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Write a reviewLife isn't quite what I thought I'd be, When I was a kid in VoIP, I thought when I get older, I'd marry her, I told her, Now I'm 26 and I work in an office, 9 till 5's not the best I'll be honest. If I could change a single thing, I'd make it me and not him...
This fanfic is good honestly, the MC has a well written personnality, he has some well written backstory and the dialogues between him and his friends are natural
...I am probably not going to write too much in here. Well, it's a good story. The author doesn't update very consistently. The OC is kinda ooc sometimes, and a few times, the KnB Characters act even more ooc. Now, I ain't gonna go to the specifics, cuz that may be spoilers. But I'm just gonna say this: You should read this, but don't expect too much stability in updates.
I know i gave this a five-star and it deserves one for truly being an entertaining read but chapter eight completely ruined this story for me, i hate harems and this one made no sense, once paragraph completely made me lose interest, such a shame.
I give 5 stars to support you because it is very difficult to find a KNB fanfic that is no yaoi, so cheer up and don't give up. By the way I wrote this using Google Translate so please understand.😁
This is pretty good so far. I'll probably change this review once the author adds more chapters to this novel. I just hope you don't make the MC grow too fast. I would like to see MC train his basic skills to the maxiumum level as possible in middle school. Then, have him go out all ham in high school. Also, basketball is a team sport so have some teamwork moments. It's fine if there are moments MC just absolutely carries the entire team to victory and all. Please make sure not to add too much of it, or else it will just get bland and boring. Thank you author for this piece of work.
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Life isn't quite what I thought I'd be, When I was a kid in VoIP, I thought when I get older, I'd marry her, I told her, Now I'm 26 and I work in an office, 9 till 5's not the best I'll be honest. If I could change a single thing, I'd make it me and not him...
This fanfic is good honestly, the MC has a well written personnality, he has some well written backstory and the dialogues between him and his friends are natural
...I am probably not going to write too much in here. Well, it's a good story. The author doesn't update very consistently. The OC is kinda ooc sometimes, and a few times, the KnB Characters act even more ooc. Now, I ain't gonna go to the specifics, cuz that may be spoilers. But I'm just gonna say this: You should read this, but don't expect too much stability in updates.
I know i gave this a five-star and it deserves one for truly being an entertaining read but chapter eight completely ruined this story for me, i hate harems and this one made no sense, once paragraph completely made me lose interest, such a shame.
I give 5 stars to support you because it is very difficult to find a KNB fanfic that is no yaoi, so cheer up and don't give up. By the way I wrote this using Google Translate so please understand.😁
This is pretty good so far. I'll probably change this review once the author adds more chapters to this novel. I just hope you don't make the MC grow too fast. I would like to see MC train his basic skills to the maxiumum level as possible in middle school. Then, have him go out all ham in high school. Also, basketball is a team sport so have some teamwork moments. It's fine if there are moments MC just absolutely carries the entire team to victory and all. Please make sure not to add too much of it, or else it will just get bland and boring. Thank you author for this piece of work.
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