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This is a really nice novel! Based on reading just the first few chapters, I can feel already that the plot has a high potential. The character design is very good. Each of them has a unique history and personality. The choice of title and cover is also interesting. It is actually the thing that drew me to give a review of this novel. I am getting intrigued while reading and can't wait for the next update. Definitely, adding it to my collection. Good job, author!
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I really enjoyed the book, I've read it twice and I noted the edited version, good job, keep it up, author. I really recommend this book to all the readers who are interested in slow but sweet romance and approaches. This book contains many main leads and sub-stories which helps the story travel forward with a lot of connections... I hope that everyone can give the book a read for at least 30 chapters before judging the efficiency and storyline and jumping to conclusions. Trust me I speak of experience! Can't wait for the rest of the update!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Mel is just who has no control over her mouth๐.... Mr.T / Brenton / Leon , u r not evil she will like u despite of ur past scars๐ฅบ..... I really like grandpa Rick for being such a caring , loving person ๐๐
I'd like how you utilize your words to express an explosive thoughts, Good job, Author! Aside from that, it's well written not too fast and not slow. Keep up the good work! Your book is a master piece.
HIGHLY RECOMMENDED!!! A marvelous start the first volume is full of twists and turns and it concentrated on each and every character, every character has their own time to shine and capture our attention it gives out a relatability to each character, all the characters are quite sensible and unique in their own ways which is another attractive attribute as an add on the humor is just the icing on the cake it's just one of a kind story which screams mystery in every single chapter I just so hope you continue with the next volume and till the end want to see the next part of the characters journey. Just a big shout out to the author for this masterpiece well done author...๐ค
I'm shocked with how you can hook me with just a few chapters. I have to say, you did pretty well on trying to give the readers a sense of mystery. The characters are well-designed. Plus, you did a good job on making their own unique way of speech.
A really cool and fun read. If you want some royal escapism, this is it. 1. Writing quality: The writing quality is actually pretty good, although there are a few grammatical and typographical errors, But they do not take away from the meaning of the sentence. 2. Stability of Updates: Regular 3. Story Development: Really good. Develops pretty quickly and the conflict is established early on. Pacing is awesome too, and you can see the clear direction it is going towards. 4. Character Design: The characters are already very likeable and their motivations are very clear. But, this is also an area that has some room improvement, especially regarding decision making by the characters and the reactions to their surroundings. I have shared detailed suggestions in individual chapters. 5. World Background: Awesome!! You see all the key players right away. There is some room for greater fleshing out of the surroundings but it can always be done in a second edit and does not take away from the story. Thank you very much, dear author, for the great work!
"In the clutches of the dark prince" has captivated me in reading further. I like how the story started at the beginning of the chapter. Very promising main characters. I like the conversations between the main protagonists. The story developed very well throughout the chapters. I'm curious to know what happens next. The book cover is fantastic. Well done, Author!
A delightful read, I must say. Filled with excellent worldbuilding and enjoyable characters. The author does a fantastic job with the writing and making sure it's on point. Kudos, and keep doing a good work.
Like this story! The plot is interesting and make me want to know more and more ๐ I'm still in the beginning but I have fallen in love with this story and the characters. If I can give you some feedback, maybe in the writing aspects. Sometimes you made mistake at arranging the sentences so I encourage you to read and learn more in this aspect. But because I'm still in the beginning of the chapters, I don't know if you've been better at this at the latest chapter (I hope so and very happy for that! ๐) Good job author! ๐๐๐๐
I love how mysterious the first chapter is! It's really intriguing and instantly makes me curious๐ I think I like ML the most๐ Good job, author!!
I love your story! I'm still in chapter 9 and I will continue to read more as this story is very interesting. The characters are dynamic and the one that makes this story thrilling aside from its world-building. Though I'm more curious about the male lead๐ As the author said, some grammar needs fixing but it didn't take away my good reading experience. I really like this one! Keep it up author!:)
This book is playing with mysteries and curiousities! Two powerful words that keeps readers wanting to read more. Awesome book and writing quality. Cheers to you author!
Normally, l don't like naive MCs because l get very frustrated with the decisions they make. But in this masterpiece, the MC is cute and heals my dark soul! The character interactions are nice and the story is well written! Keep it up, author!
