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This story was revolutionary!!! The twists and turns were unexpected and the ending was something that really did a 180 on my mind. Great Writing, and hope to see more of your amazing works in the future!
it is hard to like history after reading the school text books.But this has totally changed that.This has been brilliantly written based on an original and interesting what if kind of plot which i could never have thought of in a million years.Over all it was a very BONNY book.Hope to read more of your books.
A really good book with an interesting storyline that flows quite well and the twists were amazing too. I enjoyed all aspects of the book. The writing quality was great as well. Overall, a must read.
A really interesting take on a what if scenario. Did not expect it to be this interesting since I thought it was something related to history and history being it's boring self, had me uninterested. But I'm glad I read this book and would love to read more books written by the same author.
This piece is really good, I like the storyline very much. I usually dont like history, but this story is really cool stuff and is worth every bit of your time! definitely recommend it if you like history.
Being a history lover, it was quite interesting and there was a very good plot! There was a flow in the story from the first to the last. Loved it. Encouraging for more books......... :|)
Even for someone who is not a big fan of history, this thriller from a highschooler is gripping. A fine plot, brilliant narration, and entertaining characters. Certainly a must read.
hello, I am the author of this book. I have no idea why I am writing this review. Please don't hate my book based on this comment! thank you for your time!!![img=recommend]
Sometimes a book leaves us free and rarely they make us free. This one really made me wonder how stupendous a human brain can be to create this Unexpected Ending . Overall it was a well-written...
I must say it is worth paying to read the whole book. I am not saying this just bcoz I know this upcoming author...but because it is worth reading. The imagination of this young author is no bounds ...all of his creativity is shown in the form of writing. The way which all characters are portrayed is truly beautiful. I don't know if I am even eligible to give a comment, opinion or review about the book. The curiosity to know what happened next is never lost in any part of the book. May god bless him you Arjun. Write more and more...I am till that where you have success in life
I am not a big fan of history myself but even i enjoyed this book.it is very well written based on an original and very interesting and exciting plot.It might even make me start liking history.Something which i have found hard aftr reading skool tbs.awesome book expecting more books frm u
Throughout man's existence, there has been a pressing question that lurks in the crevice of everyone's mind.... "What if"? This book I believe has represented that question very well. The journey the protagonist undertakes, is similar to the one the reader does and there is not one dull moment. It is a remarkable novella promising more fabulous works from the author and is worth your time.
I really enjoyed reading this ! It had a fantastic story line and the way everything put itself in place was awesome. Can't wait for more! :)
This book was very well written and was amazing. I greatly enjoyed reading it and found it very gripping and thrilling. Great job to the author!
The ability to tell a story is a great and unusual gift and the author has it in him. The narration of the story as it goes is a heady cock-tail of facts and fiction and it adds an element of beleivabity.It. It is full of Turbo-charged twists and turn. And it is definitely a must-read, page turner. The turbo charged climax really really a fitting tribute to the creative art of story-telling. Thank you
Ok this book is a hidden gem. I really don't see why it doesn't deserve more views. The characters, the potrayal, the flow, the ideologies. It is less of a historical fiction and more of a thriller. And the twist ending, voilaaa! Its a really awesome time. I just wish it had been longer :D
I thoroughly enjoyed the story, especially the twist at the end. It is evident that the author has put a lot of time and a lot of effort into this piece. It is amazing. You want to pick this book up if you like great literature and multi-pov reads. Its amazing and deserves every star!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The story has everything that I didn't expect it to. Its perfect, Whether it be the managing of ideologies and the mental framework of these truly dynamic characters, don't put this book down if you want to have a great time.
Being a person who falls asleep on touching the history book, I have to say, this book was quite the opposite. The whole story line and the idea behind it was brilliant. And the twists...they were 😮 You literally had me awaiting each chapter. Overall the story was really good and I can't wait to read more of your work. Don't have any criticism per se but there is always room for some improvement and thus I'd give your work a solid 4.5 stars.
Throughout man's existence, there has been a pressing question that lurks in the crevice of everyone's mind.... "What if"? This book I believe has represented that question very well. The journey the protagonist undertakes, is similar to the one the reader does and there is not one dull moment. It is a remarkable novella promising more fabulous works from the author and is worth your time.
