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the first few chapters are very interesting in some way so you tell by the story itself that world building of this novel is good that you keep wake up just read it , so it's very interesting story
I am growing increasingly impressed with the quality of this Web novel. I have never previously read any of the authors works and as an introduction to their works unlimited power 0.2 has not failed to impress. The character development is amazing and always a surprise. I never truly feel know how the main character is going to progress and attempting to plot the characters actions is almost impossible in some circumstances. The writer also has also built a world which is incredibly interactive. This is a massive win for this novel as it means most if not all chapters have a fair amount of action and I can only count a handful of what I refer to as book filler chapters. The vocabulary in this book is also of a decent standard which shows throughout. The author shows through their use of vocabulary which characters are more intelligent and also to accurately depict the emotions current exhibited by the character. Throughout, the author tries to keep the quality of their writing to a high standard, but unfortunately there are a few obvious mistakes which occur throughout. All in all I would highly recommend this novel to any one who favours fast paced, complex character development and enjoys action with a twist of sci/fi and fantasy. Well done author great work!
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Overall the novel as a whole isn't bad and is enjoyable. (I'm currently at chapter 230 for reference) So far there has been little MC character development other then increasing strength, the side characters get more development then the mc, again, so far. The plot of the story seems well thought out and implemented, but personally to slow for my taste. One problem I'm finding is that it is repetitive without findings ways to increase interest, other then the mc getting stronger, which could also just be considered slow development. There is also more then a few times where proof reading seemed to have been skipped but that could've happend because a the update schedule. Again the Overall story is good while still needing some work, but considering the amount of books published so far(aka experience) it is a good past-time.
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should i read arcane path before this one? or is it alright to skip that and finish this book instead?[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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This really awesome novel one of the best and the character is pretty cool and just the way I like it with his sense of low trust and betrayal from her lover and friends the personality change is really something and the fights and his nastiness is really something. I really recommend it try it guys
Havent even started reading but book has a cool plot------------------------------- ___________________________________________________-----___
Can someone clarify for me if the betrayal of his girlfriend is the typical cheap misunderstanding, and if he forgives her or something? ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,...........................................................................................................................................................................................................
great novel and i recomand it if u have the time, but my question is how the things between him and Alissa progressed? are they together now or they become enemies? pls respond, i need to know and if everything good and they remained just friends, is there anyone in his life, i started this because of the romance tag there so I need to know
well the story is decent, no different than usual with proper pace and imagination but there is no character development and the story is too naive. i guess that the story progresses decently even with the naivety but even that feels naive to me.
I give it a three, I'm only up to chapter 21 and the novel has been pretty good so far. My reason for 3 stars, the chapters are really short and if that's any indicator I could see the novel having an expectation to spend a lot of free passes or actual money to read the whole novel. Very much the case where at least 5 chapters could have been reduced to 1 chapter. Yeah no thanks
the book is interesting, but the mc personality is annoying... ( oh my fiancee cheated me, now i don't believe in anyone bcs everyone could betray me...)
A curiosity will change race or remain human? . . . . . .................................. .
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well... this is quite the taste for a novel in this app but here's my thoughts. For the first chapter, it's well done and goes to the rest of the chapter. But the story always keep on tension, I can't get relaxed while reading this. And the story tells every bit of action done by the mc without giving any chance for a small time skip to progress to the main story even though I bet the author think that how it's supposedly done. At the end, this novel is good for those need in action story and the mc is cold-blooded while not to the core.
Hα» thα»ng nΓ’ng cαΊ₯p sα»©a mαΊ‘nh mα»i lαΊ‘. cΓ‘c cuα»c chiαΊΏn khΓ³ gay cαΊ₯n vΓ Δủ khΓ³ khαΊ―n cho MC. xΓ’y dα»±ng thαΊΏ giα»i giα»ng cΓ‘c tΓ‘c phαΊ©m Drungon khΓ‘c của hΓ n Quα»c
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GΓΌzel roman I recommend the beautiful novel to everyone, and for those looking for a dungeon master novel, I think there are dungeon master events in the advanced sections. (I used google translate)[img=recommend]
Before I dropped this, I thought I should make a review of why. The writing quality is good. Easy to understand. The development of the story is not so okay for me. It was just the MC, meeting survivors, conflicted if he should save them or not, in the end he will still save them. Character design, is pretty much nonexistent. The MC, doesn't develop his character. He's a self righteous man (I wanted to say the word B but that doesn't seem proper). He contradicts himself at every turn. He said he wants to be alone, but at every chapter, he's either with some survivor or some survivor. I have a long list of complaints of this but I won't detail that much. Updating stability, don't know but with the number of chapters the stability of updating looks good. World background, the settings was super slowly being revealed. The monsters, the why's, etc. I would have rated this 2 stars but since I like some aspects of the story I rated it 3 stars.
