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as of chap 8. MC seems like he is on earth instead of a fantasy world. The system talks too much, think it was supposed to be funny but it wasn't for me.
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So, new reader here. I have some questions before I really delve in because I have seen some flags for me pop up in the first few chapters. I want to know if the relationship between the system and the MC remains as unbalanced as in the first few chapters, or do they form an equilibrium at some point? Also, does the MC get calmer/less temperamental? Finally, please let me know if the system becomes some kind of living thing beyond being in mc’s head/ becomes some kind of love interest? Systems with too much power over hosts are kind of tricky for me, and my enjoyment of them really depends on my mood. Similarly, systems that come to life / romantic interest systems are not what I typically enjoy, and the latter is especially irritating to me. (Unless they’re done really well, with proper reasoning involved.) An emotional Mc having problems adjusting is not an issue for me, I just need to know they will be able to adjust properly. I don’t even need him to submit to the system, just be calmer about it. Please tell me, I want to like this book, but the start reminds me of all the tropes I hate. I’ve seen reviews that state this kind of makes fun of system books, but this seems more like it’s the Mc who doesn’t like systems, not the author? I’m just confused ‘cause it doesn’t seem to match up.
I will never read a novel about a sti gray because They killed my favorite wildlife expert, rip Steve Irwin 😭😭 Well, I'll give it a go, but stingrays suck! 😂 I'll update this once I read some
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My mother told me that I couldn't be a stingray. In response, I decided to ask truck-kun to run over me and turn me into one. At the moment, I'm currently in the form of something like Cthulhu as I type this review on the keyboard with the myriad amount of tentacles I have. Would recommend.
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I want to know if this will be a gender bender novel, cuz the pic on the cover shows a girl?.................................................
An interesting concept for a system story and definitely a fresh read if you are sick to death of face slapping and MCs who are suddenly cultivation gods, master craftsmen, and unbeatable fighters. The descriptions of most of ocean’s creatures seem to be accurate and researched. The combat is descriptive and easy to follow, yet still paced well enough to remain exciting. The dialogue is good and the main character is likable. Nice usage of side-characters as well. Updates regularly and the author is responsive in comments. I gave good marks all around. Only constructive criticisms would be some minor pronoun mistakes once in awhile that makes one or two paragraphs a little confusing, but it only occurs A couple times. Would definitely recommend. 🤘
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Boredom personified. I read this on my alt just to get a good grasp on the story. So far (15 Chapters) it's literally just a fucking sting ray that can't evolve. That's it, that is the only thing unique about it's entire plot. He does get passive upgrades and stuff like that but he's still just a fucking sting ray. Writing Quality- 3 Simply mediocre; no beautiful sentence structure or truly grasping words. Nothing of that sorts Updates- Frequent Story Development-0, None; it's just a stingray that's underwater. All it does is be a stingray and acquire upgrades. Character Design- 0, Literally none There's literally no development, no prior information nothing that can let us formulate even a fucking fandom wiki page for MC. World Background- It's literally just fucking underwater.
Wait is he deadass just a stingray? Does this story have evolution in it or Does he just get older? Im on Like chapter 20 I think and i enjoy the story its just kinda boring but it isnt bad tho
The real score: 4/5 Well, I wasn't expecting this. A system novel that is set out to mock the system Novel model. You would probably think that this is like spider or slime where theirs magic and stuff. But no, the upgrades that our unwitting protagonist gets are along the lines of "better poison" or "deep pressure fins." Yea, he doesn't get super powers. This is a bad situation and he's trying to m, well not make the best of it and more survive it. To give you an idea, health is regenerated slowly, by resting and letting wounds close. Also eating. Eating is important. Heck, the guy isn't even isekaied, he's off the coast of Italy. And since he's in the ocean, we have no idea of the time period. So anything can happen in the future. While also being so restrictive, because the protagonist is only a stingray.
the story is good so far but there is some chapter that I need to re-read again at a certain part because I don't understand, but I only read around 40? and English is my second language so my writing is meh sorry
I've read all the free chapters when I make this review. Although I'm not a big fan of a system-themed story, but I can't understand how the author deserves all these bullies omg. It's written well enough to be understood, it's descriptive, and it's constantly rewritten. This is definitely worth a shot, guys.
