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the fact that there is ROB constantly watching and constantly making sure he lives a life of struggle and misfortune is such a turn off
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This story was doing alright but well it went downhill when a wish was wasted, a wish wasn't fulfilled. Like really this was a great novel but author in my opinion had to ruin it.
I really enjoy the story so far! The characters and interactions between them are great! I hope to see another update soon but it seems the last update was several months ago... So I guess i'll have to wait and see what happens.
Un buen fanfic de dragón ball aunque no me parece que tenga un ritmo lento como dicen algunos si creo que algunos de los capítulos que has puesto están de demás pero la forma en que desarrollas la historia es nueva y entretenida lastima que las actualizaciones sean tan escasas
Sigue con la novela porfa está muy buena 😃 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Ojala siguieras con novel porque me re engancho jajaja ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
i usally dont write positive reviews but this One was consistentlly enjoyable to read over 40 chap worth sure hes not doing the most optimal training and isnt as strong as he could be thats fine. Spoilers personally my only criticism is why is he so passive he goes with tge flow never looking for optimol training or schooling or just being rich. school this school that earth has great tech study and train then boom perfect human you can make serums to get stronger and achive genitic percection. but other then that its good go ahead read it
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the MC becomes a supporting character .............................................................................................................................
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Its 4 in the morning and i just finished your story :( it's sooooo goooood thou ( LOVE THE CARE YOU OUT INTO THIS) Love for my Yajirobe Hope to see him more, and chappa too. Yamcha XD (Im rooting for you)
the fact that there is ROB constantly watching and constantly making sure he lives a life of struggle and misfortune is such a turn off
Meh😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒
This story was doing alright but well it went downhill when a wish was wasted, a wish wasn't fulfilled. Like really this was a great novel but author in my opinion had to ruin it.
I really enjoy the story so far! The characters and interactions between them are great! I hope to see another update soon but it seems the last update was several months ago... So I guess i'll have to wait and see what happens.
Un buen fanfic de dragón ball aunque no me parece que tenga un ritmo lento como dicen algunos si creo que algunos de los capítulos que has puesto están de demás pero la forma en que desarrollas la historia es nueva y entretenida lastima que las actualizaciones sean tan escasas
Sigue con la novela porfa está muy buena 😃 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Ojala siguieras con novel porque me re engancho jajaja ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
i usally dont write positive reviews but this One was consistentlly enjoyable to read over 40 chap worth sure hes not doing the most optimal training and isnt as strong as he could be thats fine. Spoilers personally my only criticism is why is he so passive he goes with tge flow never looking for optimol training or schooling or just being rich. school this school that earth has great tech study and train then boom perfect human you can make serums to get stronger and achive genitic percection. but other then that its good go ahead read it
Bad wish but okay bad wish but okay bad wish but okay bad wish but okay Bad wish but okay bad wish but okay bad wish but okay bad wish but okay
the MC becomes a supporting character .............................................................................................................................
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XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP
Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work
Its 4 in the morning and i just finished your story :( it's sooooo goooood thou ( LOVE THE CARE YOU OUT INTO THIS) Love for my Yajirobe Hope to see him more, and chappa too. Yamcha XD (Im rooting for you)