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chapter 45 - (the biggest garbage I've ever read). Seriously, I want to talk - seal your dad's ass. chapter 45 - (the biggest garbage I've ever read). Seriously, I want to talk - seal your dad's ass. chapter 45 - (the biggest garbage I've ever read). Seriously, I want to talk - seal your dad's ass.
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I have only read 6 chapters but i m loving this fanfic. Keep posting. I got some ideas by reading your novel and want to apply it in my fanfic writing. Hope you dont mind. If you do... message me.. i will put it down
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i've read dozens of pokemon fan fiction and this is one of the best overall Most pokemon novels tends to be dropped and i hope this isnt one of them
A nice story with good out of the box idea on how to start a pokemon novel. I really am not a fan of fanfics where you have to start at the beginning with plots that you will know that will eventually happen.
a good well written story. i hope you don't drop it. ......................................................................................
Ive also read The lost master trilogy its great but this fanfic has the potential to be greater since youve included one of the Pokemon that People wAnt to see go back with ash and thats Greninja. keep up the good work ill be rooting for you
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This badass Ash is very cool , strong and finaly using his brain. This story is showing a mature Ash. But Δ± donβt now how is this story continues after the tournament. Besides that it is great.
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It's just a good start..., if you like some pokemon fanfic whit a good character and would building. Just try it β΅(ΰΉΒ―β‘Β―ΰΉ) ..................................!!!
this book has 14 chp but I can already tell it will become one of my most favorite fanfics. Also, it has very few if none grammar issues.
I am loving this book. I hope you keep up the great work.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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chapter 45 - (the biggest garbage I've ever read). Seriously, I want to talk - seal your dad's ass. chapter 45 - (the biggest garbage I've ever read). Seriously, I want to talk - seal your dad's ass. chapter 45 - (the biggest garbage I've ever read). Seriously, I want to talk - seal your dad's ass.
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I have only read 6 chapters but i m loving this fanfic. Keep posting. I got some ideas by reading your novel and want to apply it in my fanfic writing. Hope you dont mind. If you do... message me.. i will put it down
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i've read dozens of pokemon fan fiction and this is one of the best overall Most pokemon novels tends to be dropped and i hope this isnt one of them
A nice story with good out of the box idea on how to start a pokemon novel. I really am not a fan of fanfics where you have to start at the beginning with plots that you will know that will eventually happen.
a good well written story. i hope you don't drop it. ......................................................................................
Ive also read The lost master trilogy its great but this fanfic has the potential to be greater since youve included one of the Pokemon that People wAnt to see go back with ash and thats Greninja. keep up the good work ill be rooting for you
mas mas mas mas mas ams mas mas mas mas ams amsdubcuwbeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeecheeeee333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
This badass Ash is very cool , strong and finaly using his brain. This story is showing a mature Ash. But Δ± donβt now how is this story continues after the tournament. Besides that it is great.
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It's just a good start..., if you like some pokemon fanfic whit a good character and would building. Just try it β΅(ΰΉΒ―β‘Β―ΰΉ) ..................................!!!
this book has 14 chp but I can already tell it will become one of my most favorite fanfics. Also, it has very few if none grammar issues.
I am loving this book. I hope you keep up the great work.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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