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Autor, su libro es muy bueno estoy esperando que en algún momento puede seguir subiendo capítulos de esta novela porque sinceramente la disfruté mucho El único problema que tengo es que no puede subir más capítulos de resto es genial
Pretty decent in both plot and quality of writing at least for webnovel.com (for some reason website is full unreadable stories with 5 stars wtf?) While a little naïve author does good work keeping MC strong but not completely overpowered. Still far from amazing but i would say way above average. Writing Quality 4 - Decent/Good Stability of Updates 1 - Kind of Bad, might be abandoned Story Development 4 - Decent/Good Character Design 3 - Average no character has been explained in depth World Background 4 - Decent/Good using canon world hard to screw up
The novel is really interesting, with it beginning in the Vale, hope it’s not dropped!!! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
This is a really good story. Hope to read more in the future. This is a really good story. Hope to read more in the future.This is a really good story. Hope to read more in the future.
Really, a shame that this story seems to be ABANDONED. It started really great and promising... Ah, well... There's nothing to be done, I guess. Sad, really... Good luck, author-dude!
Man you just have 3 chapters writing in weeks ,when are you going to write again .sorry for my english kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
I really enjoy your story. I hope you come back to it soon. Your character is great so far hope you keep it up 👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Greetings Great Author! Are you going to upload the chapters today? I really look forward to it!🤗🤗🤗
Author COME BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!plz. Я устал искать хорошие фанфики с реинкарнацией в мир игры престолов. [img=update]
The plot of this story is very original I have yet to see another Fanfic centered on the vale and I like the ideas the MC has on how to go about making his mark on Westeros. So far the story doesn't have an MC pulling out gunpowder or other such story breaking technology and is hitting the story from an angle that most of us who have just seen the TV series would not know much about making it fresh and interesting I do hope the author keeps going and look forward to further updates of the story.
Author, please update soon!😭😭😭😭 I miss your chapters! I really hope you update soon, but I just wanted to let you know I miss this fanfic!
I always wanted a fanfiction about house Arryn ie, Vale. Always thought that house Arryn was not done justice in the series. looking forward for more chapters. And hope you don't drop it.
i really like this novel but where is the 4 chapter,chop chop fellow.lol ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
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Has potential, only read one chapter so can't say much, however, I must say I was turned off by the good looking wish. Not enough to drop the story obviously, however some may different, that wish should've been something like, having the charisma of a king, to draw people in, and admire him, or something along those lines, it seems really dumb to wish to be good looking. Besides that, can't wait for future chapters, big fan of ASOIAF/GOT Fanfictions
I like it ! That's all you get xD I know, not that much, aye? Well, that's not my probelm! On another note, does anybody recognize these lyrcis? " You want me to forget you Okay, forget me too You tell me you hate me, baby Yeah, I bet you do I'm keepin' you waiting But I won't wait on you Want me to forget you Okay, forget me too " ***SPOILER*** Maschine Gun kelly -forget me too
Review may change but as of now the story is great and has a ton of potential. I am a big fan of Game of Thrones fanfics with the mc having abilities that are strong in that world but not something way to OP or crazy magic related.... super soldier serum is always perfect since it doesnt raise too many questions only that he was blessed by the warrior or whatever lol but regardless fantastic start hoping this keeps going!
More more more more more, reincarnated with arren one love, moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Very good fan of Game of Thrones, it didn't fall into the most stupid mistakes like a three year old giving orders to all the adults, and it's a relief since there aren't many Arryn fans and they are a great house with a lot to exploit unlike the most used ones like the Starks or Targaryen. Another positive point is that their desires are not totally extravagant which makes the story boring unlike many other fans who abuse their "wishes as reincarnation" and make the story absurd. Good work continues with the story 👍.
