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It's ok I guess. The grammar is decent and readable but not great. A little interesting in the way that he isn't a noble but cliche all the same. No notable qualities or mistakes so I am going to say this is just average. Only three chapters though could get better in the future.
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I am not one to discourage people to stop writing, so go on with it and do your thing, but, honestly, this is weird cringe shit..........bye, I guess 🥴🥴🥴
It's ok I guess. The grammar is decent and readable but not great. A little interesting in the way that he isn't a noble but cliche all the same. No notable qualities or mistakes so I am going to say this is just average. Only three chapters though could get better in the future.
Reveal Spoiler
I am not one to discourage people to stop writing, so go on with it and do your thing, but, honestly, this is weird cringe shit..........bye, I guess 🥴🥴🥴