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Jovi_Line

This novel is somehow similar to another novel I've read here on WebNovel. Like, there's a shop where people can have their wish granted but they have to pay for it. The difference is that this novel's mc is a female and the payment she's asking is actually very simple. Also, there's no transmigration here and no system. This novel is a good read 😊

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Rena_Gindi

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Micky_Zenzo

Amazing novel author keep it up but please we need update always so we ask of you to always update it please ........................................

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Fhiisa
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Eleanor_Kezer

Personally I liked it a lot it was very easy to read. It was also well and has a nice plot to it as well time flew by when i was reading it to wich is good too😊😊😊😊

3yr
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Tinestine

The premise sounds similar to xxxholic by clamp (a manga if you’re interested). There is a mysterious woman who run a wish granting shop and the only people who can see or get to the shop are people who the shop wants to help. the only real difference I can see just by reading the first few chapters is that this story is about the woman and not her apprentice. I am definitely interested is seeing how this story will go.

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Karyna_Rodriguez

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Xan_Mei
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Wondering whether there would be an ML and what kind of ML could it be? A God perhaps? But really, she’s fine on her own. A foody FL.😍😍😍😍

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Galetron

Interesting concept. The FL is already all powerful, hopping from one world to another to rebalance by granting wishes. No signs of a ML yet, but I’m alright with that. Hoping to see how the novel progresses.

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Ndifor_Nibrian

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Rena_Gindi

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Tashady
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This was pretty fascinating but I should warn you that the second scenario isn't over by chapter 40! Still, I would recommend it as a quiet read (and the kirin's wish made me a bit weepy!) πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

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UnknownRose

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TanusreeTanu

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Rena_Gindi

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MAsteri

Premise of the story is quite interesting, however the way it is written can definitely be improved. The characters are kind of 1 dimensional, not much complex human emotions, thoughts or feelings present. There's not much excitement or twist in plot, gives a kind of "its just like this" sort of feeling. There's not a whole lot of finer details and it might feel a little rushed due to the short chapters. There's no rating for translation quality (for some reason) but I'll just say that there's a few grammatical errors or typos, not enough to impede reading but it's still there. Editor recommended, if this novel gets chosen. (kinda doubt tho) Better vocab can definitely be used, for sure. "sound location" πŸ€”πŸ‘€πŸ€¦πŸ»β€β™€οΈ Overall it's an okay read, nothing great but not too bad either. Recommended for light reading. More emotions could definitely be written into the story(so much wasted potential 😩)

4yr
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Sharon_Job_6452

overall good story... this seems very intriguing and enough suspense to keep your attention to the story!!πŸ™πŸΌπŸ™πŸΌπŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€ can't wait to see how it goes...

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TanusreeTanu

Good story[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Tanusree_Singha_6998

So far so good story.😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

4yr
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Jovi_Line

This novel is somehow similar to another novel I've read here on WebNovel. Like, there's a shop where people can have their wish granted but they have to pay for it. The difference is that this novel's mc is a female and the payment she's asking is actually very simple. Also, there's no transmigration here and no system. This novel is a good read 😊

3yr
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Rena_Gindi

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3yr
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Micky_Zenzo

Amazing novel author keep it up but please we need update always so we ask of you to always update it please ........................................

3yr
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Fhiisa
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Eleanor_Kezer

Personally I liked it a lot it was very easy to read. It was also well and has a nice plot to it as well time flew by when i was reading it to wich is good too😊😊😊😊

3yr
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Tinestine

The premise sounds similar to xxxholic by clamp (a manga if you’re interested). There is a mysterious woman who run a wish granting shop and the only people who can see or get to the shop are people who the shop wants to help. the only real difference I can see just by reading the first few chapters is that this story is about the woman and not her apprentice. I am definitely interested is seeing how this story will go.

3yr
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Karyna_Rodriguez

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Xan_Mei
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Wondering whether there would be an ML and what kind of ML could it be? A God perhaps? But really, she’s fine on her own. A foody FL.😍😍😍😍

3yr
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Galetron

Interesting concept. The FL is already all powerful, hopping from one world to another to rebalance by granting wishes. No signs of a ML yet, but I’m alright with that. Hoping to see how the novel progresses.

3yr
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Ndifor_Nibrian

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Rena_Gindi

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anakalia884

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Tashady
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This was pretty fascinating but I should warn you that the second scenario isn't over by chapter 40! Still, I would recommend it as a quiet read (and the kirin's wish made me a bit weepy!) πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

3yr
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UnknownRose

I won't say it is a bad or a good novel Description but it have a interesting novel Description so author work hard πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“βœŠβœŠβœŠβœŠβœŠπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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TanusreeTanu

Author,,,Please continue to update chapter [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Rena_Gindi

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4yr
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MAsteri

Premise of the story is quite interesting, however the way it is written can definitely be improved. The characters are kind of 1 dimensional, not much complex human emotions, thoughts or feelings present. There's not much excitement or twist in plot, gives a kind of "its just like this" sort of feeling. There's not a whole lot of finer details and it might feel a little rushed due to the short chapters. There's no rating for translation quality (for some reason) but I'll just say that there's a few grammatical errors or typos, not enough to impede reading but it's still there. Editor recommended, if this novel gets chosen. (kinda doubt tho) Better vocab can definitely be used, for sure. "sound location" πŸ€”πŸ‘€πŸ€¦πŸ»β€β™€οΈ Overall it's an okay read, nothing great but not too bad either. Recommended for light reading. More emotions could definitely be written into the story(so much wasted potential 😩)

4yr
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Sharon_Job_6452

overall good story... this seems very intriguing and enough suspense to keep your attention to the story!!πŸ™πŸΌπŸ™πŸΌπŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€ can't wait to see how it goes...

4yr
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TanusreeTanu

Good story[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Tanusree_Singha_6998

So far so good story.😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

4yr
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