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the first few chapters are very interesting in some way so you tell by the story itself that world building of this novel is good that you keep wake up just read it , so it's very interesting story
I am growing increasingly impressed with the quality of this Web novel. I have never previously read any of the authors works and as an introduction to their works unlimited power 0.2 has not failed to impress. The character development is amazing and always a surprise. I never truly feel know how the main character is going to progress and attempting to plot the characters actions is almost impossible in some circumstances. The writer also has also built a world which is incredibly interactive. This is a massive win for this novel as it means most if not all chapters have a fair amount of action and I can only count a handful of what I refer to as book filler chapters. The vocabulary in this book is also of a decent standard which shows throughout. The author shows through their use of vocabulary which characters are more intelligent and also to accurately depict the emotions current exhibited by the character. Throughout, the author tries to keep the quality of their writing to a high standard, but unfortunately there are a few obvious mistakes which occur throughout. All in all I would highly recommend this novel to any one who favours fast paced, complex character development and enjoys action with a twist of sci/fi and fantasy. Well done author great work!
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Overall the novel as a whole isn't bad and is enjoyable. (I'm currently at chapter 230 for reference) So far there has been little MC character development other then increasing strength, the side characters get more development then the mc, again, so far. The plot of the story seems well thought out and implemented, but personally to slow for my taste. One problem I'm finding is that it is repetitive without findings ways to increase interest, other then the mc getting stronger, which could also just be considered slow development. There is also more then a few times where proof reading seemed to have been skipped but that could've happend because a the update schedule. Again the Overall story is good while still needing some work, but considering the amount of books published so far(aka experience) it is a good past-time.
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should i read arcane path before this one? or is it alright to skip that and finish this book instead?[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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This really awesome novel one of the best and the character is pretty cool and just the way I like it with his sense of low trust and betrayal from her lover and friends the personality change is really something and the fights and his nastiness is really something. I really recommend it try it guys
Havent even started reading but book has a cool plot------------------------------- ___________________________________________________-----___
Can someone clarify for me if the betrayal of his girlfriend is the typical cheap misunderstanding, and if he forgives her or something? ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,...........................................................................................................................................................................................................
great novel and i recomand it if u have the time, but my question is how the things between him and Alissa progressed? are they together now or they become enemies? pls respond, i need to know and if everything good and they remained just friends, is there anyone in his life, i started this because of the romance tag there so I need to know
well the story is decent, no different than usual with proper pace and imagination but there is no character development and the story is too naive. i guess that the story progresses decently even with the naivety but even that feels naive to me.
I give it a three, I'm only up to chapter 21 and the novel has been pretty good so far. My reason for 3 stars, the chapters are really short and if that's any indicator I could see the novel having an expectation to spend a lot of free passes or actual money to read the whole novel. Very much the case where at least 5 chapters could have been reduced to 1 chapter. Yeah no thanks
the book is interesting, but the mc personality is annoying... ( oh my fiancee cheated me, now i don't believe in anyone bcs everyone could betray me...)
A curiosity will change race or remain human? . . . . . .................................. .
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well... this is quite the taste for a novel in this app but here's my thoughts. For the first chapter, it's well done and goes to the rest of the chapter. But the story always keep on tension, I can't get relaxed while reading this. And the story tells every bit of action done by the mc without giving any chance for a small time skip to progress to the main story even though I bet the author think that how it's supposedly done. At the end, this novel is good for those need in action story and the mc is cold-blooded while not to the core.
Hα» thα»ng nΓ’ng cαΊ₯p sα»©a mαΊ‘nh mα»i lαΊ‘. cΓ‘c cuα»c chiαΊΏn khΓ³ gay cαΊ₯n vΓ Δủ khΓ³ khαΊ―n cho MC. xΓ’y dα»±ng thαΊΏ giα»i giα»ng cΓ‘c tΓ‘c phαΊ©m Drungon khΓ‘c của hΓ n Quα»c
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GΓΌzel roman I recommend the beautiful novel to everyone, and for those looking for a dungeon master novel, I think there are dungeon master events in the advanced sections. (I used google translate)[img=recommend]
Before I dropped this, I thought I should make a review of why. The writing quality is good. Easy to understand. The development of the story is not so okay for me. It was just the MC, meeting survivors, conflicted if he should save them or not, in the end he will still save them. Character design, is pretty much nonexistent. The MC, doesn't develop his character. He's a self righteous man (I wanted to say the word B but that doesn't seem proper). He contradicts himself at every turn. He said he wants to be alone, but at every chapter, he's either with some survivor or some survivor. I have a long list of complaints of this but I won't detail that much. Updating stability, don't know but with the number of chapters the stability of updating looks good. World background, the settings was super slowly being revealed. The monsters, the why's, etc. I would have rated this 2 stars but since I like some aspects of the story I rated it 3 stars.