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[img=recommend] It's a nice little fan fiction. Perfect for reading in between. I hope you don't drop this story on author-san[img=recommend]
writing quality can still be improved but overall it's great I enjoy the story so far. Stability updates i just found this fic so i don't know it's stability so i just go with four. Story development great so far just that we need more character interactions. Character design the characters are just okay can have more improvements World background literally just P5
Writing Quality: Pretty good, a few typos but it's easy to tell what they meant to say Stability of Updates: Only been reading for two days, so I don't know how often the updates come in Story development: Amazing, aside from minor filler Character Design: The new outfits for everyone look amazing, and nice touch giving Yusuke's Miraculous outfit 9 tails World Background: The lore with how Marinette came to Shibuya is nice, though I'm excited to see who the voices are she's been seeing! (Oooo, ominous)
Reveal Spoiler [img=recommend] It's a nice little fan fiction. Perfect for reading in between. I hope you don't drop this story on author-san[img=recommend]
writing quality can still be improved but overall it's great I enjoy the story so far. Stability updates i just found this fic so i don't know it's stability so i just go with four. Story development great so far just that we need more character interactions. Character design the characters are just okay can have more improvements World background literally just P5
Writing Quality: Pretty good, a few typos but it's easy to tell what they meant to say Stability of Updates: Only been reading for two days, so I don't know how often the updates come in Story development: Amazing, aside from minor filler Character Design: The new outfits for everyone look amazing, and nice touch giving Yusuke's Miraculous outfit 9 tails World Background: The lore with how Marinette came to Shibuya is nice, though I'm excited to see who the voices are she's been seeing! (Oooo, ominous)
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