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why are there so many 5 star reviews? is the author deleting negative reviews or something? this "story" could really use the help of grammarly or an editor it's pretty garbled.
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This is a great book so far and I look forward to the authors work to come. honestly so far the book has been very Original especially for a fanfic and its been building On and to the story instead of just being a run off at like two chapters In so I really like it.
i am giving high marks, i like the story so far, I think there is a few things to be improved, but all in all Author-sama you have gotten my attention ans I really hope you continue the story 😃
im giving an average on this, because it is too early in the story. I will see wwhats next to the story :,). keep on being creative! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
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why are there so many 5 star reviews? is the author deleting negative reviews or something? this "story" could really use the help of grammarly or an editor it's pretty garbled.
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I beg please don’t drop i hate it when they make a really good fan-fic but just drop. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
This is a great book so far and I look forward to the authors work to come. honestly so far the book has been very Original especially for a fanfic and its been building On and to the story instead of just being a run off at like two chapters In so I really like it.
i am giving high marks, i like the story so far, I think there is a few things to be improved, but all in all Author-sama you have gotten my attention ans I really hope you continue the story 😃
im giving an average on this, because it is too early in the story. I will see wwhats next to the story :,). keep on being creative! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
As the author I am obliged to rank my ff a 5 stars review[img=recommend] anyway, atleast read till chapter 10 before deciding to drop it[img=coins][img=coins]