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Echii and Harem................................................................................................................................................................................
Story Development is not bad, but definitely could've been a lot better. For example, he was always afraid of making the MC too OP, so he always held back the maximum amount of upgrades the MC could get. I mean why? The MC is OP already. What's the point in slowing him down anymore? Might as well explore how much he could upgrade his power through Hammon. It might make the story even more interesting and the MC less like a Jotaro's ripoff. However, that is not the most terrible aspect of this story. The most terrible is still the way the Author got his life philosophy to mixup with his MC's characterization. It is so bad that at one point, he even fought with his readers over it in his comment section. Another thing that bugs me is that the author doesn't work on his vocab and his grammar. So many novels and still so many REPETITIVE mistakes. Either the author is trolling or has terrible IQ or being intentionally dense. Honestly if it is the last one, it is one of the worst reasons for him to approach his own story. Since he did that to spite his supporters and readers, which only hurts him in the long run. His reader/viewership-count is down, less support from people actually care about his novels, and losing readers and supporters overtime. Overall, the story is ok for a fanfiction. It is a good story to just turn off your brain and have fun. Still, you gotta give props to the author because he is one of the best at writing action sequences. Rating 3.2 stars (2/3/3/5/3) -> story finished, gimmicks focused(Jojo,Stand,hammon,etc.), grammar is terrible, and good fight scenes. Would recommend to someone, who is expecting Michael Bay-ish kinda story (sexy females, explosive action, explosion, etc.)
It is not bad, I like it, and the story development was okay, I read this after it was completed, so I can't judge the updating stability, but keep up the good work author 👍
I love it. You just have to stop rushing the ending of your books that's it
It's an extremely good story but the words are a bit scrambled you can figure out the meaning pretty easily though. all in all enjoyable read.
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Okayish, gave it a try (even though i hate jjba and its fanbase) and somewhat enjoyed the first 50+ chapters, the mc's personality is unbelievably annoying though, that's why i dropped.
Story is fine, start was good as well but, MC personality is a deal-breaker. Like he is super arrogant. Tries to forcefully act cool, act as if he is guilty for liking another woman when he already has girlfriend. Basically ;- MC Bad Story Good Harem Bad
nah. For some reason, I don't like how he wasn't arrested after breaking the law by using his power in public without a hero license. after all, the law should be a Quirk is allowed to use in self defense.
To be honest, I'm only giving it a 5-star review due to it being THE ONLY my hero fanfic that crosses over with JJBA. I'm sure that most of the other good reviews were from JoJo fans aswell, but nonetheless, I expect great things from this book if the ratings are anything to go by.
The story itself is very good but still i dropped it halfway because the unnecessary harem really ruins it.
I love it ................ ................ ................ ................................ ................ ................ ................................ ................ ................ ................
What a journey This was quite an enjoyable read One if not the best i read so far
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
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They will see, we'll fight until eternity Come with me, we'll stand and fight together Through our strength we'll make a better day tomorrow We shall never surrender
This was a solid fanfiction for both My Hero Academia and JoJo's Bizarre Adventure. The pacing, fights and dialogue were enjoyable. Especially the dialogue. The MC is basically a copy of Jotaro Kujo, but it is done well enough that you don't think of him as Jotaro Kujo but the MC. He also had some cool lines, such as when he asked a villain how many 'ORA's he wanted. Overall I'd recommend reading it if you like JJBA or MHA. Just skip the harem bits though because they get a bit annoying after a while.
I have really enjoyed this fan-fic I recommend it to anyone who wants to read a good book 📙 [img=recommend]😁🥳🤯😎😈❤️🔥💯🤘👍 💯
This one is one of the best I have seen in MHA fanfic. Author's idea of humor might not be that good but his way of fusing the jojo into this really grabbing my reading time and I really love how the MC is shared his power with his women without him getting weak. Thank you author for writing such a good fanfic and thank you for all the good time when I reading this master piece.
Well I'll use the translator here. Congratulations. Congratulations to the author for this very well written story quite coherent in what they propose to offer. There's no big plot hole; the harem is cool. It's not a collection of every possible girl in the cast. That's nice. The novel in general has a coherent construction even if it's not the best I've read, it's one of the best in terms of fan-fic. Which is quite rare for this genre. Overall, I don't have much to complain about, I hope the author's future works will be as consistent if not better. Congratulations 🎉🎉🎉👏👏👏.
Echii and Harem................................................................................................................................................................................
