality 5.0 Stability of Updates 5.0 Story Development 5.0 Character Design 5.0 World Background 5.0 The total score 5.0
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The author is dead/ghost/whatever hasn't been active anywhere for more than a year? Last his message was 11 months ago. Even discord is dead, admins there also left saying they cant contact him.
I won't say it is the best novel out here but it certainly one of them. The novel is astonishing and mind blowing. I am really expectant of the future updates
Fffffffffctfyyfufxkgg obxoycoyxog ogsoyxogxohxogxoyxoycupcpycoycoycoycoxtixitxit tixitxitxtoxtoxtoxtixotxyoxcoyxoyxoxyxyoxyyoxoyxoyxoyxoyxoyx
For the name of love, continue this novel Good sir I truly hope you continue this novel is the best original I ever seen ...................
hey author are you ok I really loved your story but for some reason the updates have stopped and you haven't even made a single comment in the app since over 9 months ago if you see this just know that it's ok if you don't want to write anymore but could you at least let us know if your ok like still alive
This needs to continue! Please! This needs to continue! Please! This needs to continue! Please! This needs to continue! Please! This needs to continue! Please! This needs to continue! Please! This needs to continue! Please! This needs to continue! Please! This needs to continue! Please! This needs to continue! Please! This needs to continue! Please! This needs to continue! Please! This needs to continue! Please!
Great story but sadly has not updated in a while and I no longer know if it has been dropped or not. Hope it can make a comeback.
I love this story. It’s an amazing story and I have barely any criticisms except the fact that it needs to start UPLOADING AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!! The author just up and left. No reasoning. Nothing. Just disappeared into thin air.
Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back. Come back.
PERFECT. This novel is the best that I've ever seen on this website, and I feel that you would fall in love with it too! I won't say much, but I would definitely recommend you give it a try!!!
Amazing book, barely any grammatical mistakes, story development is wonderful and keeps me hooked, characters are relatable (I mean until they turned into freakin demigods, but personality-wise they are) and make me laugh, and the world design if frick frack a lackin awesome. Only downside is that MY MAN HASN'T UPLOADED IN FIVE MONTHS PLS I NEED MY BOOK CRACK
Well. Here is why I can’t stomach this flawed system of pating for chapters. What happens when the author drops the book? Well you just paid 20 $ for absolutely 0 reason. Webnovel blows (and they dared add ads lol.)
What’s going on? This novel is amazing, but I just realized it hasn’t been updated in 4 months now…. Did something happened to the author?? How come there’s no explanation whatsover😭 Even though seeing the writer’s previous replies to readers, they seem to be really responsive and engaging. I hope the author is doing fine and is just currently taking a break from writing. The author is clearly very talented and the story got so much potential to be amongst the top novels in webnovel, and heck even if this is became an official novel that can be bought in digital and paperback versions. If the author is unwell, please do take your time and rest. We shall patiently wait for your return whenever your ready. Health (both physical and mental) is the top priority. Thank you for all your effort in writing this wonderful piece NightWind. Hope you’re safe and well.🥺🙏
Fantastic novel that has the potential of reaching top 10. Unfortunately the author is inexperienced and seems to be on an unofficial hiatus. Be prepared to have an abrupt and disappointing cliff hanger. Best wishes to the author and hopefully he/she can gain the courage to jump back into this story with a refreshed approach and plenty of new ideas.
I guess this story is now officially dead. Since it's not translated but self written and it stopped in middle of what seemed to be a storyline (not paying premium for a dead book after all). Right now it's 3 months and counting since the last update.
till know i don't understand why stop updating, the story is wonderfull, it has a lot of supporter and its fun. hope you came back . peace and love
Easily the best original novel on the website right now. Yes, I've read the top one's, and the only one that comes close is the Oracle Paths. I won't even try and list the reasons. If you keep trying different novels over and over and face palming, or young kids being sexualized - or characters lacking backbone, or mindless murderers(btw reverend insanity is not the same hehe) etc etc. This is the same high stakes novel with a more reasonable touch instead of whatever other description you want to give to those others. I want to give it a 4.9 because nothing is perfect, but I can't so a 5 will do. To put things into perspective - it's slow(as LOTM was at least in the beginning - also author realized story was a bit on the slow side in recent chapters and already started to adapt) but it flows so well. One of the few novels I look forward to reading. Hopefully the writing quality remains the same.