MHA: Villainous Conquest

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Klazy_Labbit

So this book is back...... Obligatory five stars cause why not? Stuff to expect: 1. evil mc 2. Mc will not have smooth journey. 3. Focusing on world building. 4. First time writing third pov so I don't know if its good? 5. Slow paced initially Thats it for now... I apologize for acting retarded and deleting everything but I was mad so yeah... Hope you like it...

LV 14

DaoOfCulture

ˢʰʰʰʰʰ ᵈᵒⁿ'ᵗ ᵗᵉˡˡ ᵗʰᵉ ᶜᵃᵗ ᵇᵘᵗ ᴵ ᵃᵐ ᵇᵉᶦⁿᵍ ᵗʰʳᵉᵃᵗᵉⁿᵉᵈ ᵗᵒ ᵐᵃᵏᵉ ᵗʰᶦˢ ʳᵉᵛᶦᵉʷᵎ ˢᵉⁿᵈ ʰᵉˡᵖ Jokes aside, the novel so far(chapter 8) is to my liking. Let's start the review yeah? Writing Quality - Other than minor typos and some little grammar mistakes, I didn't see any significant issues with the quality of writing. He'll, compared to other FFs the quality of this novel is a couple notches higher than average. The word count for each chapter is a solid 1500-3000+ words, which is something every reader likes to see. Story Development - The story development currently is very slow. Though some may not like this, I encourage a slow pace as it allows us the readers to grasp the main character's personality more. I think Cat has done a fine job with the character interactions so far and put in a lot of detail to give a fairly clear image of what is occurring. Unlike some other FFs, Cat also has a timeline prepared so we can expect to have a somewhat logical story development for some time. Character Design - In my opinion, the MC was introduced with sufficient, detailed information: his background, current situation at the time, personality, habits, and thought process. The MC was portrayed as a narcissistic womanizer who seeks entertainment and his thought process really helped grasp the MC's character. - Other than the main character, Cat has done a fine job in introducing his own original characters to the MC and creating smooth interactions between them. Although the character design, itself, may be slightly biased... *cough* - nekopara - *cough* he still did a good job in keeping track of the differing thought possesses of the characters when they interacted with each other. Updating Stability - I honestly don't know lol World Background - Well, this section is pretty simple, the world is BnHA so most people should have a general idea of the world background. However, Cat expanded the world background as he took in various factors to create a logically sound location for the MC's starting point, an orphanage. I won't go too deep on why it makes sense for an orphanage to exist or why it makes sense for the MC to be there, but basically the children with no parents are collateral damage who live in orphanages supported by the government. From this we can infer the MC's parents died and he was sent to an orphanage, or at least something similar. Writing this review with 4 hours of sleep and 16+ hours of remaining awake so excuse me for any brevities or typos.

LV 4

Kanemo

This story is super to my liking, I hope you continue to bring this beautiful story daily to all of us your beautiful readers (there are the feats there too, and I'm not one of them,) If you like a manipulative and merciless protagonist read this story, the grammar and everything is above average, and it has a beautiful past, it has no system, it is not infinitely Op right from the start, And man, his past before reincarnating is very cool, so read this delight just before I resolve

LV 4

xLuciferx

Good Start overall :D I enjoy reading Antagonist MC. Although most MC tend to change their personality when they see the first female -_- . I hope it wont happen in your fic :D Will update review in the future. Good Work.

LV 1

Shem_Sama

Dude you came back with a new fantastic story.. though I suggest you corrupt Momo as he is a master in manipulation to be his own personal pocket..to fund his tropes anf increase his influence in the underworld..

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Kittens_are_cuter

My alt account.................. I am giving myself a review coz I deleted everything in a fit of rage. Its a good book or so I hope..... Thanks for reading EXP

LV 12

Celelond

I started this with high hopes, maybe due to my field of study I expected too much. I found it hard to understand the Mc, his, let's call them issues, were all over the place. He was sliding all over the anti-social behavioral disorder rule. He evolved, then devolved then urgh, it was hard for me to follow. I am sure many will enjoy this novel and I am sure the author is a good writer, just if you happen to know how so-called "Evil" people work, you might be a bit disappointed,

LV 4

TheFlagGuy

Have not started yet but from the synopsis I am looking forward to this fic. PLEASE ADD ROMANCE. I dont care if it is harem or not but I feel like romance is a must. Especially in a reincarnation story. What man in their right mind would reincarnate into an anime world and not get with at least one of the main girls of any anime. Some citrus (lemons & limes) would be appreciated too. I vote for Camie, Momo and/or Himiko. (most wanted to least wanted) For those of you who dont remember this is Camie...

LV 4

Master4thWall

I like always was jumping through the multiverse, there I found an alternate version of MHA. I as the curious cat tried to learn about the changes in this timeline. I was flabbergasted, this story is great. This is a story of a simp-*cough* Cold/calculative/manipulative Mc named Kira. I hope to see the hights this boy reaches. –Bullshit Master.

LV 3

Rotting_Corpse

Author-san I really enjoyed your first fic and I was sad to see it being dropped. I want to try my hand at writing and thought I could use the same concept. I wanted to just let you know before I begin writing. The story won't be same and I will tweak some things too so I won't be copy pasting.

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Kaneki213

Português:cara porque não continua,porra começa uma história legal mais não terminar. . .

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Uncle_Sheogorath

Great story with an actual somewhat intelligent mc. He actually pretends to behave like a kid when reincarnated as a kid!!! Seriously I read million of other crap fics where mc behaves like some mature ***** when being 3 years old. Also, evil mc is always a plus. I hope it won't be evil for the sake of evil tho! Lastly don't abandon the little girl that follows the mc, it would be too sad for mc to get rid of her.

LV 12

CanYouMakeItClear

The Author is a cat, and it is cute. The Author is a cat, and it is cute. The Author is a cat, and it is cute. The Author is a cat, and it is cute. The Author is a cat, and it is cute. The Author is a cat, and it is cute.

LV 4

Apostle_of_cthulhu

Pretty good looks like it can go far. Nice cold and evil mc. His quirk seems strong but looks like it can be very versatile in combat. Can't think of anything else to say Gotta get dat character limit. 26908642378908654367889000887655466899007755421346779987654335

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DaoistPureEvil

Before I read the FanFic I'm giving this one 5 stars for what I'm about to say .. CATS ARE NOT CUTE !! CATS ARE NOT CUTE !! CATS ARE NOT CUTE !! Important stuff needs to be said 3 times .. also wish me luck ..

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Yuri_yuri

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Generalreese_1

This book so far is extremely good, the mc isn't some typical goody touchus hero but is instead the villain which is great. and so far this story is turning out to be well paced and well written. I highly recommend it for anyone and everyone.

LV 14

Jasonenrick

get the Reviews up boyzzz! *cough* Anyways, the Book is good and I love it so far. Evil Mc are my type and this makes it all the better! I have to study so I am not gonna make a long Review. Just read and enjoy it ;) thumbs up for the work Author 👍

LV 4

Master4thWall

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