Story Development is not bad, but definitely could've been a lot better. For example, he was always afraid of making the MC too OP, so he always held back the maximum amount of upgrades the MC could get. I mean why? The MC is OP already. What's the point in slowing him down anymore? Might as well explore how much he could upgrade his power through Hammon. It might make the story even more interesting and the MC less like a Jotaro's ripoff. However, that is not the most terrible aspect of this story. The most terrible is still the way the Author got his life philosophy to mixup with his MC's characterization. It is so bad that at one point, he even fought with his readers over it in his comment section. Another thing that bugs me is that the author doesn't work on his vocab and his grammar. So many novels and still so many REPETITIVE mistakes. Either the author is trolling or has terrible IQ or being intentionally dense. Honestly if it is the last one, it is one of the worst reasons for him to approach his own story. Since he did that to spite his supporters and readers, which only hurts him in the long run. His reader/viewership-count is down, less support from people actually care about his novels, and losing readers and supporters overtime. Overall, the story is ok for a fanfiction. It is a good story to just turn off your brain and have fun. Still, you gotta give props to the author because he is one of the best at writing action sequences. Rating 3.2 stars (2/3/3/5/3) -> story finished, gimmicks focused(Jojo,Stand,hammon,etc.), grammar is terrible, and good fight scenes. Would recommend to someone, who is expecting Michael Bay-ish kinda story (sexy females, explosive action, explosion, etc.)
It is not bad, I like it, and the story development was okay, I read this after it was completed, so I can't judge the updating stability, but keep up the good work author 👍
I love it. You just have to stop rushing the ending of your books that's it
It's an extremely good story but the words are a bit scrambled you can figure out the meaning pretty easily though. all in all enjoyable read.
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Okayish, gave it a try (even though i hate jjba and its fanbase) and somewhat enjoyed the first 50+ chapters, the mc's personality is unbelievably annoying though, that's why i dropped.
Story is fine, start was good as well but, MC personality is a deal-breaker. Like he is super arrogant. Tries to forcefully act cool, act as if he is guilty for liking another woman when he already has girlfriend. Basically ;- MC Bad Story Good Harem Bad
nah. For some reason, I don't like how he wasn't arrested after breaking the law by using his power in public without a hero license. after all, the law should be a Quirk is allowed to use in self defense.
To be honest, I'm only giving it a 5-star review due to it being THE ONLY my hero fanfic that crosses over with JJBA. I'm sure that most of the other good reviews were from JoJo fans aswell, but nonetheless, I expect great things from this book if the ratings are anything to go by.
The story itself is very good but still i dropped it halfway because the unnecessary harem really ruins it.
I love it ................ ................ ................ ................................ ................ ................ ................................ ................ ................ ................
What a journey This was quite an enjoyable read One if not the best i read so far
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️ ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️10outta10✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️
They will see, we'll fight until eternity Come with me, we'll stand and fight together Through our strength we'll make a better day tomorrow We shall never surrender
This was a solid fanfiction for both My Hero Academia and JoJo's Bizarre Adventure. The pacing, fights and dialogue were enjoyable. Especially the dialogue. The MC is basically a copy of Jotaro Kujo, but it is done well enough that you don't think of him as Jotaro Kujo but the MC. He also had some cool lines, such as when he asked a villain how many 'ORA's he wanted. Overall I'd recommend reading it if you like JJBA or MHA. Just skip the harem bits though because they get a bit annoying after a while.
I have really enjoyed this fan-fic I recommend it to anyone who wants to read a good book 📙 [img=recommend]😁🥳🤯😎😈❤️🔥💯🤘👍 💯
This one is one of the best I have seen in MHA fanfic. Author's idea of humor might not be that good but his way of fusing the jojo into this really grabbing my reading time and I really love how the MC is shared his power with his women without him getting weak. Thank you author for writing such a good fanfic and thank you for all the good time when I reading this master piece.
Well I'll use the translator here. Congratulations. Congratulations to the author for this very well written story quite coherent in what they propose to offer. There's no big plot hole; the harem is cool. It's not a collection of every possible girl in the cast. That's nice. The novel in general has a coherent construction even if it's not the best I've read, it's one of the best in terms of fan-fic. Which is quite rare for this genre. Overall, I don't have much to complain about, I hope the author's future works will be as consistent if not better. Congratulations 🎉🎉🎉👏👏👏.
Apoyo total a MC X Julia, pero no estaría nada mal un especial con Fuyuni 🤠🤠