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Nothing surprising, I'm going to give this particular story a 5 stars rating. Not only because it is an excellent story, but also because I want to give a little support to the author. Not that I want to sound dramatic, but this novel is surprisingly one of the best pokémon fan-fics of this website. Which honestly, there's only 3 or 4 stories here that are actually decent. The protagonist, Jay, is a well written and charismatic MC that everyone will enjoy acompanying. The fact he has an actual personality, weaknesses and thoughts already makes him stand out from the majority of the MCs from webnovel. And if you're one of those readers that particularly dislikes overpowered protagonists and dumbass cheats, like me, then this story is definitely for you. Despite Jay receiving some advantages, they aren't overpowered neither does Jay relies on them for everything, completely different from... Well... 98% of the MCs of fan-fics xD. The author also got to include well written side-characters and antagonists that makes the story richer and more fun to read. So, you won't need to worry about losing IQ if you decide to pick this fic. And also, another excellent point of this story. The author clearly knows how pokémon works, both in reality and in the games, the way he manages to blend well those two concepts is already one of the major selling points of this story. And oh of course, we can't forget the fact that the MC's team is unique, properly balanced and stands out from all the pokémon fics I've read by this point. Also + 2, the author is a pretty decent person :) Keep up the good work, author!
over all a very good story in depth on world background and great story so far love the mc and his pokemons personalities and so far like gregory hope that ur not ganna end up dropping cuz im adding this story to my library looking forward to the end of your hiatus
Better than most of the pokemon fan-fics I've read and suggest reading it. My favorite pokemon fan fic so far. question for author: Did you drop the fanfic?
It's a good take on the pokemon world. hope mc plays both sides well. just don't like the fact that he thinks he can kill oak that's just overconfidence and retarded
I don’t know about what others aay but this is one of the best fanfics I’ve ever read. Among POKEMON fanfics this is the Best uptodate!!! Character is not OP Has a very good head on his shoulders and a reasonable,caring one. Story develops in a very satisfying way World description is great
Dunno just checks my major mark(Talent System) and minor mark(Team Rocket). Also others like it. So its getting 5 stars for now. Once I am up to date I might change it. I hope I won't.
This is really interesting and i really enjoy the premise. The characters are interesting and i like how we aren’t being bombarded with Canon and Main Characters all over.
So how do I start this? I will first say that I like the story and think that it is one of the best Pokemon fanfic on this site. But even though I think so, I have a few problems with the story that bother me. Although this is only my personal opinion and probably for the person who reads this thinks maybe different about these "problems". I don't want to write too much so I'll tell you my biggest problems here. "Although the story is still very good" 1: I personally don't like it when the plot is so noticeable and clichéd. I have read a many, many fanfinc and novel so that I can say that I can see many of the same patterns. It feels like the novel can't surprise me, which bothers me personally. 2: I find it strange that the team won't have any pokemon from the first 2 pokemon parts. If you want unique Pokemon you can find them in every gen. I also find this way of thinking is a bit weird. why don't you take the Pokemon you like the most and which fit well into the story? It would be cooler if you had 1 Pokemon or 2 of each gen. 3: My biggest point is that I can't help but compare it to "THE RISE OF DARK POKEMONS". Although the story is not the same, they have enough similarities that I subconsciously compare them. Especially because they both start with a trial island (I think this idea comes from The Charm of Soul Pets). And because I always compare it, I like Dark Pokemon or The Charm of Soul Pets better in almost all things. hopefully i will change my opinion in the next ark. But even with my personal problems, I think the story is very good. It's just not completely my tea.
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I like how you made him a psychic. The selection of Pokemon is something I haven't seen before so that's cool.
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One of the best Pokemon stories ive read. great plot, amazing character development and an interesting diferent perspective on how tge pokemon world works.
Overall a great pokemon story from the point of view of a reincarnated orphan that was forced into joining team rocket. The pokemon interactions are quite good with some pokemons having a great backstory. I can't wait for more and how he interacts with the people in the 'light' while on the team rocket.
