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Its Monday. And Niharika just decides to publish her another exemplary work. Now I am amidst the dilemma wherher to finish reading this book or get back to my day job. I just started with the chapter 3 - The November Rain after an inscrutable ending to the previous chapter. Phew.. goose bumps. In awe of how the the story and charater of Caroline is building up. Canβt wait to get to the remaining chapters. Keep up the good work Niharika. I am totally fangirling right now!!!
I just started reading it by fluke ,biased of course and was tempted to read further even at 2 AM. Amazing and intriguing content ,keeps one glued to book
Love this book so much that when I'm even reading it, I can feel my heart flutter.
i love this book very much as it is intriguing and much captivating β€π€.. the plot is quite interesting as it links to various events
I skip bedtime just to read this book every morning I wake up am on this book though breakfast, lunch and dinner, this book keeps me company never felt so much exciting before thank you for creating this marvelous piece you make my lonely nights something worth itπππππππππππππππππππ
God! I can't believe this book is finished. I loved it, the author is unbelievably talented. she is beyond 5 star π .I can't wait to read more of your pieces. Thankyou for sharing your talent with us.
This novel is super nice . The twists the power the everything . I recommend it to everyone.it is feeled with healing powers π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―ππππππ―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
pls I don't have access to the ones you lack and I don't know what to do to open it...I really want to complete reading this book pls guide me...
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I dont see any update on thIs book. @author- Is there any plan to finish this book. @ reader- hOw frequent is tge update. i dont want to StarT an incomplete book. i liked the AuthoR work on can you mend my heart? Waiting fir this book to complete for long time.
I really, really like this story. That said, I have several things that I feel need to be mentioned: 1. The author has abandoned this story and there has not been any updates in almost HALF A YEAR! 2. I feel is unfair for Webnovel to promote a story that has been abandoned or does not update. 3. As I mentioned before, the story is really good, the characters are solid, and the concept is fresh, but the writer does not read her own writing prior to posting. As a consequence, there are several parts where there seems like entire chunks are missing. Sometimes you just ask yourself "What happened?" Or wonder if the author meant to say something and left it open. This makes it very confusing and it brakes the sequence of the story. 4. This story has the potential of being one of the BEST stories of this website. HOWEVER, the lack of care from the writer to update, check for mistakes, missing pieces, and most importantly, NO UPDATES IN ALMOST HALF A YEAR, make it difficult to continue to support this book. If updates where at least once a month, then maybe it would be worth it, but as it stands, I am seriously considering deleting this from my reading list. I will wait for the 6 month mark and if nothing changes, then sadly I will have to say goodbye to this. 5. I do not mind waiting for a good story, but not for this long, and not for a story where the writer does not care for her own work by making sure that at least it is written and reviewed before posting. My advice for the writer: Re-read every chapter and figure out what parts are not clear, and what is missing out of a scene or dialog. If necessary, rewrite and post updated chapters and fix the parts that seem ambiguous. Pay attention and appreciate your readers, people in this site can be extremely generous, but please don't take anyone for granted and don't string everyone into believing that you care more than you really do not only for this story, but for those who take the time to read and follow. Life in the real world can be really though, and we all understand. So if you no longer have the time or inspiration to continue, we can understand; but please be honest and set the story as "On hold", or remove it altogether rather than make others believe that everything is fine. You have the potential to be an excellent writer. Your ideas are good and original, but I would hope that you make an outline of where this story is going to be moving towards, and work from there. Write several chapters ahead of time and let the readers know that updates will be every week, 2, or even every month. Just don't keep everyone hoping and waiting by dangling a carrot in the shape of an update just to keep us here. I wish you the best of luck and hope that you will become a more active writer and prove to everyone (including me) that you truly care not only for this story, but for all the readers who have spent time and money to invest in you and this story.
If this novel has been abandoned all the chapters in privilege needs to be released. It very frustrating when you spend so much coins $$$ and the author stops updating.
the story would be amazing if it had nothing to do with can you mend my broken heart, cuz I don't get how the book is turning all godly and stuff, it's really nice tho but the whole godd stuff justade it look weird when comparing it to the other one
Is this novel complete? Says 3 months since last updated so Iβm wondering if itβs complete or not. I donβt want to spend anymore coins in a novel that the author doesnβt plan on completing. Itβs happened before to me and Iβm still upset about it. Iβll give another review once I know if this is complete or ongoing.
Am very attached to the book and its encouraging so much I love it I hope you will update soon I'm dying to continue reading it am just eagering waiting for the update
It is inspiring people who are in love to support each other and to sacrifice for there love no matter the circumstances and challanges that they are facing
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Ur writing is great ......great work I must say Was captivated so greatly ...keep it rolling more strength and knowledgeπππππππ€©π€©π₯°π₯°π―π―π―π―π―
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I love how the characters have been brought out. It's more like watching a movie in my head while reading the words. I am in love with the book.
