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ceritanya bagus, tetapi ending nya terlalu terburu-buru. terkesan memaksakan. seharusnya ceritanya masih bisa di perpanjang dengan perjalanan Xiao Lin yg saat ini bahkan masih sebagai murid di tahun pertama, dan masih berada di Bronze-Rank. masih banyai plot hole. Lilith yang sama sekali tidak berkontribusi di akhir, Nasib Gu Xiaoyou dan adiknya, janji untuk tidak membiarkannya mati, misteri kekuatan adik gu xiaoyuo, masih banyak plot hole
Everything was masterfully done until the very abrupt and cheap ending compared to the genius the author showed in everything else they did. There is no way the ending is the best the author could create in any way shape or form. The story had whole books to go, but for some reason.... everything us erased in the blink of an eye.
the series is a really good read (for the most part) the author knows what they're doing, but the end was incredibly rushed and nowhere near enjoyable, entire plot threads unexplored, no fight to save the world, just a big "my people need me" moment, and sudden deus ex machina. ps i put a five star on the update frequency since it was already finished when i started reading.
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the book was great. but the ending. is say the worse ending I've ever experience. it felt so rushed like season 2 of promised neverland. so much potential just to throw it down the drain in the end
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the story is very good the only problem is the abrupt ending Please 🙏 continue it
read up to 450 chapters too many unnecessary thoughts of mc which can be avoided and they are filling up the story.
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out of 714 chapters, stop at 713.5. the author should strongly consider using MC's time ability to continue what was a decent story, right until they obviously gave up
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it was a very interesting story with a lot of potential. The author created several questions and quests that could have been explored. However, as if the author got bored of the story, it has the most abrupt and nonsense ending. Truly a disappointment!
Story was great little wordy at times but still good, but the ending sucked so hard, just cheaper out said yeah it never happened too bad so sad, really author just quit
At first I thought it was about your typical overpowered mc but I was terribly wrong and the author just tried to end the story as soon as possible by giving it a shi**y ending. I hated the ending of the book.
This story is marvelous! I was quickly addicted to it and now I’m left wanting more. I hope there will be more.
What a very detailed story, very rich in history and sci-fi that meets together. Recommendable to everyone.
The end sucks. The rest of the book was good. Felt like the author just gave up and wanted to be done with it.
I really enjoyed this novel until the last 100 chapters where the MCs tone got depressed. The author wasn't the best at making everything coherent but it was quite engaging from chapter 30-650ish. Unfortunately the author gave up on the story and bashed together an illogical abrupt ending.
I just found this story and fell in love with it. There is so much potential for continuation with the world build. so many open ends that could still be followed up on. At this point I'm not sure why the author stopped but if I had to guess, something akin to burnout.
what was originally a amazing book was slowly goven up on by a lazy writer and ended horribly out of nowhere dissapointong all fans.
when i started reading this novel it was a 5 star across the board peice of art but there was a drop in quality around ch 300 and onward it feels as though the author fealt he could just say random dumb things and act as if they are fact in the book example- it is claimed that the human brain processes at 100 meters a sec in the later chapter but the fact is you dont measure the processing power of the brain with normal measurements like meters thw human brain processes at 60 bits a sec similar to a computer processing speed is explained in mb and gb.i just wish the author would research before saying random things it ruins the immersion into the story.
It was a really good read. Started off strong but towards the middle/ end started to feel rushed. It left some loose ends behind.
Do not read this story!!! This is easily a 2000 plus chapter novel. However the author randomly decides to give up around chapter 630 and makes things up. Nothing is truly finished and all story points are left open with the sadest and most disappointing ending a light novel has ever had in my opinion. Trust me do not start this one.
Basic dumb character build that hides his power and is after a good looking ”superior girl”
it's really bad the i read only 30 pages because the author doesn't know what intelligence is. The mc has the intelligence 2, and i suppose the main girl jas an intelligece of about 40 ppoints yet he is always the ine coming up with olans and solutions.....oh yeah and a silly brut guy has also intelligence equal to 2....either way i would say the writing is just terrible One more advice for the writer, us readers can actually remember stuff that hapend in the previous chapter you don't have to write in every chapter that his points are worth duble Any way your writing is one of the worst one on this site, it's so bad actually that this is my first time writing a comment
it wasn't bad and I had high Hopes just to feel cheated with the bs ending at 714. way to give up
character development is rubbish, world history is rubbish, skills, spells, everything related to strength is even more rubbish, I don't recommend it.
