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Hi! This is doris, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
It's a trap.................................................. Probably a trap........................................ Definitely a trap....................................... it's all i can say for this story after reading 10 chap for Exp+++++++++++++++++++
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Good and interesting book. Captivates its reader with a fresh and amazing plot. Hooks you right from the first chapter . It is a book worth checking out guys.
Did it surprise you that I gave it five star, then don't be . The book is worth it doubt read and find out. Good job author cant wait for more updates from you.
I've always been a sucker for the good vs evil stories, and this one certainly didn't disappoint. Writing quality is pretty good, and I totally recommend this
The writer just made me attracted to this book like a magnet, I honestly just started reading the book but even the beginning is amazing, a big thumbs up to the writer.
Yeah I gave a 5 star review because the book is worth it, so give it a trial. The author captivates you with her plot , her characters and the story line is fresh giving you something to read that hasn't been over produced
The first thing I like about this is the fact that it is a fresh, new concept which is refreshing since a lot of things in web novels are recycled things but the author still needs a bit of time to flesh everything out. Good luck!
This is pretty interesting, plot is good, though not my favorite genre. Keep writing I'm sure it will be great! (BTW what's YULETIDE? Don't understand the name)
The synopsis itself will arouse your curiosity making you want to read more. Great novel, keep up the good work. I'll be waiting for more chapters
The story is fresh and has an interesting plot, as the author I tried to put in dept in my characters, and the story line is one that is not common. I hope you guys checks it out and also live a review.
intriguing storyline, amazing chracter presentation, a good fantasy mixed with little crubs of reality. an excellent book .... keep writing .
The book is interesting, the author did an amazing job with the characters and the story line and also I like as the story has a fresh story line that we are not used to reading. Keep it up author
This story though my first story in this site is worth reading. Likes how the author portrays her characters, and the way the story flows . I will just say that it is a book worth giving a chance and I promise you won't be disappointed.
Good plot, interesting story line, good character development. Hooks the reader from the first chapter. Likes the way the author despicts her characters and the flow of the story line perfect. Looking forward to more updates from the author. Kudos, keep it up
The book is interesting hooks it's readers with the plot, and flow of her words right from the beginning. It is a book worth giving a chance.
a great read. writing could be a little be improved cause I was getting confused that some dialogue weren't mark. And Im always kinda lost whenever the characters especially the chosen ones are introduced. all in all I enjoy reading it. the story really gives you the "what happens next I want to know what happens next?" vibes
Hi! This is doris, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
It's a trap.................................................. Probably a trap........................................ Definitely a trap....................................... it's all i can say for this story after reading 10 chap for Exp+++++++++++++++++++
Reveal Spoiler $115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels! + Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing contest! This contest is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi, but if you haven’t worked on these genres, that’s TOTALLY FINE! You can refer to the given examples and tips to develop a new story. As all new stories can get cash rewards, this might be your chance to begin your writing career and start to make a living by writing! Not to mention that you can take your chance to win the big cash and get your books published in hardcover! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact kerawood.review@gmail.com
Good and interesting book. Captivates its reader with a fresh and amazing plot. Hooks you right from the first chapter . It is a book worth checking out guys.
Did it surprise you that I gave it five star, then don't be . The book is worth it doubt read and find out. Good job author cant wait for more updates from you.
I've always been a sucker for the good vs evil stories, and this one certainly didn't disappoint. Writing quality is pretty good, and I totally recommend this
The writer just made me attracted to this book like a magnet, I honestly just started reading the book but even the beginning is amazing, a big thumbs up to the writer.
Yeah I gave a 5 star review because the book is worth it, so give it a trial. The author captivates you with her plot , her characters and the story line is fresh giving you something to read that hasn't been over produced
The first thing I like about this is the fact that it is a fresh, new concept which is refreshing since a lot of things in web novels are recycled things but the author still needs a bit of time to flesh everything out. Good luck!
This is pretty interesting, plot is good, though not my favorite genre. Keep writing I'm sure it will be great! (BTW what's YULETIDE? Don't understand the name)
The synopsis itself will arouse your curiosity making you want to read more. Great novel, keep up the good work. I'll be waiting for more chapters
The story is fresh and has an interesting plot, as the author I tried to put in dept in my characters, and the story line is one that is not common. I hope you guys checks it out and also live a review.
intriguing storyline, amazing chracter presentation, a good fantasy mixed with little crubs of reality. an excellent book .... keep writing .
The book is interesting, the author did an amazing job with the characters and the story line and also I like as the story has a fresh story line that we are not used to reading. Keep it up author
This story though my first story in this site is worth reading. Likes how the author portrays her characters, and the way the story flows . I will just say that it is a book worth giving a chance and I promise you won't be disappointed.
Good plot, interesting story line, good character development. Hooks the reader from the first chapter. Likes the way the author despicts her characters and the flow of the story line perfect. Looking forward to more updates from the author. Kudos, keep it up
The book is interesting hooks it's readers with the plot, and flow of her words right from the beginning. It is a book worth giving a chance.
a great read. writing could be a little be improved cause I was getting confused that some dialogue weren't mark. And Im always kinda lost whenever the characters especially the chosen ones are introduced. all in all I enjoy reading it. the story really gives you the "what happens next I want to know what happens next?" vibes