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Ok since no one had the gals to write a review, allow me to do it. Ok, honestly I've only read the first chapter but 1 author please write shorter paragraphs, it is easier to read that way 2 the action was really packed but you didn't properly elaborate the intense feelings the MC was going through. 3 even with that the way the author is writing the surroundings is incredibly detailed
It was really good. It has a good flow and a captivating start,despite its long paragraphs and lack of dialogue.Minimum grammar mistakes and overall a very pleasing reading exprerience.
Ok since no one had the gals to write a review, allow me to do it. Ok, honestly I've only read the first chapter but 1 author please write shorter paragraphs, it is easier to read that way 2 the action was really packed but you didn't properly elaborate the intense feelings the MC was going through. 3 even with that the way the author is writing the surroundings is incredibly detailed
It was really good. It has a good flow and a captivating start,despite its long paragraphs and lack of dialogue.Minimum grammar mistakes and overall a very pleasing reading exprerience.