OMG, I never thought I'd be attracted toward a contemporary romance! they're always so cliche with a similar concept. But the first chaoter hooked me successfully! Keep updating!
Omg what a plot! Amazing .I love mystic persons .The background and characters chitchatting and chemistry sounds good. The cover is so nice it really hooked me down. Great effort writer.
Did not expect to like the story as much as I do based on the synopsis but the story quickly proved me wrong. 10/10 very well written novel. I love the mystery and suspense. This is my first novel from this author but I cannot wait to see the full reveal by the end of the book.
First of all, thanks for writing and sharing this novel :) I admit that in the first chapter, I was a bit unsure regarding what exactly this story was and to which direction it will go. I'm really glad I read the second chapter! You truly have a way with words in your dialogues. This definitely seems to be your strong point in writing. They feel so real. It's really easy to picture the characters speaking with each others. Also, some of your dialogues are so witty haha ๐๐
It's a special kind of story, Honestly, I'm not one for romance novels but this had me clawing my way out of it. In a good way! I didn't even notice that I had read that many chapters. And If i didn't stop I might've caught up to the latest release. and that's not really good for me because then I'll be checking every five minutes if it had updated or not. Well just from what I've written above it's really good. as the author have said, secrets have been placed all over the story. I'm even anticipating if she has any sort of secret background that she doesn't know or is even hiding. Great job author!
this book is amazing and I cant wait for the next chapters to come out. Amazing work author you should be proud of yourself and the work you put in
A charming tale with a lovable protagonist. While I must confess I did not truly sympathise at first with the protagonist, I must confess she grew on me as the story advanced. There is a youthful naivetรฉ about her that makes her very endearing. The chemistry seemed a tad obligatory, which confused me at first, but now that I think back on it it rather suits the beginning of the story very well. So I assume itโs done on purpose. Overall, itโs a riveting tale and a pleasure to read.
A rather fresh start and unique approach to the genre! I say I'm impressed! This is something to be read and to be advertised to others. To all new here, give this story a chance. It will captivate you. Btw, I am from review swap thread. Good luck in the future!
Overall this story is very interesting. The characters' thoughts, emotions and narratives were portrayed well. I could sense something intriguinh and suspense in this. Good job author! I'll keep reading the rest. Keep it up!
Fabulous..... I am so impressed with the writing of this book, its very interesting for a first book by the author. The story develops in its now pace and its curious to know what happens next Enjoyable story, looking forward lots more chapter to come. Congratulations to the author on her/his first book, very well written ๐ ๐ ๐
This novel is pretty good in my opinion. However, a review is a review and I need to state my thoughts on the flaws. (I ignored the grammatical errors as requested. :) ) First of all, some of the dialogue feels a bit off at certain points of the story. However, you did manage to fix that in the later chapters so keep up the good work on editing some of the earlier chapters. The characters are pretty much fleshed out, but well, due to the first flaw, they could feel robotic. However, as I said before, you did fix it up a bit in the later chapters. To be honest, your world is pretty good, although I prefer not knowing the characters' names first. You can introduce your characters through dialogue which also helps with the plot. However, you can just ignore this if you don't feel comfortable doing so. After all, that would be a lot of peer-editing to do. That's all I have to say. Keep on improving and good luck!
hello,dear writer, I am the novel editor of NovelCat, wind. After reading your appealing novel here, I sincerely invite you to join us as an honorary NovelCat author, let's give your book more chances! once your book gets exclusive contracted with our platform, you can get lots of bonuses! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! ใmy email: [email protected]ใ If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. Iโm sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
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Interesting story and different sort of character. Liked the first chapter and it makes me want to read more so I did read more and you didn't disappoint me.
Woah that was a good read :D Alright, let's start, first off, the beginning was great. It had a powerful hook and enough mystery to keep me wanting to read more and find out what happened and what will unfold. So good job, author! :D The characters are lovable, and their interactions are very cute and it felt genuine, hehe! I love how each character has their own quirks, making them distinguishable, which is a plus, yay! The only thing that could use some work is the punctuation, I guess? It's a bit distracting, but this is still a great book that's smooth to read :D Great work, author! Cheering for you! <3
This is a really nice novel! Based on reading just the first few chapters, I can feel already that the plot has a high potential. The character design is very good. Each of them has a unique history and personality. The choice of title and cover is also interesting. It is actually the thing that drew me to give a review of this novel. I am getting intrigued while reading and can't wait for the next update. Definitely, adding it to my collection. Good job, author!
