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I want some more chapters I love the book it's one of my favorite fan fics to date plz start updating again author much love [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It's a great book, it was enjoyable especially since there are only a few hp-tvd ff.... It's great and wish author would continue to write❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️
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Story development is not good....Harry was idiot beyond the measure in novel....the mc waste his wish on Harry's parents...what does it got to do with you focus on yourself...
Can this become a harem I like If yes can the harem members be Rose Potter, Daphne Greengrass, Luna Lovegood, Hermione Granger, Bonnie Bennett, and finally Rebekah Mikaelson Create a cure for Rebekah?
This project is interesting to me. Minuses of the project : 1)The characters are interesting. Especially the main character's family, but they are a little revealed and shown. And so I would like to see more scenes with them. .2)The plot is too different and little developed 3)Few characters, and the existing ones are little revealed
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hello author good story so far when will you put up more chapters is everything ok ,still waiting...........................................
This isnt aa review but a question will i still enjoy this if i havent watched/read vampire diary's? i will delete review l8r .....................................
has a good potential but awful execution in my opinion. the problems in my opinion are too many to count, it requires several re-writes before it can become good, my suggestion is during the break you took (due to back pain) read several fanfictions related to harry potter and re-make the story, if you ask i can also post step by step opinion of every single thing that went wrong in this novel.
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As a proper human I understand that the greed of mankind knows no bound so by thinking realistically.. The MC's wishes are forced and stupid, and the romance is totally forced, if anything this is the most idiotic book I have read, overall this is a bad novel to read.
Reveal SpoilerI should have read some reviews before starting to read this story because I would have saved my time instead of reading this. Mc complete coward does only useless things and doesn't use any advantages he can get. Gets always ordered around by his parents and never talked back to them. I'm now at chapter 42 and so angry with this mc. Just a waste of time don't read this.
Great characters and deep concept Great fusion Adds a new twist to stOry Solid story This story is a vampire Harry Potter Fusion
I really like the storry the Charachter is great, till he turned into a stealing Rat(sorry for Language). It kinda dost match with the Noble and kinda nice but a little Daring Personality of Sean and it makes me sad. Also the devolpment between him and his Parents is first great but then there is the thing with the Philospher stone witch his Mom simply took away, even trouht it didnt belong to her and she had no right to do that. But i like the Background of him and the relation shipp he has with his Friends, he even is nice to some of the People he dosnt like. [img=recommend]
Reveal SpoilerPros: The combination of the 2 worlds is intresting, The start was pretty good with the way the Mc stirred things up Cons: Mc acts childish, Mc has no backbone or balls, Mc has shitty and greedy parents yet the Mc doesent have the balls to confront them, Grammar is worse than mine, Characters are usually very surface level and we get no discreption on how they look so we have to rely on meta knowlage
pointless death -> 5wishes to god->reincarnation in HP Since the death of mc is just trash(his death bring 0 to the table) and I hate the concept of 5wishes(like wtf is a point of mc in hp world if you give him god gifts) im dropping it at chapter 1. Should give 1* but since author is doing it for free will give 3*. (If author reads it: Man design the charakter of mc and story from the beginning, killing someone is important. And yet you made it so that its more of a jouk, what the hell is a point of a story if all of story telling is plot armor).
Coooool very cool i like story 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😄😄😄😄[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Quite a nice harry potter ff, the mc flexes a lot but it is very commonly seen in hp ffs so I m fine with it. Grammar also is good compared to the others ffs taking in the fact that author's first language is French, I won't hesitate to give this five stars. My personal opinion: Please don't be a bastard to Daphne, she is my favorite female character in hp. I hope you add her in the harem, please.
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One of the best works on Harry Potter and the most intriguing since soon the vampire Diaries and the firstborn can enter the plot the character zazvivaetsya despite the original characteristics though not imbovye but not weak only mativation is not yet strongly expressed but for the beginning it is normal You will not regret it.
really good book , I love how how plot is going and I love the character I hope he never become a Villain if anything I'd prefer a antihero or hero, I like how u made him the herald of death. since he's a quarter vela it be cool if he also got their gift to but have complete control over it. if you ever decide to have him have two wives/girlfriend I'd think it be great if the second wife was either Daphne green grass or Hermione granger
As long as this doesn't devolve, this will be a top-rate story. Definitely readable. Nice mc with dark-ish powers. And it's only getting better of course because the TVD universe is in here too.
Was a great first 30 chapters! Then the ball drops and his parents start interfering with his life, first, his mother steals his philosopher stone then use the gold to fund the family's finances even though he gave them a better solution, and then refuses to fund his project with the gold from the philosopher stone that HE found!! But what makes me super mad is that they arrange a marriage for him behind his back and with no notice to him announce it to the world, embarrassing him in front of a party full of people!
