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Just me the author shamelessly give myself 5 stars but seriously in reviews give me what you think I need to improve on and what I've done well this is my first story and I'm just trying out my skills.
Umm the introduction to the story was good but the update speed is bad ... -You have originality when choosing Sirius, the truth already bores all the time reincarnations in Harry. -a little confusing the ability of the great patriarch in terms of magic but otherwise fine.
please update as soon as possible . [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] [img=update]
Just me the author shamelessly give myself 5 stars but seriously in reviews give me what you think I need to improve on and what I've done well this is my first story and I'm just trying out my skills.
Umm the introduction to the story was good but the update speed is bad ... -You have originality when choosing Sirius, the truth already bores all the time reincarnations in Harry. -a little confusing the ability of the great patriarch in terms of magic but otherwise fine.