Chapter 18: SORRY PEOPLE
So I read the story in its entirety today.... Lets just say i am not impressed with the work I've put in. If you have read my other stories you'll notice that I've always stuck straight to cannon in everything. Bio-Mechanical Monster was supposed to be the BIG THING that breaks that but really despite the fact that it strays from the MCU 'cannon' its just poorly written and rushed and filled with plot holes and lazy writing.
What does this mean?
WELL, what it means is I need a break. First of all. Between Twins of the Sea and the start of this one was around a day and Twins had almost 3 chaps per day. Which is insane to think about because I write them during the day, I don't have a stock pile. It's basically fresh from my fingers everyday and without a detailed plan, it crumbles, and I make it up as I go.
Obviously, this isn't any good. I'm not happy, you're not happy, and it's just shit.
SO
I'm going to take a break. Idk how long, maybe I'll work on something else for a bit, while planning the entire story. I'm sorry if this makes you upset, but really its unfair for you guys to read basically half assed rushed chaps. When I'm ready and focused and prepared WITH a stockpile. I will post 10-20 chaps at once before maybe 1 a day. The story will follow the 'same' plot but will be changed in somethings. Kane will be the same, Elizabeth will be there, Venom too.
Just the arcs will be better, more detailed, and not look like a monkey wrote them in a zoo. Although maybe they should? Anyway, that's my piece. I'm sorry again, but this story is kinda my little precious one because it will be the first semi 'my own' story.
Anyway!
See you guys whenever~
-Monkey
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