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Author here to give my shameless 5 star review. ********************************************************************************************
Awesome so looking forward to what happens next ............................,..........................................................................,..
Bro, a question, are you going to continue this story or has he already died???.........,.....................para poner la redeña pone un minimo de 140 caracteres
Total waste of time, another work by this author that has been abandoned. Better to find another work that will at least give us a satisfying ending. I DO NOT RECOMMEND!!
writing quality, story development, character design, and world background are all perfect (would be nice to stop by some other magical worlds maybe when he gets strong enough), but it does need to be updated. Great story, I don't know about other people, but when I get to, I don't know somewhere between 100-50 chapters left. If it hasn't been updated in a while, I'll just drop the book. sure, great read, but if it's just gonna be a huge cliffhanger, it will always be a chapter I select , so if I want to continue reading, it won't be "oh it's still not updated" but that's my opinion great story but need more updates
The story is really good, however it is very disappointing that it has not been continued for more than 2 years. The question is, when are you going to continue it again?
The only thing I'm going to review is the fact that the story was dropped by the author without any attempt at tying up any loose ends, and then the author has the gall to tell everyone to go pound sand. Can a person be more pathetic and immature?
It was going well, until he became Avatar and Master of death. Then almost every event became forced/without any sense. Author stopped his gaining easy knowledge, where he can easily get many magical knowledge with the help of his resurrection stone power/lady death herself(her own magical knowledge)/his mother(Aincent One,time stone).
I just binged this whole story. I have to say, I was reluctant to read this for a long time because some of the negative reviews but I was pleasantly surprised. Tom is not an evil psychopath like Voldemort, but neither is he some milquetoast isekai protagonist. He's a very nice blend of a character that does good things and bad things, just like most people.
debiste terminarlo pero te fuiste eso es la maxima traicion estaba tam bueno si la historia fuera mala esta bien pero era super buena y aun asi te fuiste.
Author! I'm here rereading this work of art and I'd like to know if you're still thinking about it or if you have plans to continue updating chapters or rewriting it. If so, post something new, I bet there are still a lot of people waiting! Please, it's been two years!
I truly enjoy this story and hope it continues; though i am annoyed that it ended on a major cliffhanger, I mean come on author, you could have at the vary least finished the ark. (oh and by the way Tom isn't 11 anymore and he's already finished his schooling so yeah I just countered your excuse) I really hope you comeback to this amazing Novel Im (figuratively) dieing and waiting with baited breath. ( at least i think that's how the saying goes) any way i eagerly look forward to your return i cant wait to see the teaching ark you have lined up for your hungry readers ill check out the story you advertised on that last page well enjoy your time away from the questionable enigma that is Tom Riddle Lord Pendragon, Slytherin, and La Fey. until we see you again, goodbye
Story of wanna be anti-hero. What you'll read about is a simp who loves to gift each and everything including a powerful lafey grimoire and a locket which powers spells when its cast in parseltounge to his girlfriend. Author loves to stretch hos story to the limit of checking 3 vaults takes 28 chapters. Simping left and right is what this dear MC does. I do not recommend this at all.
Author said MC has a "Grey" that's supposed to be so rare and unique after merging the Black&White soul but so far MC is no diff than any average goody-two-shoes protagonist, here i was expecting a absolute neutral mc. It also turns out to be a carbon-copy of author's spiderman novel.
The story is pretty entertaining for the most part. Unfortunately it took a serious turn for the worse in chapter 184. I won't spoil any details, but the MC (Tom Riddle) was portrayed as something of an Anti-Hero for the majority of the story. Someone who wants power and is willing to kill and steal to get it, but has his own moral code, didn't hurt innocent people and worked towards keeping the world save. Yet, in the mentioned chapter, that was thrown out the window and the MC did something straight up evil to an innocent person, even though he had far better options available. That single chapter completely ruined the entire fanfic for me.
Autor, quando você desistir de escrever uma fanfic, pelo menos deixe claro para os leitores que irão ler futuramente. Cheguei ao último capítulo pra saber que não tem fim, triste.
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One of the best marvel and harry potter crossover I've read. ................................................................................................................
i have been reading it for the second time until last uploaded chap. there are things that confuses me. but still this ff has a lot of potential. please continue it, dont mind the negative comments. there is a reason this novel is a FANFICTION it means anything is possible.