Not a comment on the story at all just a random dude who read the title of the story as I'm gay and wanted to share. Here's a small story about pineapples. The end.
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I'll be honest, I didn't like the MC word usage and method of speaking but otherwise it made sense for his IQ level, which gave it realism vibe
Just ignore this review, i do it just bcs i wanna see the rating up and having more people know it, also bcs of one of author s previous work which has over 1 mil words (if i m right), which i believe should get more attention i didn t say is good, didn t say is bad, but just for the effort i really believe more people should check it out, it has the same amount of reviews as this novel despite having like, double views, which is a shame, heard the plot is really good on that one Well i would ve said something about this novel too but i didn t read it, i don t plan to either as it goes prem at chapter 20 and is just too few chapters for me, no offence, also i don t complain as i saw what the author said about it, well it is what it is, as i said above u can just ignore this review, i m just a random person who wants effort to be rewarded, more or less
Not bad, it's just a little bit....interesting? The writing style doesn't really do it for me, so while it is a fine book, I will not be reading anymore of it.
This story is very unique and a system more based on the ocean is great, it isn't your typical system novel where it grants the mc powers and become op quickly. Other characters/sea animals are great and the mc is like a child in the beginning for new readers so don't let the personality of a 29 day old baby stingray stop reading because the character does develop with age and higher iq. Good thing I found this gem rather quickly.
This is the third novel I’ve seen so far about turning into fishies. I can turn into a fish Super electric eel avatar And this. All also have a system that allow evolution and body upgrade
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Haven’t read yet but please GOD don’t let the MC meet Steve Irwin in this novel... if he does though I’m gonna report bc that man was a treasure to kids everywhere. Jk of course about the report but not about him being a treasure.
I got bored of waiting for my other saved novels to be updated, so I'll read this one to pass the free time, if it catches my attention I'll include it in my waiting list :3 Exp
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as of chap 8. MC seems like he is on earth instead of a fantasy world. The system talks too much, think it was supposed to be funny but it wasn't for me.
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So, new reader here. I have some questions before I really delve in because I have seen some flags for me pop up in the first few chapters. I want to know if the relationship between the system and the MC remains as unbalanced as in the first few chapters, or do they form an equilibrium at some point? Also, does the MC get calmer/less temperamental? Finally, please let me know if the system becomes some kind of living thing beyond being in mc’s head/ becomes some kind of love interest? Systems with too much power over hosts are kind of tricky for me, and my enjoyment of them really depends on my mood. Similarly, systems that come to life / romantic interest systems are not what I typically enjoy, and the latter is especially irritating to me. (Unless they’re done really well, with proper reasoning involved.) An emotional Mc having problems adjusting is not an issue for me, I just need to know they will be able to adjust properly. I don’t even need him to submit to the system, just be calmer about it. Please tell me, I want to like this book, but the start reminds me of all the tropes I hate. I’ve seen reviews that state this kind of makes fun of system books, but this seems more like it’s the Mc who doesn’t like systems, not the author? I’m just confused ‘cause it doesn’t seem to match up.
I will never read a novel about a sti gray because They killed my favorite wildlife expert, rip Steve Irwin 😭😭 Well, I'll give it a go, but stingrays suck! 😂 I'll update this once I read some
Aburrido .... .............................aburrido..................................................... ........................ .. ...... .. ............................
My mother told me that I couldn't be a stingray. In response, I decided to ask truck-kun to run over me and turn me into one. At the moment, I'm currently in the form of something like Cthulhu as I type this review on the keyboard with the myriad amount of tentacles I have. Would recommend.
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I want to know if this will be a gender bender novel, cuz the pic on the cover shows a girl?.................................................
