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A nice story. I love the construction of your story it has potential in it and it's sure bound to have a good rating from me. Write more and explore your mind more.
The story has potential, but there are a few things that should be noted by the author. Firstly, punctuation. You barely use any punctuation in dialogues! It makes the story less attractive and interesting though it can be fixed. Secondly, the synopsis. Don't you think it's too short? Just maybe add a few more things to make it a bit clearer. Feel free to disagree!
Welcome back Joecurie💜 I'm glad to see you came up with a nice storyline and one with suspense. Don't relent at what you do best, breakthrough soon Keep it up 💯
I'm loving the way you give suspense in your story it showed you understand how you want your story line to look like. It's great keep it up and I'm sure you had become a good writer in no time 💚💚
It's been a while but I hope you had be back with a really nice and captivating continuous story. Give the best you can and never stop pushing,I'm definitely sure you are gonna be great💯💯💯
Hey! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom@gmail.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
This is author has the makings of a good writer in a couple years. Your work is captivating and very enjoyable. I can't wait to digest everything you have to offer with it.
Reading your chapter 14,you got me there.. lol It has suspense and the story line is creative😎I wish too see more characters you had input into the book Nice one❤️
Nice story... beautiful story development. You have the potential to become a great writer❤️ Keep writing and you will get there ... Don't stop updating.
I'm quite interested in this story and feel you should keep it up....the storyline is creative and magnificent. Please,update more often....I give a good rating
Wow!!! I love the starting point of this novel💯 it's more original and amazing to read. Please update more... you will make a good writer 😉 😎✨❤️💯🥰
I see potentials of you becoming a great writer😎 story is creative and interesting, keep writing. Update consistently and let's see where the story is leading✨✨❤️❤️❤️
Amazing💯 Been a long time you wrote a new chapter ?? We are waiting. It's too early to put a stop to it. Come back with a force and a more constructive and interesting storyline.
A nice story. I love the construction of your story it has potential in it and it's sure bound to have a good rating from me. Write more and explore your mind more.
The story has potential, but there are a few things that should be noted by the author. Firstly, punctuation. You barely use any punctuation in dialogues! It makes the story less attractive and interesting though it can be fixed. Secondly, the synopsis. Don't you think it's too short? Just maybe add a few more things to make it a bit clearer. Feel free to disagree!
Welcome back Joecurie💜 I'm glad to see you came up with a nice storyline and one with suspense. Don't relent at what you do best, breakthrough soon Keep it up 💯
I'm loving the way you give suspense in your story it showed you understand how you want your story line to look like. It's great keep it up and I'm sure you had become a good writer in no time 💚💚
It's been a while but I hope you had be back with a really nice and captivating continuous story. Give the best you can and never stop pushing,I'm definitely sure you are gonna be great💯💯💯
Hey! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom@gmail.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
This is author has the makings of a good writer in a couple years. Your work is captivating and very enjoyable. I can't wait to digest everything you have to offer with it.
Reading your chapter 14,you got me there.. lol It has suspense and the story line is creative😎I wish too see more characters you had input into the book Nice one❤️
Nice story... beautiful story development. You have the potential to become a great writer❤️ Keep writing and you will get there ... Don't stop updating.
I'm quite interested in this story and feel you should keep it up....the storyline is creative and magnificent. Please,update more often....I give a good rating
Wow!!! I love the starting point of this novel💯 it's more original and amazing to read. Please update more... you will make a good writer 😉 😎✨❤️💯🥰
I see potentials of you becoming a great writer😎 story is creative and interesting, keep writing. Update consistently and let's see where the story is leading✨✨❤️❤️❤️
Amazing💯 Been a long time you wrote a new chapter ?? We are waiting. It's too early to put a stop to it. Come back with a force and a more constructive and interesting storyline.