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Huh, this is better than I thought. I was looking for a one-off material and generic time-killer but got a hidden gem instead. I recommend this for people who are reading for plots and "plots".
Seriously great ! Nice little system and slow enhancements. MC is a good guy with a good head, hope he ll take care of the girls nicely But please more updates ! I love this too much...
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For me, i think this is one of the best novel i've ever read because adding to the fact that i am a former anime fan(* maybe i am not a fan for now because im focusing on reading novel). even though it still haven't reached at least 100 ch, i still think that it is one of my fav. thus i really hope that the author won't drop it or even think about it and continue updating it otherwise it will definitely make me sad, u know.... oh oh oh please also make the MC become the CEO of yurika's family so that if the mc decided to make a move to his mother, his father won't do much knowing that he's son suddenly became successful. in fact he would willingly give his wife to his son, that way he can regain his attention (because i suspected that he would ignore or have a blind eye to his father)
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well I will give five stars 🤩🤩🤩🤩 i it's a great novel for men of culture like me and if you don't like novels where the MC think to only have fun with his girls then go away their is allot of haiters right now so we don't want more ...........................................................
What about... we write something... like Inso's law fanfic? or a good idea? . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. cuz ****! I'm not gonna say that your fanfic is bad? but I mean I wish you didn't add that many girls? Your Fanfic is good but I hope you try something better...? you should be able to write fanfiction something such as some Manhwas? God bless you, bro!✨😉
Eu simplesmente achei essa história fantastica e viciante. Pode ter algumas coisas meio meeeeee mais simplemente é mt bommmm... SIMPLESMENTE MT RECOMENDO
Writing quality is good though has recently become less than average. The author wants to catch up to his promised updates, so the chapters are a lot shorter and rushed recently. (AUTHOR IT'S ALRIGHT YOU DON'T HAVE TO CATCH UP, TAKE YOUR TIME, THE RECENT CHAPTERS ARE SHORT, RUSHED AND THEIR QUALITY HAS DROPPED A LOT). Stability of updates is alright. Character design, is nothing special
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I am addicted to this work, a very creative idea for the author to take hentais as a basis and create a history and universe where everyone unites in a single world.
That not very good story, but what do you want from hentai? For hentai this story not bad, but only for f*p. Characters from real hentai - good idea. I saw same storys, but this is one of the best of they
My living spear were invigorated with the help of this book, this is a good book! I'm a pervert and I don't deny it (yeah boiiiiz) I wish that author-kun do fast updates to makes the story long go (cuz it hurts when your favorite book ends or ended it's update in the day without warning) I don't want author-kun ti be pressured, but this is just my opinion. Happy nice Day, Noon, and Night there my fellow readers and author-kun.
I already had my daily hentai dose, this threw me off course, not even the system tag is safe now, I need help..............................
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Ini sudah lumayan bagus saya menyukai nya, btw saya membaca menggunakan translate, lanjutkan dan terus berkembang 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👌👌👌👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Pretty good for a hentai fanfic. I don't know why people are expecting a wuxia mc and amazing writing . it's a hentai fanfic written by an amatuer author on website that doesn't pay him I don't know what you expected
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Me gustó mucho la historia pocos se meten en el mundo de hentai, espero grandes cosas, se lo difícil que es escribir, así que sigue escribiendo.
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LISTEN MAN I LOVE THIS BOOK DONT STOP PLEASE YOU HAVE TOUCHED BASE ON HENTAI I FORGOT I EVEN WATCHED YOU ARE BRING BACK MANY MEMORIES SO PLEASE DONT STOP
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The description for literally all the female characters is "big breasts, wide hips, thin waist". It's obvious that the person who wrote this story thinks with his lower half most of the time.
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Huh, this is better than I thought. I was looking for a one-off material and generic time-killer but got a hidden gem instead. I recommend this for people who are reading for plots and "plots".
Seriously great ! Nice little system and slow enhancements. MC is a good guy with a good head, hope he ll take care of the girls nicely But please more updates ! I love this too much...
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For me, i think this is one of the best novel i've ever read because adding to the fact that i am a former anime fan(* maybe i am not a fan for now because im focusing on reading novel). even though it still haven't reached at least 100 ch, i still think that it is one of my fav. thus i really hope that the author won't drop it or even think about it and continue updating it otherwise it will definitely make me sad, u know.... oh oh oh please also make the MC become the CEO of yurika's family so that if the mc decided to make a move to his mother, his father won't do much knowing that he's son suddenly became successful. in fact he would willingly give his wife to his son, that way he can regain his attention (because i suspected that he would ignore or have a blind eye to his father)
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well I will give five stars 🤩🤩🤩🤩 i it's a great novel for men of culture like me and if you don't like novels where the MC think to only have fun with his girls then go away their is allot of haiters right now so we don't want more ...........................................................
What about... we write something... like Inso's law fanfic? or a good idea? . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. cuz ****! I'm not gonna say that your fanfic is bad? but I mean I wish you didn't add that many girls? Your Fanfic is good but I hope you try something better...? you should be able to write fanfiction something such as some Manhwas? God bless you, bro!✨😉
Eu simplesmente achei essa história fantastica e viciante. Pode ter algumas coisas meio meeeeee mais simplemente é mt bommmm... SIMPLESMENTE MT RECOMENDO
Writing quality is good though has recently become less than average. The author wants to catch up to his promised updates, so the chapters are a lot shorter and rushed recently. (AUTHOR IT'S ALRIGHT YOU DON'T HAVE TO CATCH UP, TAKE YOUR TIME, THE RECENT CHAPTERS ARE SHORT, RUSHED AND THEIR QUALITY HAS DROPPED A LOT). Stability of updates is alright. Character design, is nothing special
HAPPY NEW YEAR HAPPY NEW YEAR HAPPY NEW YEAR HAPPY NEW YEAR HAPPY NEW YEAR HAPPY NEW YEAR HAPPY NEW YEAR HAPPY NEW YEAR HAPPY NEW YEAR HAPPY NEW YEAR HAPPY NEW YEAR
I am addicted to this work, a very creative idea for the author to take hentais as a basis and create a history and universe where everyone unites in a single world.
That not very good story, but what do you want from hentai? For hentai this story not bad, but only for f*p. Characters from real hentai - good idea. I saw same storys, but this is one of the best of they
My living spear were invigorated with the help of this book, this is a good book! I'm a pervert and I don't deny it (yeah boiiiiz) I wish that author-kun do fast updates to makes the story long go (cuz it hurts when your favorite book ends or ended it's update in the day without warning) I don't want author-kun ti be pressured, but this is just my opinion. Happy nice Day, Noon, and Night there my fellow readers and author-kun.
I already had my daily hentai dose, this threw me off course, not even the system tag is safe now, I need help..............................
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Ini sudah lumayan bagus saya menyukai nya, btw saya membaca menggunakan translate, lanjutkan dan terus berkembang 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👌👌👌👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Pretty good for a hentai fanfic. I don't know why people are expecting a wuxia mc and amazing writing . it's a hentai fanfic written by an amatuer author on website that doesn't pay him I don't know what you expected
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Me gustó mucho la historia pocos se meten en el mundo de hentai, espero grandes cosas, se lo difícil que es escribir, así que sigue escribiendo.
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LISTEN MAN I LOVE THIS BOOK DONT STOP PLEASE YOU HAVE TOUCHED BASE ON HENTAI I FORGOT I EVEN WATCHED YOU ARE BRING BACK MANY MEMORIES SO PLEASE DONT STOP
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The description for literally all the female characters is "big breasts, wide hips, thin waist". It's obvious that the person who wrote this story thinks with his lower half most of the time.