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I want some more chapters I love the book it's one of my favorite fan fics to date plz start updating again author much love [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It's a great book, it was enjoyable especially since there are only a few hp-tvd ff.... It's great and wish author would continue to write❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️
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Story development is not good....Harry was idiot beyond the measure in novel....the mc waste his wish on Harry's parents...what does it got to do with you focus on yourself...
Can this become a harem I like If yes can the harem members be Rose Potter, Daphne Greengrass, Luna Lovegood, Hermione Granger, Bonnie Bennett, and finally Rebekah Mikaelson Create a cure for Rebekah?
This project is interesting to me. Minuses of the project : 1)The characters are interesting. Especially the main character's family, but they are a little revealed and shown. And so I would like to see more scenes with them. .2)The plot is too different and little developed 3)Few characters, and the existing ones are little revealed
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hello author good story so far when will you put up more chapters is everything ok ,still waiting...........................................
This isnt aa review but a question will i still enjoy this if i havent watched/read vampire diary's? i will delete review l8r .....................................
has a good potential but awful execution in my opinion. the problems in my opinion are too many to count, it requires several re-writes before it can become good, my suggestion is during the break you took (due to back pain) read several fanfictions related to harry potter and re-make the story, if you ask i can also post step by step opinion of every single thing that went wrong in this novel.
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As a proper human I understand that the greed of mankind knows no bound so by thinking realistically.. The MC's wishes are forced and stupid, and the romance is totally forced, if anything this is the most idiotic book I have read, overall this is a bad novel to read.
Reveal SpoilerI should have read some reviews before starting to read this story because I would have saved my time instead of reading this. Mc complete coward does only useless things and doesn't use any advantages he can get. Gets always ordered around by his parents and never talked back to them. I'm now at chapter 42 and so angry with this mc. Just a waste of time don't read this.
Great characters and deep concept Great fusion Adds a new twist to stOry Solid story This story is a vampire Harry Potter Fusion
I really like the storry the Charachter is great, till he turned into a stealing Rat(sorry for Language). It kinda dost match with the Noble and kinda nice but a little Daring Personality of Sean and it makes me sad. Also the devolpment between him and his Parents is first great but then there is the thing with the Philospher stone witch his Mom simply took away, even trouht it didnt belong to her and she had no right to do that. But i like the Background of him and the relation shipp he has with his Friends, he even is nice to some of the People he dosnt like. [img=recommend]
Reveal SpoilerPros: The combination of the 2 worlds is intresting, The start was pretty good with the way the Mc stirred things up Cons: Mc acts childish, Mc has no backbone or balls, Mc has shitty and greedy parents yet the Mc doesent have the balls to confront them, Grammar is worse than mine, Characters are usually very surface level and we get no discreption on how they look so we have to rely on meta knowlage
pointless death -> 5wishes to god->reincarnation in HP Since the death of mc is just trash(his death bring 0 to the table) and I hate the concept of 5wishes(like wtf is a point of mc in hp world if you give him god gifts) im dropping it at chapter 1. Should give 1* but since author is doing it for free will give 3*. (If author reads it: Man design the charakter of mc and story from the beginning, killing someone is important. And yet you made it so that its more of a jouk, what the hell is a point of a story if all of story telling is plot armor).
Coooool very cool i like story 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😄😄😄😄[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Quite a nice harry potter ff, the mc flexes a lot but it is very commonly seen in hp ffs so I m fine with it. Grammar also is good compared to the others ffs taking in the fact that author's first language is French, I won't hesitate to give this five stars. My personal opinion: Please don't be a bastard to Daphne, she is my favorite female character in hp. I hope you add her in the harem, please.
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One of the best works on Harry Potter and the most intriguing since soon the vampire Diaries and the firstborn can enter the plot the character zazvivaetsya despite the original characteristics though not imbovye but not weak only mativation is not yet strongly expressed but for the beginning it is normal You will not regret it.
really good book , I love how how plot is going and I love the character I hope he never become a Villain if anything I'd prefer a antihero or hero, I like how u made him the herald of death. since he's a quarter vela it be cool if he also got their gift to but have complete control over it. if you ever decide to have him have two wives/girlfriend I'd think it be great if the second wife was either Daphne green grass or Hermione granger
As long as this doesn't devolve, this will be a top-rate story. Definitely readable. Nice mc with dark-ish powers. And it's only getting better of course because the TVD universe is in here too.
Was a great first 30 chapters! Then the ball drops and his parents start interfering with his life, first, his mother steals his philosopher stone then use the gold to fund the family's finances even though he gave them a better solution, and then refuses to fund his project with the gold from the philosopher stone that HE found!! But what makes me super mad is that they arrange a marriage for him behind his back and with no notice to him announce it to the world, embarrassing him in front of a party full of people!
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