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Our MC was never given an actual name but he went by Alpha, he was born on Earth and raised to be an assassin. He was one day given a mission to take out a family known to be selling national secrets. During the mission, Alpha had allowed some women who were held captive there live. He already knew that what he did was against the rules and had already accepted his fate. When he got back to superior he reported what happened, he was punished by getting killed for not following orders. His last thoughts were "At least I got the chance to finish 'Naruto' and 'My Hero Academia' before I died.
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This is my first series so please don't complain if it's not to your liking.
I would gladly accept helpful criticism to help me improve the writing quality.
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As a fellow writer i want to give you some tips 1. use correct language and grammar, a.e say you, you guys or you all instead of yall and cause or because instead of cuz 2. before you write the chapter take a few minutes to plan what you are going to do in the chapter and why you want to do it 3. dont overexplain everything the mc does and why he does it. keep some mystery 4. DONT RUSH for the live if God do not rush, I know wanting your mc to be super op and to do super awesome stuff like sending a meteor on a ant or somthing but you have to take some time. same with the relationships dont just make a girl fall for him in the span of 10 minutes. it's fine if you so it with someone the mc really loves but only once or twice if you do it with every harem member it will seem rushed. 5. Use a grammar checker when you have written the chapter. I use grammarly cause it's free and good. and always proof read your chapters. I know it's boring reading somthing you have just written but you really have to read it to make sure it's good. That's all for now, I will give some tips when I see that you need them also I also love the madara in mha but what made that good was the pacing, it took the author 98 chapters and he still isn't on the battle between all for one and all might dont take this criticism personally because I simply want this story to be as good as possible
would be great if more chapters were available but since there aren't many chapters there is not much story development the writing detail is phenomenal compared to most of the other things I've read on WebNovel so far by the way I haven't read very many of the things posted on WebNovel and what I mean is I don't remember much. so far this is in the top 10 best things I've ever read
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