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so so so so so good!! i really hope the author finishes the story. Bella is the best and Alex is growing into himself... i was continuously hooked!!!
Es atrapante la historia me encanta [img=recommend] Fue fácil amar a los personajes, como también odiar a quien daña a nuestra protagonista ☺️
Me encanta leer y estos libros si que Dan ganas de quedarse pegado a la pantalla todo el tiempo, cada historia tiene su magia y ahí cuando empiezas a leer es cuando sabes exactamente que no podrás de parar de leer tienen una fantasía estupenda me encanta todo de esta app
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it seems like an interesting story, but I just can't get past all the editing errors. it makes it difficult to concentrate on the story. ....
this book is good . every chapter give new information and interesting content .I really like this book . i hope everyone is enjoy reading this book
please like my comments... i want power to unlock the new episode...🙏🙏 ............ .................... ............................... ..........,.................................. ................................... ........................... .................... ............. ....
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Worth the ups and downs in this tale with great twists woven throughout. I find the romance for the lead characters to be refreshing. The supernatural components are fresh and keep you wanting more.
man the story is getting more and more interesting it's has such great plot with such a great character I love the every part of this story it's have few error here and there and some grammar mistake otherwise it's was a story to look forward good work hope so more people should read this kind of gem ....♥️
the plot of the story kept me hook if it's edited little but there was some spelling mistake and grammar to correct but otherwise it will be bomb such a new and exciting story The love between demon I love it
Hey, I'm Ms. Jornaliza, an editor at Goodnovel, a writing platform that helps authors get a reliable and long-term income through their books. We are currently approaching authors who have a nice plot, synopsis, writing structure, style, and strong characters to sign their stories with us. If your story is approved, you will be receiving an attractive monthly update bonus and premium coins share income monthly till your contract with us lasts. If you are interested in joining us email me at msjornaliza.goodnovel@gmaill@gmail.com
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Everyone, LOOK HERE! I'm telling you, this book is no doubt a GOLD tier in WPC 149! After reading the first chapter, you'll definitely get hooked, I promise that! ❤️
I loved how you described everything, I love descriptive books, they make me feel like I am there with the characters. I love how you wrote your dialogue. Absolutely keep writing, and follow your passion! Please more chapter updates! :)
Hi Author! So, I like your writing style it makes it more appealing and easier for the readers to understand it. The character design is built well, that I was immersed in reading. Overall, a great novel for me! Keep up the good work, Author!
A nice book with a thrilling story! I have commented on the said issues but don't worry about it! It was awesome! Specially the end ot the chapter. It was mind-blowing! By the way you have potential to become a great author! Write more and practice more for more improvements. The thing you needed was a story to tell and a creative mind, the rest will follow!
Okay. General Pros and Cons review: Pro: Character dialogue. Your written dialogue perfectly shows the character's personalities. Plot development is also good-I liked how it quickly evolved into a vampire related story. Cons: Grammar. Setting description. Those two things are the only things that hold your writing back. With grammar, there will be better execution. Setting descriptions can certainly help make the reader's mental image more vivid. Best of luck to you, CodeW
the central idea is unexpected and I'm looking forward to more chapters. there are a few grammatical errors but other than that,this is a hidden gem
The story kept me hooked with the day one. A simple yet not so simple story of a human and an innocent Demon. We have never thought that demons could be this innocent too. Good work.
the story is simple neighbourhood story with a twist of demon. i like the characters and waiting for further updates. best of luck author for the contest.
taste of festivities can be seen in the book. I am still waiting for the elves you have promised and much more magic. keep up the good work.
oh, each chapter kept me so hooked that I just couldn't wait for the next. I want to know about what would she do now and how would Alex react.
The book is turning interesting day by day. Specially the scene of the bus. Salute to Alex who still took her home. I would have left and run. Creative thinking.
a demon on the run, what a thought. each novel of nishi durani has different concept and characters. you should gave it a try, as she would blink and stare at you. if you didn't. and trust me it will feel you creepy.
Hey, I have started another book in fantasy genre those who like reading a bit of comedy. It has essence of love and relations, different from other books. Which you can relate to your real life. Hope you like this book too. Thanks for your love and votes.
"Oh that lily where was she touching you? Nothing special she was just touching my lips with hers" You should add this line in your synopsis. I really laughed reading the chapters. The characters are sweet and funny. I enjoyed reading it after all the dramas. Most important thing is writer has started working only a month ago, yet all her books have a different flavour of life. Clap for you.
It's a sweet story, just like the Christmas. No villains or stepsisters, no plotting and planning. But a clueless devil, with a sweet boy. And a flirty. I think it's for those who moments when we just want something light to read, that made us feel loved and we can laugh to our heart content.
so so so so so good!! i really hope the author finishes the story. Bella is the best and Alex is growing into himself... i was continuously hooked!!!