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I have had a great time reading this fanfic so far. It is well written, and I hope you continue the good work. Good luck!
long chapters nice fight scenes the story gets better over time. you can feel the quality improving. LaterLaterLaterLaterLaterLaterLaterLaterLater
keep up the good work. one of the best! yohooooo! good luck! thank you very much! it is very very great. random letters in 3. 2. 1. djririrkekefifjfkfkdkrkrkrkrkrk widjdjfjedjxjcndjdkxjdjdjxjdjd
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This is one of the best fanfic I have been reading lately. I hope the author doesn't drop this, a keeps going. You are doing a very good job. I recommend everyone to read this.
Writin' Quality: 5/5 So bootiful Not alot of spelling mistakes and any Wrong the grammar, I expect great shit from this. Character Development: 5/5 Very noice that the is Mc Smart, At makin' Decisions which is noice, Then Next to ma boy Gregory, Very Cinnamon roll like very nice that you made this type of character. Then to duke, I like the fact that this bitch is a sociopath/Psychopath and thats it for him, Not kaiser yet nothing has been explored on his background yet. Story Development: 5/5 Very nice its at a medium Pace going fast and slow at the same time and i thank the author for makin' Some backgrounds upon characters. Updating Stability: 5/5 Uploadin' Almost every day. Lore Wise: 5/5 This story develops some good lore as the mc Becomes and undercover, Very nice indeed and Im pretty sure pokemon lovers would like this. P.s this is my first proper review.
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worthy of the Hidden Gem tag. kukuku. it is one of the best pokemon team rocket pov that i have saw. great wrok. please keep up the good work. author-nim.
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Review after 18 chapters Kinda too early to give a review, but excellent story so far. Has a lot of potential to be an epic fanfic. I just hope the author keeps on releasing chapters regularly and doesn't drop midway. I'll drop another review (if story goes on for 100+ chapters) So far the MC is shown to be very realistic, the world of Pokémon is described very realistically. And MC is smart (not super smart) and has a lot of common sense too. Chp 18 released the first bad guy, but even he acted very smart (very cruel, but smart nonetheless). So lots of hopes from this fanfic.
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I will rate myself a five star. No reasons, simply because it's my book. I hope you guys enjoy it. I will use different Pokemon that are rarely used on fanfics and won't restrict it to Kanto or Jhoto regions.
Nothing surprising, I'm going to give this particular story a 5 stars rating. Not only because it is an excellent story, but also because I want to give a little support to the author. Not that I want to sound dramatic, but this novel is surprisingly one of the best pokémon fan-fics of this website. Which honestly, there's only 3 or 4 stories here that are actually decent. The protagonist, Jay, is a well written and charismatic MC that everyone will enjoy acompanying. The fact he has an actual personality, weaknesses and thoughts already makes him stand out from the majority of the MCs from webnovel. And if you're one of those readers that particularly dislikes overpowered protagonists and dumbass cheats, like me, then this story is definitely for you. Despite Jay receiving some advantages, they aren't overpowered neither does Jay relies on them for everything, completely different from... Well... 98% of the MCs of fan-fics xD. The author also got to include well written side-characters and antagonists that makes the story richer and more fun to read. So, you won't need to worry about losing IQ if you decide to pick this fic. And also, another excellent point of this story. The author clearly knows how pokémon works, both in reality and in the games, the way he manages to blend well those two concepts is already one of the major selling points of this story. And oh of course, we can't forget the fact that the MC's team is unique, properly balanced and stands out from all the pokémon fics I've read by this point. Also + 2, the author is a pretty decent person :) Keep up the good work, author!
over all a very good story in depth on world background and great story so far love the mc and his pokemons personalities and so far like gregory hope that ur not ganna end up dropping cuz im adding this story to my library looking forward to the end of your hiatus
Better than most of the pokemon fan-fics I've read and suggest reading it. My favorite pokemon fan fic so far. question for author: Did you drop the fanfic?
It's a good take on the pokemon world. hope mc plays both sides well. just don't like the fact that he thinks he can kill oak that's just overconfidence and retarded
I don’t know about what others aay but this is one of the best fanfics I’ve ever read. Among POKEMON fanfics this is the Best uptodate!!! Character is not OP Has a very good head on his shoulders and a reasonable,caring one. Story develops in a very satisfying way World description is great
Dunno just checks my major mark(Talent System) and minor mark(Team Rocket). Also others like it. So its getting 5 stars for now. Once I am up to date I might change it. I hope I won't.