I don't remember reading anything that was closely related to History but this one had too many twists that I couldn't put the book down. Great Work! Waiting for more ...
Hello Mr. Arjun. I believe you are a fantastic writer. I can't express how good the story was in just a review. It's one of the best stories I have read. Don't stop this and continue till you reach your goal.[img=update][img=update]
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this stroy.. The characters were so descriptive that i could visualize them . The twists and turns were unperdictable and that kept me curious until the end. The climax had all the elements for a perfect climax. Ultimate twist. Keep writing such stories..
The idea of creating an entirely new timeline by changing just one variable has always fascinated me. This one variable, grows in front of our very eyes and stretches horizons into the horizon. A great read for anyone with a limited time and a great imagination.
For a History buff like me ; what if scenario was interesting. A intelligent take on the "what if" make it a worthwhile and riveting read. Impressed with the story flow ; lucid description and imaginary
I don't normally read historical fiction but it was a wonderful novella and I really enjoyed it. Nice continuity and great twist. You are an awesome writer and I hope to read more of your work
This story was very well-written and I was invested right from the beginning. Though historical fiction is not a genre I usually read, I enjoyed this. But that ending....wow. That was definitely not what I expected. The Kohinoor's story is one I have always been obsessed with, the diamond being from the Kollur mines in the city of my birth and this 'what if' story based on the diamond was really good. The only problem I had was the minimal details in the beginning. Those readers who don't know the same version of events as the author, would be very confused as the lines vaguely allude to events that happened in real life, using characters who actually existed. People who don't know about those events would have to make assumptions or remain confused for a fair part of the story. All in all, I'd give this story 4 stars.
Awesome stuff man.. keep up the great work .... Waiting for more from you ..... All the best.... Glad to see a student write novels .... Such a great effort taken by you ... Very proud....
I enjoyed reading this!! The description and the story line flows well and the characters are too good. The plot is captivating and really interesting! Overall, I enjoyed the entire story and can't wait for more :D
I like it so far, your use of words is amicable. there is a strength to the main character that i am liking. So, a good job and well done.I like how it's set in another place and time, the way it's put together is magical for all that, a great read, I highly recommend!
This story was revolutionary!!! The twists and turns were unexpected and the ending was something that really did a 180 on my mind. Great Writing, and hope to see more of your amazing works in the future!
it is hard to like history after reading the school text books.But this has totally changed that.This has been brilliantly written based on an original and interesting what if kind of plot which i could never have thought of in a million years.Over all it was a very BONNY book.Hope to read more of your books.
A really good book with an interesting storyline that flows quite well and the twists were amazing too. I enjoyed all aspects of the book. The writing quality was great as well. Overall, a must read.
A really interesting take on a what if scenario. Did not expect it to be this interesting since I thought it was something related to history and history being it's boring self, had me uninterested. But I'm glad I read this book and would love to read more books written by the same author.
This piece is really good, I like the storyline very much. I usually dont like history, but this story is really cool stuff and is worth every bit of your time! definitely recommend it if you like history.
Being a history lover, it was quite interesting and there was a very good plot! There was a flow in the story from the first to the last. Loved it. Encouraging for more books......... :|)
Even for someone who is not a big fan of history, this thriller from a highschooler is gripping. A fine plot, brilliant narration, and entertaining characters. Certainly a must read.
hello, I am the author of this book. I have no idea why I am writing this review. Please don't hate my book based on this comment! thank you for your time!!![img=recommend]
Sometimes a book leaves us free and rarely they make us free. This one really made me wonder how stupendous a human brain can be to create this Unexpected Ending . Overall it was a well-written...
I must say it is worth paying to read the whole book. I am not saying this just bcoz I know this upcoming author...but because it is worth reading. The imagination of this young author is no bounds ...all of his creativity is shown in the form of writing. The way which all characters are portrayed is truly beautiful. I don't know if I am even eligible to give a comment, opinion or review about the book. The curiosity to know what happened next is never lost in any part of the book. May god bless him you Arjun. Write more and more...I am till that where you have success in life
I am not a big fan of history myself but even i enjoyed this book.it is very well written based on an original and very interesting and exciting plot.It might even make me start liking history.Something which i have found hard aftr reading skool tbs.awesome book expecting more books frm u
Throughout man's existence, there has been a pressing question that lurks in the crevice of everyone's mind.... "What if"? This book I believe has represented that question very well. The journey the protagonist undertakes, is similar to the one the reader does and there is not one dull moment. It is a remarkable novella promising more fabulous works from the author and is worth your time.