This is a very good story. I have enjoyed it thoroughly. So please continue the story. I will love to read what you do with the plot of MCU.
Gostei muito, só esperava que o autor postasse mais capítulos antes de dropar, o autor deixou tantas coisas não resolvidas - Curar Nagine - Algum uso para a pedra do espaço - A organização com o Capitão América - Libertar Bela - Projeto Super Mago Esses são apenas algumas, espero que ele volte mesmo que a chance seja pequena
To be honest, I really thought that I would have something to read for the next few days....but this really quickly got boring. The author never stays true to what he writes, the Crossover is one of the worst I have ever read...and I read a lot... The Grammar is less than average aka You understand it, but it's not a smooth read. Furthermore, The Mc went from neutral to cliche, Chinese Edge Lord Mc in matter of 20 Chapters. Etc etc All in all, very disappointing
While reading this book has truly been something to behold especially with it being quite interesting and intriguing I have enjoyed overall just about everything from this book loved way that Tom Riddle took control of his own house and got his followers as well the power and leadership he showed and way how he handled Grindlewald and Dumbledore even if technically he didn't do nothing to him nonetheless not just that but also being student of The Ancient One also was quite interesting it does suck that u will no longer be continuing with this book since was looking forward to reading more and finding out what would happen next I still have had a splendid time taking the time to read this book not to mention how Tom was the Master of Lady Death and had All Black with him truly quite intriguing
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Why do people even try to write romance when they're just not good at it? Romance is not all about "I feel a certain kind of itch when I'm close with the mc, I better get close to him, 'just because." It's the same old recurring stupid trope, which doesn't take that much effort to predict. You should just call this novel, "Generic mc, inside a generic plot, transmigrated in the body of Voldemort."
The story was doing great, until the entry of romance and Adoption of mc, TF I quit from ch 150 The story had potential but it got wasted , I am disappointed man :(
I really like the remake. It does everything the old story does and more and with the change in character you are able to expand more into both universes without having to stick the main plot.
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Author here to give my shameless 5 star review. ********************************************************************************************
Awesome so looking forward to what happens next ............................,..........................................................................,..
Bro, a question, are you going to continue this story or has he already died???.........,.....................para poner la redeña pone un minimo de 140 caracteres
Total waste of time, another work by this author that has been abandoned. Better to find another work that will at least give us a satisfying ending. I DO NOT RECOMMEND!!
writing quality, story development, character design, and world background are all perfect (would be nice to stop by some other magical worlds maybe when he gets strong enough), but it does need to be updated. Great story, I don't know about other people, but when I get to, I don't know somewhere between 100-50 chapters left. If it hasn't been updated in a while, I'll just drop the book. sure, great read, but if it's just gonna be a huge cliffhanger, it will always be a chapter I select , so if I want to continue reading, it won't be "oh it's still not updated" but that's my opinion great story but need more updates
The story is really good, however it is very disappointing that it has not been continued for more than 2 years. The question is, when are you going to continue it again?
The only thing I'm going to review is the fact that the story was dropped by the author without any attempt at tying up any loose ends, and then the author has the gall to tell everyone to go pound sand. Can a person be more pathetic and immature?
It was going well, until he became Avatar and Master of death. Then almost every event became forced/without any sense. Author stopped his gaining easy knowledge, where he can easily get many magical knowledge with the help of his resurrection stone power/lady death herself(her own magical knowledge)/his mother(Aincent One,time stone).
I just binged this whole story. I have to say, I was reluctant to read this for a long time because some of the negative reviews but I was pleasantly surprised. Tom is not an evil psychopath like Voldemort, but neither is he some milquetoast isekai protagonist. He's a very nice blend of a character that does good things and bad things, just like most people.
debiste terminarlo pero te fuiste eso es la maxima traicion estaba tam bueno si la historia fuera mala esta bien pero era super buena y aun asi te fuiste.
Author! I'm here rereading this work of art and I'd like to know if you're still thinking about it or if you have plans to continue updating chapters or rewriting it. If so, post something new, I bet there are still a lot of people waiting! Please, it's been two years!
