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Writing Quality=✪✪✪XX Stability of Updates=✪✪✪✪✪ Story Development=✪XXXX=a teenager who kills a criminal (" rumored to have killed more than 400 criminals/villains"), not even hiding his identity for some reason, he's free to walk the streets like a citizen. government, polis, hero's is ok with it. All might OK with it(not adding why but the reasoning is so stupid). He got admitted to hero school. He kills as he breathes and he's a hero candidate?. If you put it on paper, he is more similar to AFO. back story feels force, changing the mind set of the other character is forced. Character Design=✪✪XXX=the only thing is good about this ff is the physical design of the mc. World Background=✪XXXXX=world building is 1 star for obvious reasons.
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Writing Quality=✪✪✪XX Stability of Updates=✪✪✪✪✪ Story Development=✪XXXX=a teenager who kills a criminal (" rumored to have killed more than 400 criminals/villains"), not even hiding his identity for some reason, he's free to walk the streets like a citizen. government, polis, hero's is ok with it. All might OK with it(not adding why but the reasoning is so stupid). He got admitted to hero school. He kills as he breathes and he's a hero candidate?. If you put it on paper, he is more similar to AFO. back story feels force, changing the mind set of the other character is forced. Character Design=✪✪XXX=the only thing is good about this ff is the physical design of the mc. World Background=✪XXXXX=world building is 1 star for obvious reasons.
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