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Author do you how great you write! Yes!!! A big yes from me... Historical era...Lovers...Revenge... Wow... Everything is really great...The characters came out do well from your writing that you started liking them from start only...❤️❤️❤️They are vivid, original...and best....Great going author...I had goosebumps all over while reading... I loved it...I am really hooked to your story...keep it up...❤️❤️❤️
Wow! The first chapter has gore but the way you narrated the story hooked me. The descriptions are well done and the names of the places are really unique. I can't help but think of Las Piñas City when I saw the La Piñas 😂. There are a few grammatical errors like the space before a comma, and some common nouns in uppercase but they can easily be overlooked by the engrossed reader. The dialogue is fluid and well-written. Your story has great potential. I also really like the Victorian setting. You've included a lot of Victorian-sounding words which I really liked. Keep up the good work, author. Great job! 😊
This story ahs great potential. Author's writing is very nice, with only some errors that can be overlooked when reading. Author describes the characters very vividly. The plot is developing nicely. Good luck in the contest, author.
Author SAMA! The really love the character designs and you have improved! You have an editor right!? Just keep on writing! I have full marks on the updating stability since you have updated 6 chapters in one week! Fighting! I saw you novel as an entry for WPC #141 hope you'll bring home the bacon!
It really do sounded like Victorian era, not flattering you dear Author but this novel has the potential! I hope you'll win WPC#141!! A must read novel, Historical-Romance-Fan-Fic, Royal romance, yes indeed a must read!
Wow, witches! And the protagonist and her ex husband already collided just a few chapters! I'll give this novel full marks! The tension creeps me out! A must read novel!
It is a slow paced novel, well, I am looking for new novels and I saw you novel as an entry for a contest. I've read your content and it was good.
I see you have rewritten your novel from the top.You have really matured this time.Your first novel is doing good, you should update more, read more information about your genre and keep it up!
The storyline is actually nice and well thought of. The characters are designed well and the way the author presents them is on my liking. In regards to writing quality, try reading more about English grammar as it would be a shame to not continue this story with good grammar. Aside from that, well done, author!
The plot is unique and intriguing. Reincarnation with vengeance is something that I definitely like. Author's writing style is good but it could be more polished as I had to read few lines twice to understand what was exactly going on and who was speaking to whom. Maybe single quoting the thoughts would help to distinguish more. but other than that, I really loved seeing a strong female lead. I'm excited for the upcoming chapters! Thank you for working hard!
It is surprisingly good! I just want to compliment your wide vocabulary, and honestly the characters are interesting to read although I'm not into gore from the beginning of the chapter. Well done!
Author do you how great you write! Yes!!! A big yes from me... Historical era...Lovers...Revenge... Wow... Everything is really great...The characters came out do well from your writing that you started liking them from start only...❤️❤️❤️They are vivid, original...and best....Great going author...I had goosebumps all over while reading... I loved it...I am really hooked to your story...keep it up...❤️❤️❤️
Wow! The first chapter has gore but the way you narrated the story hooked me. The descriptions are well done and the names of the places are really unique. I can't help but think of Las Piñas City when I saw the La Piñas 😂. There are a few grammatical errors like the space before a comma, and some common nouns in uppercase but they can easily be overlooked by the engrossed reader. The dialogue is fluid and well-written. Your story has great potential. I also really like the Victorian setting. You've included a lot of Victorian-sounding words which I really liked. Keep up the good work, author. Great job! 😊
This story ahs great potential. Author's writing is very nice, with only some errors that can be overlooked when reading. Author describes the characters very vividly. The plot is developing nicely. Good luck in the contest, author.
Author SAMA! The really love the character designs and you have improved! You have an editor right!? Just keep on writing! I have full marks on the updating stability since you have updated 6 chapters in one week! Fighting! I saw you novel as an entry for WPC #141 hope you'll bring home the bacon!
It really do sounded like Victorian era, not flattering you dear Author but this novel has the potential! I hope you'll win WPC#141!! A must read novel, Historical-Romance-Fan-Fic, Royal romance, yes indeed a must read!
Wow, witches! And the protagonist and her ex husband already collided just a few chapters! I'll give this novel full marks! The tension creeps me out! A must read novel!
It is a slow paced novel, well, I am looking for new novels and I saw you novel as an entry for a contest. I've read your content and it was good.
I see you have rewritten your novel from the top.You have really matured this time.Your first novel is doing good, you should update more, read more information about your genre and keep it up!
The storyline is actually nice and well thought of. The characters are designed well and the way the author presents them is on my liking. In regards to writing quality, try reading more about English grammar as it would be a shame to not continue this story with good grammar. Aside from that, well done, author!
The plot is unique and intriguing. Reincarnation with vengeance is something that I definitely like. Author's writing style is good but it could be more polished as I had to read few lines twice to understand what was exactly going on and who was speaking to whom. Maybe single quoting the thoughts would help to distinguish more. but other than that, I really loved seeing a strong female lead. I'm excited for the upcoming chapters! Thank you for working hard!
It is surprisingly good! I just want to compliment your wide vocabulary, and honestly the characters are interesting to read although I'm not into gore from the beginning of the chapter. Well done!