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Write a reviewI like this story. Although, it doesn't feel complete. 😕 Half of it didn't even have the "main" love interest. David and Merston had equal amounts of story time so you could really say that there were three live interests. The ending was open ended in a huge way. Is there more somewhere else? It says completed but you could tell the characters were not fully developed. There was not a single steamy scene in sight. I think the evil aunt got more screen time then the final love interest. The story so far is good so I gave it 5 stars. I probably wouldn't recommend it though because it feels half written and end on a cliff hanger.
I like this story. Although, it doesn't feel complete. 😕 Half of it didn't even have the "main" love interest. David and Merston had equal amounts of story time so you could really say that there were three live interests. The ending was open ended in a huge way. Is there more somewhere else? It says completed but you could tell the characters were not fully developed. There was not a single steamy scene in sight. I think the evil aunt got more screen time then the final love interest. The story so far is good so I gave it 5 stars. I probably wouldn't recommend it though because it feels half written and end on a cliff hanger.