Niharika Bhol you have done justice to this book and I wish you qick recovery so that you can continue from where you stop. Because you stop at the interesting part of the story. I love everything about it, the story line, the character etc everything is perfect. Thanks for keeping us entertained.
Hi, Absolutely love this book! Just Disappointed last chapters were dublicated and was charged for them! Book is unfinished and not seen any udpates for over a month, which is a shame, was looking forward to the ending!
First of all i have the cover of the book and that is what drew me iN at first but ive gone in a little and then ts a Lovely book and the story line flows easily.
This book is the best with the part 1 made me look for this part and the author is the best πππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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why there are no updates, is it dropped, please let me know. started liking the novel. please uodate so as we know[img=faceslap][img=recommend]
Plz update it fast i cant wait to read anymore why havent u updated this story in this month yet i am so excited to read further chapters plz dont give up on this book plz plz plz i want to continue reading this beautifull love story till the end plz let it be a happy ending tooooπ€©β£πI will eagerly wait for ur recent updates and read this beautifull story till the endπππ€
The book is interesting but the update is coming late....So I'll like the author to update fast..........................thanks and more grease to ur elbow
Reveal Spoiler This story is the best I've ever read..very fascinating and interesting...i hope the writer will complete the story..more grease to ur elbow
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Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! γmy email: wind@novel-cat.comγ If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. Iβm sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
Reveal Spoiler Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! γmy email: kazechanku@gmail.comγ If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. Iβm sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
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another wonderful chapter you are an amazing writer , i look forward to reading a lot more from you Niharika. I wish you all the best in the future
This is another masterpiece from the author! The diction, the very detailed yet captivating storyline are some of the numerous qualities that make this book stand out. Invest in reading this wonderful piece and be glad you did!
Merry Christmas to you all and to the author I hope you don't slack off cause this is the most interesting story ive ever read Love yaππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Anoter amazing peice by my fav author. All the very best! I look forward to reading more from you Niharika. In tImes when my so called original favs have become inconsistent, you have delivered salvation.
Its Monday. And Niharika just decides to publish her another exemplary work. Now I am amidst the dilemma wherher to finish reading this book or get back to my day job. I just started with the chapter 3 - The November Rain after an inscrutable ending to the previous chapter. Phew.. goose bumps. In awe of how the the story and charater of Caroline is building up. Canβt wait to get to the remaining chapters. Keep up the good work Niharika. I am totally fangirling right now!!!
I just started reading it by fluke ,biased of course and was tempted to read further even at 2 AM. Amazing and intriguing content ,keeps one glued to book
Love this book so much that when I'm even reading it, I can feel my heart flutter.
i love this book very much as it is intriguing and much captivating β€π€.. the plot is quite interesting as it links to various events
I skip bedtime just to read this book every morning I wake up am on this book though breakfast, lunch and dinner, this book keeps me company never felt so much exciting before thank you for creating this marvelous piece you make my lonely nights something worth itπππππππππππππππππππ
God! I can't believe this book is finished. I loved it, the author is unbelievably talented. she is beyond 5 star π .I can't wait to read more of your pieces. Thankyou for sharing your talent with us.
This novel is super nice . The twists the power the everything . I recommend it to everyone.it is feeled with healing powers π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―ππππππ―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―π―ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
pls I don't have access to the ones you lack and I don't know what to do to open it...I really want to complete reading this book pls guide me...
Reveal Spoiler I dont see any update on thIs book. @author- Is there any plan to finish this book. @ reader- hOw frequent is tge update. i dont want to StarT an incomplete book. i liked the AuthoR work on can you mend my heart? Waiting fir this book to complete for long time.