An interesting concept for a system story and definitely a fresh read if you are sick to death of face slapping and MCs who are suddenly cultivation gods, master craftsmen, and unbeatable fighters. The descriptions of most of ocean’s creatures seem to be accurate and researched. The combat is descriptive and easy to follow, yet still paced well enough to remain exciting. The dialogue is good and the main character is likable. Nice usage of side-characters as well. Updates regularly and the author is responsive in comments. I gave good marks all around. Only constructive criticisms would be some minor pronoun mistakes once in awhile that makes one or two paragraphs a little confusing, but it only occurs A couple times. Would definitely recommend. 🤘
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Boredom personified. I read this on my alt just to get a good grasp on the story. So far (15 Chapters) it's literally just a fucking sting ray that can't evolve. That's it, that is the only thing unique about it's entire plot. He does get passive upgrades and stuff like that but he's still just a fucking sting ray. Writing Quality- 3 Simply mediocre; no beautiful sentence structure or truly grasping words. Nothing of that sorts Updates- Frequent Story Development-0, None; it's just a stingray that's underwater. All it does is be a stingray and acquire upgrades. Character Design- 0, Literally none There's literally no development, no prior information nothing that can let us formulate even a fucking fandom wiki page for MC. World Background- It's literally just fucking underwater.
Wait is he deadass just a stingray? Does this story have evolution in it or Does he just get older? Im on Like chapter 20 I think and i enjoy the story its just kinda boring but it isnt bad tho
The real score: 4/5 Well, I wasn't expecting this. A system novel that is set out to mock the system Novel model. You would probably think that this is like spider or slime where theirs magic and stuff. But no, the upgrades that our unwitting protagonist gets are along the lines of "better poison" or "deep pressure fins." Yea, he doesn't get super powers. This is a bad situation and he's trying to m, well not make the best of it and more survive it. To give you an idea, health is regenerated slowly, by resting and letting wounds close. Also eating. Eating is important. Heck, the guy isn't even isekaied, he's off the coast of Italy. And since he's in the ocean, we have no idea of the time period. So anything can happen in the future. While also being so restrictive, because the protagonist is only a stingray.
the story is good so far but there is some chapter that I need to re-read again at a certain part because I don't understand, but I only read around 40? and English is my second language so my writing is meh sorry
I've read all the free chapters when I make this review. Although I'm not a big fan of a system-themed story, but I can't understand how the author deserves all these bullies omg. It's written well enough to be understood, it's descriptive, and it's constantly rewritten. This is definitely worth a shot, guys.
Not a comment on the story at all just a random dude who read the title of the story as I'm gay and wanted to share. Here's a small story about pineapples. The end.
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I'll be honest, I didn't like the MC word usage and method of speaking but otherwise it made sense for his IQ level, which gave it realism vibe
Just ignore this review, i do it just bcs i wanna see the rating up and having more people know it, also bcs of one of author s previous work which has over 1 mil words (if i m right), which i believe should get more attention i didn t say is good, didn t say is bad, but just for the effort i really believe more people should check it out, it has the same amount of reviews as this novel despite having like, double views, which is a shame, heard the plot is really good on that one Well i would ve said something about this novel too but i didn t read it, i don t plan to either as it goes prem at chapter 20 and is just too few chapters for me, no offence, also i don t complain as i saw what the author said about it, well it is what it is, as i said above u can just ignore this review, i m just a random person who wants effort to be rewarded, more or less
Not bad, it's just a little bit....interesting? The writing style doesn't really do it for me, so while it is a fine book, I will not be reading anymore of it.
This story is very unique and a system more based on the ocean is great, it isn't your typical system novel where it grants the mc powers and become op quickly. Other characters/sea animals are great and the mc is like a child in the beginning for new readers so don't let the personality of a 29 day old baby stingray stop reading because the character does develop with age and higher iq. Good thing I found this gem rather quickly.
This is the third novel I’ve seen so far about turning into fishies. I can turn into a fish Super electric eel avatar And this. All also have a system that allow evolution and body upgrade
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Haven’t read yet but please GOD don’t let the MC meet Steve Irwin in this novel... if he does though I’m gonna report bc that man was a treasure to kids everywhere. Jk of course about the report but not about him being a treasure.
I got bored of waiting for my other saved novels to be updated, so I'll read this one to pass the free time, if it catches my attention I'll include it in my waiting list :3 Exp