Es atrapante la historia me encanta [img=recommend] Fue fácil amar a los personajes, como también odiar a quien daña a nuestra protagonista ☺️
Me encanta leer y estos libros si que Dan ganas de quedarse pegado a la pantalla todo el tiempo, cada historia tiene su magia y ahí cuando empiezas a leer es cuando sabes exactamente que no podrás de parar de leer tienen una fantasía estupenda me encanta todo de esta app
Reveal Spoiler it seems like an interesting story, but I just can't get past all the editing errors. it makes it difficult to concentrate on the story. ....
this book is good . every chapter give new information and interesting content .I really like this book . i hope everyone is enjoy reading this book
please like my comments... i want power to unlock the new episode...🙏🙏 ............ .................... ............................... ..........,.................................. ................................... ........................... .................... ............. ....
Reveal Spoiler Worth the ups and downs in this tale with great twists woven throughout. I find the romance for the lead characters to be refreshing. The supernatural components are fresh and keep you wanting more.
man the story is getting more and more interesting it's has such great plot with such a great character I love the every part of this story it's have few error here and there and some grammar mistake otherwise it's was a story to look forward good work hope so more people should read this kind of gem ....♥️
the plot of the story kept me hook if it's edited little but there was some spelling mistake and grammar to correct but otherwise it will be bomb such a new and exciting story The love between demon I love it
Hey, I'm Ms. Jornaliza, an editor at Goodnovel, a writing platform that helps authors get a reliable and long-term income through their books. We are currently approaching authors who have a nice plot, synopsis, writing structure, style, and strong characters to sign their stories with us. If your story is approved, you will be receiving an attractive monthly update bonus and premium coins share income monthly till your contract with us lasts. If you are interested in joining us email me at msjornaliza.goodnovel@gmaill@gmail.com
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Everyone, LOOK HERE! I'm telling you, this book is no doubt a GOLD tier in WPC 149! After reading the first chapter, you'll definitely get hooked, I promise that! ❤️
I loved how you described everything, I love descriptive books, they make me feel like I am there with the characters. I love how you wrote your dialogue. Absolutely keep writing, and follow your passion! Please more chapter updates! :)
Hi Author! So, I like your writing style it makes it more appealing and easier for the readers to understand it. The character design is built well, that I was immersed in reading. Overall, a great novel for me! Keep up the good work, Author!
A nice book with a thrilling story! I have commented on the said issues but don't worry about it! It was awesome! Specially the end ot the chapter. It was mind-blowing! By the way you have potential to become a great author! Write more and practice more for more improvements. The thing you needed was a story to tell and a creative mind, the rest will follow!
Okay. General Pros and Cons review: Pro: Character dialogue. Your written dialogue perfectly shows the character's personalities. Plot development is also good-I liked how it quickly evolved into a vampire related story. Cons: Grammar. Setting description. Those two things are the only things that hold your writing back. With grammar, there will be better execution. Setting descriptions can certainly help make the reader's mental image more vivid. Best of luck to you, CodeW
the central idea is unexpected and I'm looking forward to more chapters. there are a few grammatical errors but other than that,this is a hidden gem
The story kept me hooked with the day one. A simple yet not so simple story of a human and an innocent Demon. We have never thought that demons could be this innocent too. Good work.
the story is simple neighbourhood story with a twist of demon. i like the characters and waiting for further updates. best of luck author for the contest.
taste of festivities can be seen in the book. I am still waiting for the elves you have promised and much more magic. keep up the good work.
oh, each chapter kept me so hooked that I just couldn't wait for the next. I want to know about what would she do now and how would Alex react.
The book is turning interesting day by day. Specially the scene of the bus. Salute to Alex who still took her home. I would have left and run. Creative thinking.
a demon on the run, what a thought. each novel of nishi durani has different concept and characters. you should gave it a try, as she would blink and stare at you. if you didn't. and trust me it will feel you creepy.
Hey, I have started another book in fantasy genre those who like reading a bit of comedy. It has essence of love and relations, different from other books. Which you can relate to your real life. Hope you like this book too. Thanks for your love and votes.
"Oh that lily where was she touching you? Nothing special she was just touching my lips with hers" You should add this line in your synopsis. I really laughed reading the chapters. The characters are sweet and funny. I enjoyed reading it after all the dramas. Most important thing is writer has started working only a month ago, yet all her books have a different flavour of life. Clap for you.
It's a sweet story, just like the Christmas. No villains or stepsisters, no plotting and planning. But a clueless devil, with a sweet boy. And a flirty. I think it's for those who moments when we just want something light to read, that made us feel loved and we can laugh to our heart content.
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