I really, really like this story. That said, I have several things that I feel need to be mentioned: 1. The author has abandoned this story and there has not been any updates in almost HALF A YEAR! 2. I feel is unfair for Webnovel to promote a story that has been abandoned or does not update. 3. As I mentioned before, the story is really good, the characters are solid, and the concept is fresh, but the writer does not read her own writing prior to posting. As a consequence, there are several parts where there seems like entire chunks are missing. Sometimes you just ask yourself "What happened?" Or wonder if the author meant to say something and left it open. This makes it very confusing and it brakes the sequence of the story. 4. This story has the potential of being one of the BEST stories of this website. HOWEVER, the lack of care from the writer to update, check for mistakes, missing pieces, and most importantly, NO UPDATES IN ALMOST HALF A YEAR, make it difficult to continue to support this book. If updates where at least once a month, then maybe it would be worth it, but as it stands, I am seriously considering deleting this from my reading list. I will wait for the 6 month mark and if nothing changes, then sadly I will have to say goodbye to this. 5. I do not mind waiting for a good story, but not for this long, and not for a story where the writer does not care for her own work by making sure that at least it is written and reviewed before posting. My advice for the writer: Re-read every chapter and figure out what parts are not clear, and what is missing out of a scene or dialog. If necessary, rewrite and post updated chapters and fix the parts that seem ambiguous. Pay attention and appreciate your readers, people in this site can be extremely generous, but please don't take anyone for granted and don't string everyone into believing that you care more than you really do not only for this story, but for those who take the time to read and follow. Life in the real world can be really though, and we all understand. So if you no longer have the time or inspiration to continue, we can understand; but please be honest and set the story as "On hold", or remove it altogether rather than make others believe that everything is fine. You have the potential to be an excellent writer. Your ideas are good and original, but I would hope that you make an outline of where this story is going to be moving towards, and work from there. Write several chapters ahead of time and let the readers know that updates will be every week, 2, or even every month. Just don't keep everyone hoping and waiting by dangling a carrot in the shape of an update just to keep us here. I wish you the best of luck and hope that you will become a more active writer and prove to everyone (including me) that you truly care not only for this story, but for all the readers who have spent time and money to invest in you and this story.
If this novel has been abandoned all the chapters in privilege needs to be released. It very frustrating when you spend so much coins $$$ and the author stops updating.
the story would be amazing if it had nothing to do with can you mend my broken heart, cuz I don't get how the book is turning all godly and stuff, it's really nice tho but the whole godd stuff justade it look weird when comparing it to the other one
Is this novel complete? Says 3 months since last updated so Iβm wondering if itβs complete or not. I donβt want to spend anymore coins in a novel that the author doesnβt plan on completing. Itβs happened before to me and Iβm still upset about it. Iβll give another review once I know if this is complete or ongoing.
Am very attached to the book and its encouraging so much I love it I hope you will update soon I'm dying to continue reading it am just eagering waiting for the update
It is inspiring people who are in love to support each other and to sacrifice for there love no matter the circumstances and challanges that they are facing
Reveal Spoiler Ur writing is great ......great work I must say Was captivated so greatly ...keep it rolling more strength and knowledgeπππππππ€©π€©π₯°π₯°π―π―π―π―π―
Reveal Spoiler I love how the characters have been brought out. It's more like watching a movie in my head while reading the words. I am in love with the book.
Niharika Bhol you have done justice to this book and I wish you qick recovery so that you can continue from where you stop. Because you stop at the interesting part of the story. I love everything about it, the story line, the character etc everything is perfect. Thanks for keeping us entertained.
Hi, Absolutely love this book! Just Disappointed last chapters were dublicated and was charged for them! Book is unfinished and not seen any udpates for over a month, which is a shame, was looking forward to the ending!
First of all i have the cover of the book and that is what drew me iN at first but ive gone in a little and then ts a Lovely book and the story line flows easily.
This book is the best with the part 1 made me look for this part and the author is the best πππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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why there are no updates, is it dropped, please let me know. started liking the novel. please uodate so as we know[img=faceslap][img=recommend]
Plz update it fast i cant wait to read anymore why havent u updated this story in this month yet i am so excited to read further chapters plz dont give up on this book plz plz plz i want to continue reading this beautifull love story till the end plz let it be a happy ending tooooπ€©β£πI will eagerly wait for ur recent updates and read this beautifull story till the endπππ€
The book is interesting but the update is coming late....So I'll like the author to update fast..........................thanks and more grease to ur elbow
Reveal Spoiler This story is the best I've ever read..very fascinating and interesting...i hope the writer will complete the story..more grease to ur elbow
Reveal Spoiler Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! γmy email: wind@novel-cat.comγ If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. Iβm sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
Reveal Spoiler Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! γmy email: kazechanku@gmail.comγ If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. Iβm sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
Reveal Spoiler another wonderful chapter you are an amazing writer , i look forward to reading a lot more from you Niharika. I wish you all the best in the future
This is another masterpiece from the author! The diction, the very detailed yet captivating storyline are some of the numerous qualities that make this book stand out. Invest in reading this wonderful piece and be glad you did!
Merry Christmas to you all and to the author I hope you don't slack off cause this is the most interesting story ive ever read Love yaππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Anoter amazing peice by my fav author. All the very best! I look forward to reading more from you Niharika. In tImes when my so called original favs have become inconsistent, you have delivered salvation.