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I really enjoyed the book, I've read it twice and I noted the edited version, good job, keep it up, author. I really recommend this book to all the readers who are interested in slow but sweet romance and approaches. This book contains many main leads and sub-stories which helps the story travel forward with a lot of connections... I hope that everyone can give the book a read for at least 30 chapters before judging the efficiency and storyline and jumping to conclusions. Trust me I speak of experience! Can't wait for the rest of the update!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Reveal Spoiler Mel is just who has no control over her mouth๐.... Mr.T / Brenton / Leon , u r not evil she will like u despite of ur past scars๐ฅบ..... I really like grandpa Rick for being such a caring , loving person ๐๐
I'd like how you utilize your words to express an explosive thoughts, Good job, Author! Aside from that, it's well written not too fast and not slow. Keep up the good work! Your book is a master piece.
HIGHLY RECOMMENDED!!! A marvelous start the first volume is full of twists and turns and it concentrated on each and every character, every character has their own time to shine and capture our attention it gives out a relatability to each character, all the characters are quite sensible and unique in their own ways which is another attractive attribute as an add on the humor is just the icing on the cake it's just one of a kind story which screams mystery in every single chapter I just so hope you continue with the next volume and till the end want to see the next part of the characters journey. Just a big shout out to the author for this masterpiece well done author...๐ค
I'm shocked with how you can hook me with just a few chapters. I have to say, you did pretty well on trying to give the readers a sense of mystery. The characters are well-designed. Plus, you did a good job on making their own unique way of speech.
A really cool and fun read. If you want some royal escapism, this is it. 1. Writing quality: The writing quality is actually pretty good, although there are a few grammatical and typographical errors, But they do not take away from the meaning of the sentence. 2. Stability of Updates: Regular 3. Story Development: Really good. Develops pretty quickly and the conflict is established early on. Pacing is awesome too, and you can see the clear direction it is going towards. 4. Character Design: The characters are already very likeable and their motivations are very clear. But, this is also an area that has some room improvement, especially regarding decision making by the characters and the reactions to their surroundings. I have shared detailed suggestions in individual chapters. 5. World Background: Awesome!! You see all the key players right away. There is some room for greater fleshing out of the surroundings but it can always be done in a second edit and does not take away from the story. Thank you very much, dear author, for the great work!
"In the clutches of the dark prince" has captivated me in reading further. I like how the story started at the beginning of the chapter. Very promising main characters. I like the conversations between the main protagonists. The story developed very well throughout the chapters. I'm curious to know what happens next. The book cover is fantastic. Well done, Author!
A delightful read, I must say. Filled with excellent worldbuilding and enjoyable characters. The author does a fantastic job with the writing and making sure it's on point. Kudos, and keep doing a good work.
Like this story! The plot is interesting and make me want to know more and more ๐ I'm still in the beginning but I have fallen in love with this story and the characters. If I can give you some feedback, maybe in the writing aspects. Sometimes you made mistake at arranging the sentences so I encourage you to read and learn more in this aspect. But because I'm still in the beginning of the chapters, I don't know if you've been better at this at the latest chapter (I hope so and very happy for that! ๐) Good job author! ๐๐๐๐
I love how mysterious the first chapter is! It's really intriguing and instantly makes me curious๐ I think I like ML the most๐ Good job, author!!
I love your story! I'm still in chapter 9 and I will continue to read more as this story is very interesting. The characters are dynamic and the one that makes this story thrilling aside from its world-building. Though I'm more curious about the male lead๐ As the author said, some grammar needs fixing but it didn't take away my good reading experience. I really like this one! Keep it up author!:)
This book is playing with mysteries and curiousities! Two powerful words that keeps readers wanting to read more. Awesome book and writing quality. Cheers to you author!
Normally, l don't like naive MCs because l get very frustrated with the decisions they make. But in this masterpiece, the MC is cute and heals my dark soul! The character interactions are nice and the story is well written! Keep it up, author!