I really enjoyed reading this ! It had a fantastic story line and the way everything put itself in place was awesome. Can't wait for more! :)
This book was very well written and was amazing. I greatly enjoyed reading it and found it very gripping and thrilling. Great job to the author!
The ability to tell a story is a great and unusual gift and the author has it in him. The narration of the story as it goes is a heady cock-tail of facts and fiction and it adds an element of beleivabity.It. It is full of Turbo-charged twists and turn. And it is definitely a must-read, page turner. The turbo charged climax really really a fitting tribute to the creative art of story-telling. Thank you
Ok this book is a hidden gem. I really don't see why it doesn't deserve more views. The characters, the potrayal, the flow, the ideologies. It is less of a historical fiction and more of a thriller. And the twist ending, voilaaa! Its a really awesome time. I just wish it had been longer :D
I thoroughly enjoyed the story, especially the twist at the end. It is evident that the author has put a lot of time and a lot of effort into this piece. It is amazing. You want to pick this book up if you like great literature and multi-pov reads. Its amazing and deserves every star!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The story has everything that I didn't expect it to. Its perfect, Whether it be the managing of ideologies and the mental framework of these truly dynamic characters, don't put this book down if you want to have a great time.
Being a person who falls asleep on touching the history book, I have to say, this book was quite the opposite. The whole story line and the idea behind it was brilliant. And the twists...they were 😮 You literally had me awaiting each chapter. Overall the story was really good and I can't wait to read more of your work. Don't have any criticism per se but there is always room for some improvement and thus I'd give your work a solid 4.5 stars.
Throughout man's existence, there has been a pressing question that lurks in the crevice of everyone's mind.... "What if"? This book I believe has represented that question very well. The journey the protagonist undertakes, is similar to the one the reader does and there is not one dull moment. It is a remarkable novella promising more fabulous works from the author and is worth your time.
I don't remember reading anything that was closely related to History but this one had too many twists that I couldn't put the book down. Great Work! Waiting for more ...
Hello Mr. Arjun. I believe you are a fantastic writer. I can't express how good the story was in just a review. It's one of the best stories I have read. Don't stop this and continue till you reach your goal.[img=update][img=update]
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this stroy.. The characters were so descriptive that i could visualize them . The twists and turns were unperdictable and that kept me curious until the end. The climax had all the elements for a perfect climax. Ultimate twist. Keep writing such stories..
The idea of creating an entirely new timeline by changing just one variable has always fascinated me. This one variable, grows in front of our very eyes and stretches horizons into the horizon. A great read for anyone with a limited time and a great imagination.
For a History buff like me ; what if scenario was interesting. A intelligent take on the "what if" make it a worthwhile and riveting read. Impressed with the story flow ; lucid description and imaginary
I don't normally read historical fiction but it was a wonderful novella and I really enjoyed it. Nice continuity and great twist. You are an awesome writer and I hope to read more of your work
This story was very well-written and I was invested right from the beginning. Though historical fiction is not a genre I usually read, I enjoyed this. But that ending....wow. That was definitely not what I expected. The Kohinoor's story is one I have always been obsessed with, the diamond being from the Kollur mines in the city of my birth and this 'what if' story based on the diamond was really good. The only problem I had was the minimal details in the beginning. Those readers who don't know the same version of events as the author, would be very confused as the lines vaguely allude to events that happened in real life, using characters who actually existed. People who don't know about those events would have to make assumptions or remain confused for a fair part of the story. All in all, I'd give this story 4 stars.
Awesome stuff man.. keep up the great work .... Waiting for more from you ..... All the best.... Glad to see a student write novels .... Such a great effort taken by you ... Very proud....
I enjoyed reading this!! The description and the story line flows well and the characters are too good. The plot is captivating and really interesting! Overall, I enjoyed the entire story and can't wait for more :D
I like it so far, your use of words is amicable. there is a strength to the main character that i am liking. So, a good job and well done.I like how it's set in another place and time, the way it's put together is magical for all that, a great read, I highly recommend!