I truly enjoy this story and hope it continues; though i am annoyed that it ended on a major cliffhanger, I mean come on author, you could have at the vary least finished the ark. (oh and by the way Tom isn't 11 anymore and he's already finished his schooling so yeah I just countered your excuse) I really hope you comeback to this amazing Novel Im (figuratively) dieing and waiting with baited breath. ( at least i think that's how the saying goes) any way i eagerly look forward to your return i cant wait to see the teaching ark you have lined up for your hungry readers ill check out the story you advertised on that last page well enjoy your time away from the questionable enigma that is Tom Riddle Lord Pendragon, Slytherin, and La Fey. until we see you again, goodbye
Story of wanna be anti-hero. What you'll read about is a simp who loves to gift each and everything including a powerful lafey grimoire and a locket which powers spells when its cast in parseltounge to his girlfriend. Author loves to stretch hos story to the limit of checking 3 vaults takes 28 chapters. Simping left and right is what this dear MC does. I do not recommend this at all.
Author said MC has a "Grey" that's supposed to be so rare and unique after merging the Black&White soul but so far MC is no diff than any average goody-two-shoes protagonist, here i was expecting a absolute neutral mc. It also turns out to be a carbon-copy of author's spiderman novel.
The story is pretty entertaining for the most part. Unfortunately it took a serious turn for the worse in chapter 184. I won't spoil any details, but the MC (Tom Riddle) was portrayed as something of an Anti-Hero for the majority of the story. Someone who wants power and is willing to kill and steal to get it, but has his own moral code, didn't hurt innocent people and worked towards keeping the world save. Yet, in the mentioned chapter, that was thrown out the window and the MC did something straight up evil to an innocent person, even though he had far better options available. That single chapter completely ruined the entire fanfic for me.
Autor, quando você desistir de escrever uma fanfic, pelo menos deixe claro para os leitores que irão ler futuramente. Cheguei ao último capítulo pra saber que não tem fim, triste.
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Reveal Spoiler One of the best marvel and harry potter crossover I've read. ................................................................................................................
i have been reading it for the second time until last uploaded chap. there are things that confuses me. but still this ff has a lot of potential. please continue it, dont mind the negative comments. there is a reason this novel is a FANFICTION it means anything is possible.
This is a very good story. I have enjoyed it thoroughly. So please continue the story. I will love to read what you do with the plot of MCU.
Gostei muito, só esperava que o autor postasse mais capítulos antes de dropar, o autor deixou tantas coisas não resolvidas - Curar Nagine - Algum uso para a pedra do espaço - A organização com o Capitão América - Libertar Bela - Projeto Super Mago Esses são apenas algumas, espero que ele volte mesmo que a chance seja pequena
To be honest, I really thought that I would have something to read for the next few days....but this really quickly got boring. The author never stays true to what he writes, the Crossover is one of the worst I have ever read...and I read a lot... The Grammar is less than average aka You understand it, but it's not a smooth read. Furthermore, The Mc went from neutral to cliche, Chinese Edge Lord Mc in matter of 20 Chapters. Etc etc All in all, very disappointing
While reading this book has truly been something to behold especially with it being quite interesting and intriguing I have enjoyed overall just about everything from this book loved way that Tom Riddle took control of his own house and got his followers as well the power and leadership he showed and way how he handled Grindlewald and Dumbledore even if technically he didn't do nothing to him nonetheless not just that but also being student of The Ancient One also was quite interesting it does suck that u will no longer be continuing with this book since was looking forward to reading more and finding out what would happen next I still have had a splendid time taking the time to read this book not to mention how Tom was the Master of Lady Death and had All Black with him truly quite intriguing
..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Why do people even try to write romance when they're just not good at it? Romance is not all about "I feel a certain kind of itch when I'm close with the mc, I better get close to him, 'just because." It's the same old recurring stupid trope, which doesn't take that much effort to predict. You should just call this novel, "Generic mc, inside a generic plot, transmigrated in the body of Voldemort."
The story was doing great, until the entry of romance and Adoption of mc, TF I quit from ch 150 The story had potential but it got wasted , I am disappointed man :(
I really like the remake. It does everything the old story does and more and with the change in character you are able to expand more into both universes without having to stick the main plot.