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4.16% The Concession / Chapter 2: Prologue

Chapter 2: Prologue

They're at it again, I can feel it.

All they do is take, take, take, till there's nothing left.

A coldness in my belly...

It springs up inside of me, filling me up. It feels like a river, it flows, maybe it'll wash him away, maybe.

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"You were the signet of perfection," He looked at him.

He was dressed in a black cloak and on it was a letter, boldly pasted.

"Full of wisdom and perfect in beauty." he continued.

"You were in Eden, the garden of God; and every precious stone was your covering."

"On the day that you were created, they were prepared."

He stalked around him, brown eyes trained on his.

"You were blameless in your ways from the day that you were created..." He stopped.

"Until iniquity was found in you."

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Yes, this is a Christian genre fiction that has elements of mystery and suspense, much like my first two books, In The Last Days and FORTIFIED.

As always I try portraying the effects of darkness and how you can overcome it with light. I tell you about the power you didn't know both have over you if you let it.

It's a choice, good or evil, darkness or light, sin or righteousness.

The ball is in our courts.


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