Reviews of Within It's Walls - The Gangleader Wants Me by Marcel4eva - Webnovel

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Lauren_Layton

I like this story. Although, it doesn't feel complete. 😕 Half of it didn't even have the "main" love interest. David and Merston had equal amounts of story time so you could really say that there were three live interests. The ending was open ended in a huge way. Is there more somewhere else? It says completed but you could tell the characters were not fully developed. There was not a single steamy scene in sight. I think the evil aunt got more screen time then the final love interest. The story so far is good so I gave it 5 stars. I probably wouldn't recommend it though because it feels half written and end on a cliff hanger.

11mth
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Estonelle

This book was good .it was just a shame that it got blatantly got dropped at a cliff hanger with no real answers or proper ending. Yes I'm miffed at i was really getting into it. Still worth a read though if your not bothered about an unfinished book

2yr
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Lauren_Layton

I like this story. Although, it doesn't feel complete. 😕 Half of it didn't even have the "main" love interest. David and Merston had equal amounts of story time so you could really say that there were three live interests. The ending was open ended in a huge way. Is there more somewhere else? It says completed but you could tell the characters were not fully developed. There was not a single steamy scene in sight. I think the evil aunt got more screen time then the final love interest. The story so far is good so I gave it 5 stars. I probably wouldn't recommend it though because it feels half written and end on a cliff hanger.

11mth
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Estonelle

This book was good .it was just a shame that it got blatantly got dropped at a cliff hanger with no real answers or proper ending. Yes I'm miffed at i was really getting into it. Still worth a read though if your not bothered about an unfinished book

2yr
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