i hate these kinds of ending. im at chapter 445 and was curious about the ending. Chapter 445 he isnt even at bronze rank, and after reading the comments, he didnt even have a happy ending with gu xiaoyue. This made me lose all mood and motivation in continuing. This was one of the novels which are very well written since i dont normally read slow paced novels. Absolutely disappointed in the ending
Reveal Spoiler ceritanya bagus, tetapi ending nya terlalu terburu-buru. terkesan memaksakan. seharusnya ceritanya masih bisa di perpanjang dengan perjalanan Xiao Lin yg saat ini bahkan masih sebagai murid di tahun pertama, dan masih berada di Bronze-Rank. masih banyai plot hole. Lilith yang sama sekali tidak berkontribusi di akhir, Nasib Gu Xiaoyou dan adiknya, janji untuk tidak membiarkannya mati, misteri kekuatan adik gu xiaoyuo, masih banyak plot hole
Everything was masterfully done until the very abrupt and cheap ending compared to the genius the author showed in everything else they did. There is no way the ending is the best the author could create in any way shape or form. The story had whole books to go, but for some reason.... everything us erased in the blink of an eye.
the series is a really good read (for the most part) the author knows what they're doing, but the end was incredibly rushed and nowhere near enjoyable, entire plot threads unexplored, no fight to save the world, just a big "my people need me" moment, and sudden deus ex machina. ps i put a five star on the update frequency since it was already finished when i started reading.
Reveal Spoiler the book was great. but the ending. is say the worse ending I've ever experience. it felt so rushed like season 2 of promised neverland. so much potential just to throw it down the drain in the end
Reveal Spoiler the story is very good the only problem is the abrupt ending Please 🙏 continue it
read up to 450 chapters too many unnecessary thoughts of mc which can be avoided and they are filling up the story.
Reveal Spoiler out of 714 chapters, stop at 713.5. the author should strongly consider using MC's time ability to continue what was a decent story, right until they obviously gave up
Reveal Spoiler it was a very interesting story with a lot of potential. The author created several questions and quests that could have been explored. However, as if the author got bored of the story, it has the most abrupt and nonsense ending. Truly a disappointment!
Story was great little wordy at times but still good, but the ending sucked so hard, just cheaper out said yeah it never happened too bad so sad, really author just quit
At first I thought it was about your typical overpowered mc but I was terribly wrong and the author just tried to end the story as soon as possible by giving it a shi**y ending. I hated the ending of the book.
This story is marvelous! I was quickly addicted to it and now I’m left wanting more. I hope there will be more.
What a very detailed story, very rich in history and sci-fi that meets together. Recommendable to everyone.
The end sucks. The rest of the book was good. Felt like the author just gave up and wanted to be done with it.
I really enjoyed this novel until the last 100 chapters where the MCs tone got depressed. The author wasn't the best at making everything coherent but it was quite engaging from chapter 30-650ish. Unfortunately the author gave up on the story and bashed together an illogical abrupt ending.
I just found this story and fell in love with it. There is so much potential for continuation with the world build. so many open ends that could still be followed up on. At this point I'm not sure why the author stopped but if I had to guess, something akin to burnout.
what was originally a amazing book was slowly goven up on by a lazy writer and ended horribly out of nowhere dissapointong all fans.
when i started reading this novel it was a 5 star across the board peice of art but there was a drop in quality around ch 300 and onward it feels as though the author fealt he could just say random dumb things and act as if they are fact in the book example- it is claimed that the human brain processes at 100 meters a sec in the later chapter but the fact is you dont measure the processing power of the brain with normal measurements like meters thw human brain processes at 60 bits a sec similar to a computer processing speed is explained in mb and gb.i just wish the author would research before saying random things it ruins the immersion into the story.
It was a really good read. Started off strong but towards the middle/ end started to feel rushed. It left some loose ends behind.
Do not read this story!!! This is easily a 2000 plus chapter novel. However the author randomly decides to give up around chapter 630 and makes things up. Nothing is truly finished and all story points are left open with the sadest and most disappointing ending a light novel has ever had in my opinion. Trust me do not start this one.
Basic dumb character build that hides his power and is after a good looking ”superior girl”
it's really bad the i read only 30 pages because the author doesn't know what intelligence is. The mc has the intelligence 2, and i suppose the main girl jas an intelligece of about 40 ppoints yet he is always the ine coming up with olans and solutions.....oh yeah and a silly brut guy has also intelligence equal to 2....either way i would say the writing is just terrible One more advice for the writer, us readers can actually remember stuff that hapend in the previous chapter you don't have to write in every chapter that his points are worth duble Any way your writing is one of the worst one on this site, it's so bad actually that this is my first time writing a comment
it wasn't bad and I had high Hopes just to feel cheated with the bs ending at 714. way to give up
character development is rubbish, world history is rubbish, skills, spells, everything related to strength is even more rubbish, I don't recommend it.
i hate these kinds of ending. im at chapter 445 and was curious about the ending. Chapter 445 he isnt even at bronze rank, and after reading the comments, he didnt even have a happy ending with gu xiaoyue. This made me lose all mood and motivation in continuing. This was one of the novels which are very well written since i dont normally read slow paced novels. Absolutely disappointed in the ending
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