OMG, I never thought I'd be attracted toward a contemporary romance! they're always so cliche with a similar concept. But the first chaoter hooked me successfully! Keep updating!
Omg what a plot! Amazing .I love mystic persons .The background and characters chitchatting and chemistry sounds good. The cover is so nice it really hooked me down. Great effort writer.
Did not expect to like the story as much as I do based on the synopsis but the story quickly proved me wrong. 10/10 very well written novel. I love the mystery and suspense. This is my first novel from this author but I cannot wait to see the full reveal by the end of the book.
First of all, thanks for writing and sharing this novel :) I admit that in the first chapter, I was a bit unsure regarding what exactly this story was and to which direction it will go. I'm really glad I read the second chapter! You truly have a way with words in your dialogues. This definitely seems to be your strong point in writing. They feel so real. It's really easy to picture the characters speaking with each others. Also, some of your dialogues are so witty haha ๐๐
It's a special kind of story, Honestly, I'm not one for romance novels but this had me clawing my way out of it. In a good way! I didn't even notice that I had read that many chapters. And If i didn't stop I might've caught up to the latest release. and that's not really good for me because then I'll be checking every five minutes if it had updated or not. Well just from what I've written above it's really good. as the author have said, secrets have been placed all over the story. I'm even anticipating if she has any sort of secret background that she doesn't know or is even hiding. Great job author!
this book is amazing and I cant wait for the next chapters to come out. Amazing work author you should be proud of yourself and the work you put in
A charming tale with a lovable protagonist. While I must confess I did not truly sympathise at first with the protagonist, I must confess she grew on me as the story advanced. There is a youthful naivetรฉ about her that makes her very endearing. The chemistry seemed a tad obligatory, which confused me at first, but now that I think back on it it rather suits the beginning of the story very well. So I assume itโs done on purpose. Overall, itโs a riveting tale and a pleasure to read.
A rather fresh start and unique approach to the genre! I say I'm impressed! This is something to be read and to be advertised to others. To all new here, give this story a chance. It will captivate you. Btw, I am from review swap thread. Good luck in the future!
Overall this story is very interesting. The characters' thoughts, emotions and narratives were portrayed well. I could sense something intriguinh and suspense in this. Good job author! I'll keep reading the rest. Keep it up!
Fabulous..... I am so impressed with the writing of this book, its very interesting for a first book by the author. The story develops in its now pace and its curious to know what happens next Enjoyable story, looking forward lots more chapter to come. Congratulations to the author on her/his first book, very well written ๐ ๐ ๐
This novel is pretty good in my opinion. However, a review is a review and I need to state my thoughts on the flaws. (I ignored the grammatical errors as requested. :) ) First of all, some of the dialogue feels a bit off at certain points of the story. However, you did manage to fix that in the later chapters so keep up the good work on editing some of the earlier chapters. The characters are pretty much fleshed out, but well, due to the first flaw, they could feel robotic. However, as I said before, you did fix it up a bit in the later chapters. To be honest, your world is pretty good, although I prefer not knowing the characters' names first. You can introduce your characters through dialogue which also helps with the plot. However, you can just ignore this if you don't feel comfortable doing so. After all, that would be a lot of peer-editing to do. That's all I have to say. Keep on improving and good luck!
hello,dear writer, I am the novel editor of NovelCat, wind. After reading your appealing novel here, I sincerely invite you to join us as an honorary NovelCat author, let's give your book more chances! once your book gets exclusive contracted with our platform, you can get lots of bonuses! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! ใmy email: [email protected]ใ If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. Iโm sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
Reveal Spoiler Interesting story and different sort of character. Liked the first chapter and it makes me want to read more so I did read more and you didn't disappoint me.
Woah that was a good read :D Alright, let's start, first off, the beginning was great. It had a powerful hook and enough mystery to keep me wanting to read more and find out what happened and what will unfold. So good job, author! :D The characters are lovable, and their interactions are very cute and it felt genuine, hehe! I love how each character has their own quirks, making them distinguishable, which is a plus, yay! The only thing that could use some work is the punctuation, I guess? It's a bit distracting, but this is still a great book that's smooth to read :D Great work, author! Cheering for you! <3