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Writer did not research. Also, bad grammar...................................................................................................
I don't like it. First the translation is so bad it's barely readable. Second this guy said he was an avid gamer, if so why is he being so stupid. He doesn't look at his status or skills. He's not even trying to survive using the game interface. He's just doing random things. He's a moron. The guy doesn't try to figure out his system and just bumbles along randomly. He's got the intelligence of 5 year old with ADHD. Don't bother. I don't feel like the author is serious giving us a character like this who doesn't even act with basic human intelligence.
Very interesting story and quite detailed with descriptions. I liked all the creator's thoughts. However, there were some grammatical errors somewhere in the story.
I'm liking the direction of the world. The character could use some work but all in all it's awesome. I look forward to seeing how the story develops.
I don't know if the MC is stupid or something, but when the MC thought it was a dream he was scared and doubtful, then he learned that it's real his excited. if it's just a dream in the first place why dint you just accepted the offer to see where the dream take him. if you know its reality then you should think how long you can survive beforehand and what kind of hardship you will go through.
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usual nonsense book that doesn't make sense doesn't have great grammar or pacing without any explanation. just whisks the reader into random situations. I dont expect greatness from a non English source of books but there are lots of helpful grammar sites like grammarly that HELP YOU FOR FREE. not worth it. hurts my head to read
This is an interesting book to read! I love the cute cover too! Absolutely love it!! One of my favorite book. thank you so much, author! following up!!
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It’s a really good balance of progression and developement of the characters shift in personailty. Please make more chapters I love the book so far!
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Author only Rates his own novel because he beleives in it!!!!!! I know that it is not a good idea to do this, But I have to share this amazing story with as many people as possible.
I am updating my review as an author. This review might contain spoilers because somehow, we have already reached 150 chapters, and the story has progressed by leaps and bounds. At first, this novel was considered a general take of combining cultivation and some MMORPG elements. Still, that idea got scrapped pretty quickly just because of the way some boundaries should not lock the character progression. There are many new and really cool ideas that I am trying to integrate, and the first thing that will happen is the full rewrite of the first 10-20 chapter because of the pacing and the story opening. I feel that people that have started reading the novel and didn't get to the most interesting part 30+ chapter is because the start is really badly written and edited. This writing journey has been a blessing for me, and I will keep on going as long as readers keep on appreciating my efforts and the story. I am blessed to have so many good readers that encourage me. You all are awesome! With Love, Simvolick
Reveal Spoiler Writer did not research. Also, bad grammar...................................................................................................
I don't like it. First the translation is so bad it's barely readable. Second this guy said he was an avid gamer, if so why is he being so stupid. He doesn't look at his status or skills. He's not even trying to survive using the game interface. He's just doing random things. He's a moron. The guy doesn't try to figure out his system and just bumbles along randomly. He's got the intelligence of 5 year old with ADHD. Don't bother. I don't feel like the author is serious giving us a character like this who doesn't even act with basic human intelligence.
Very interesting story and quite detailed with descriptions. I liked all the creator's thoughts. However, there were some grammatical errors somewhere in the story.
I'm liking the direction of the world. The character could use some work but all in all it's awesome. I look forward to seeing how the story develops.
I don't know if the MC is stupid or something, but when the MC thought it was a dream he was scared and doubtful, then he learned that it's real his excited. if it's just a dream in the first place why dint you just accepted the offer to see where the dream take him. if you know its reality then you should think how long you can survive beforehand and what kind of hardship you will go through.
Reveal Spoiler usual nonsense book that doesn't make sense doesn't have great grammar or pacing without any explanation. just whisks the reader into random situations. I dont expect greatness from a non English source of books but there are lots of helpful grammar sites like grammarly that HELP YOU FOR FREE. not worth it. hurts my head to read
This is an interesting book to read! I love the cute cover too! Absolutely love it!! One of my favorite book. thank you so much, author! following up!!
FREE ENTRY CONTEST! Get Your Book Hardcover Published & Win $50,000 Hi! Over 11k authors joined SWA I, and had won over $200,000. This time we have launched SWA II, focusing on entertaining novels and raising the first prize to $50,000! It is time to monetize your book! We have a financial support program for every entry, not to mention the access of winning the grand prizes and hardcover publishing. Imagine your book is put on the shelf with a best seller golden label! Both posted stories and new stories can participate. Don't miss this chance, as your writing deserves way much more. Join us now! Please visit https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy for more information or contact: kerawood.review@gmail.com
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It’s a really good balance of progression and developement of the characters shift in personailty. Please make more chapters I love the book so far!
it was the no harem for me ............................ ........................................................... ...............................
I WANT MOREEEEEE I WANT MOREEEEEE I WANT MOREEEEEE I WANT MOREEEEEE I WANT MOREEEEEE I WANT MOREEEEEE I WANT MOREEEEEE I WANT MOREEEEEE I WANT MOREEEEEE I WANT MOREEEEEE I WANT MOREEEEEE I WANT MOREEEEEE I WANT MOREEEEEE I WANT MOREEEEEE
Reveal Spoiler it's fantastic.As author says, you must read it. ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
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Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
Author only Rates his own novel because he beleives in it!!!!!! I know that it is not a good idea to do this, But I have to share this amazing story with as many people as possible.
I am updating my review as an author. This review might contain spoilers because somehow, we have already reached 150 chapters, and the story has progressed by leaps and bounds. At first, this novel was considered a general take of combining cultivation and some MMORPG elements. Still, that idea got scrapped pretty quickly just because of the way some boundaries should not lock the character progression. There are many new and really cool ideas that I am trying to integrate, and the first thing that will happen is the full rewrite of the first 10-20 chapter because of the pacing and the story opening. I feel that people that have started reading the novel and didn't get to the most interesting part 30+ chapter is because the start is really badly written and edited. This writing journey has been a blessing for me, and I will keep on going as long as readers keep on appreciating my efforts and the story. I am blessed to have so many good readers that encourage me. You all are awesome! With Love, Simvolick
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