This is really interesting and i really enjoy the premise. The characters are interesting and i like how we aren’t being bombarded with Canon and Main Characters all over.
So how do I start this? I will first say that I like the story and think that it is one of the best Pokemon fanfic on this site. But even though I think so, I have a few problems with the story that bother me. Although this is only my personal opinion and probably for the person who reads this thinks maybe different about these "problems". I don't want to write too much so I'll tell you my biggest problems here. "Although the story is still very good" 1: I personally don't like it when the plot is so noticeable and clichéd. I have read a many, many fanfinc and novel so that I can say that I can see many of the same patterns. It feels like the novel can't surprise me, which bothers me personally. 2: I find it strange that the team won't have any pokemon from the first 2 pokemon parts. If you want unique Pokemon you can find them in every gen. I also find this way of thinking is a bit weird. why don't you take the Pokemon you like the most and which fit well into the story? It would be cooler if you had 1 Pokemon or 2 of each gen. 3: My biggest point is that I can't help but compare it to "THE RISE OF DARK POKEMONS". Although the story is not the same, they have enough similarities that I subconsciously compare them. Especially because they both start with a trial island (I think this idea comes from The Charm of Soul Pets). And because I always compare it, I like Dark Pokemon or The Charm of Soul Pets better in almost all things. hopefully i will change my opinion in the next ark. But even with my personal problems, I think the story is very good. It's just not completely my tea.
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I like how you made him a psychic. The selection of Pokemon is something I haven't seen before so that's cool.
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One of the best Pokemon stories ive read. great plot, amazing character development and an interesting diferent perspective on how tge pokemon world works.
Overall a great pokemon story from the point of view of a reincarnated orphan that was forced into joining team rocket. The pokemon interactions are quite good with some pokemons having a great backstory. I can't wait for more and how he interacts with the people in the 'light' while on the team rocket.
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I have had a great time reading this fanfic so far. It is well written, and I hope you continue the good work. Good luck!
long chapters nice fight scenes the story gets better over time. you can feel the quality improving. LaterLaterLaterLaterLaterLaterLaterLaterLater
keep up the good work. one of the best! yohooooo! good luck! thank you very much! it is very very great. random letters in 3. 2. 1. djririrkekefifjfkfkdkrkrkrkrkrk widjdjfjedjxjcndjdkxjdjdjxjdjd
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This is one of the best fanfic I have been reading lately. I hope the author doesn't drop this, a keeps going. You are doing a very good job. I recommend everyone to read this.
Writin' Quality: 5/5 So bootiful Not alot of spelling mistakes and any Wrong the grammar, I expect great shit from this. Character Development: 5/5 Very noice that the is Mc Smart, At makin' Decisions which is noice, Then Next to ma boy Gregory, Very Cinnamon roll like very nice that you made this type of character. Then to duke, I like the fact that this bitch is a sociopath/Psychopath and thats it for him, Not kaiser yet nothing has been explored on his background yet. Story Development: 5/5 Very nice its at a medium Pace going fast and slow at the same time and i thank the author for makin' Some backgrounds upon characters. Updating Stability: 5/5 Uploadin' Almost every day. Lore Wise: 5/5 This story develops some good lore as the mc Becomes and undercover, Very nice indeed and Im pretty sure pokemon lovers would like this. P.s this is my first proper review.
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worthy of the Hidden Gem tag. kukuku. it is one of the best pokemon team rocket pov that i have saw. great wrok. please keep up the good work. author-nim.
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Review after 18 chapters Kinda too early to give a review, but excellent story so far. Has a lot of potential to be an epic fanfic. I just hope the author keeps on releasing chapters regularly and doesn't drop midway. I'll drop another review (if story goes on for 100+ chapters) So far the MC is shown to be very realistic, the world of Pokémon is described very realistically. And MC is smart (not super smart) and has a lot of common sense too. Chp 18 released the first bad guy, but even he acted very smart (very cruel, but smart nonetheless). So lots of hopes from this fanfic.
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I will rate myself a five star. No reasons, simply because it's my book. I hope you guys enjoy it. I will use different Pokemon that are rarely used on fanfics and won't restrict it to Kanto or Jhoto regions.