Interesting story so far. I eagerly await for more chapters. There are sadly not so many good fanfics in this fandom, this one looks to be on the way to becoming one of the great ones! I especially like the fact that the MC is a history buff. I really want to see snippets of his analisys of Planetos, it's realities, castles, etc. from that point of view. Main charater's choice of Origins and wishes is really good as well. Few people understand that Cap's serum in medieval settings is already OP on 'man vs man' and even 'man vs squad' level. That misunderstanding sadly leads to some cultivation OP bulls*it wishes which destroy the setting. Yours however should not detract from it since even knowledge wish only asks for Medieval and Renaissance knowhow, so that's great too. So, what I'm trying to say is: Author, please, continue this story, post more chapters and never be discouraged! I shall await for more most eagerly!!! **: On a personal note, couldn't agree more - F*ck the Tully, especially the wonder sister duo. Two dumb bit**es managed to kickstart so much s*it, I swear their childhood friend was soooo proud and happy... On that note, despite the respect his achievements garner, f*ck Littlefinger too. And the Riverlands as a whole while I'm ranting... PPS: Well, except for Blackfish, that one is badass as all hell.
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Pls continue. .................................................................................................................................................
Autor, su libro es muy bueno estoy esperando que en algún momento puede seguir subiendo capítulos de esta novela porque sinceramente la disfruté mucho El único problema que tengo es que no puede subir más capítulos de resto es genial
Pretty decent in both plot and quality of writing at least for webnovel.com (for some reason website is full unreadable stories with 5 stars wtf?) While a little naïve author does good work keeping MC strong but not completely overpowered. Still far from amazing but i would say way above average. Writing Quality 4 - Decent/Good Stability of Updates 1 - Kind of Bad, might be abandoned Story Development 4 - Decent/Good Character Design 3 - Average no character has been explained in depth World Background 4 - Decent/Good using canon world hard to screw up
The novel is really interesting, with it beginning in the Vale, hope it’s not dropped!!! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
This is a really good story. Hope to read more in the future. This is a really good story. Hope to read more in the future.This is a really good story. Hope to read more in the future.
Really, a shame that this story seems to be ABANDONED. It started really great and promising... Ah, well... There's nothing to be done, I guess. Sad, really... Good luck, author-dude!
Man you just have 3 chapters writing in weeks ,when are you going to write again .sorry for my english kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
I really enjoy your story. I hope you come back to it soon. Your character is great so far hope you keep it up 👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Greetings Great Author! Are you going to upload the chapters today? I really look forward to it!🤗🤗🤗
Author COME BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!plz. Я устал искать хорошие фанфики с реинкарнацией в мир игры престолов. [img=update]
The plot of this story is very original I have yet to see another Fanfic centered on the vale and I like the ideas the MC has on how to go about making his mark on Westeros. So far the story doesn't have an MC pulling out gunpowder or other such story breaking technology and is hitting the story from an angle that most of us who have just seen the TV series would not know much about making it fresh and interesting I do hope the author keeps going and look forward to further updates of the story.
Author, please update soon!😭😭😭😭 I miss your chapters! I really hope you update soon, but I just wanted to let you know I miss this fanfic!
I always wanted a fanfiction about house Arryn ie, Vale. Always thought that house Arryn was not done justice in the series. looking forward for more chapters. And hope you don't drop it.
i really like this novel but where is the 4 chapter,chop chop fellow.lol ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
Moremore more 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍🤩😍🤩🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩🤩😍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩🤩😍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩🤩😍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩🤩😍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
Has potential, only read one chapter so can't say much, however, I must say I was turned off by the good looking wish. Not enough to drop the story obviously, however some may different, that wish should've been something like, having the charisma of a king, to draw people in, and admire him, or something along those lines, it seems really dumb to wish to be good looking. Besides that, can't wait for future chapters, big fan of ASOIAF/GOT Fanfictions
I like it ! That's all you get xD I know, not that much, aye? Well, that's not my probelm! On another note, does anybody recognize these lyrcis? " You want me to forget you Okay, forget me too You tell me you hate me, baby Yeah, I bet you do I'm keepin' you waiting But I won't wait on you Want me to forget you Okay, forget me too " ***SPOILER*** Maschine Gun kelly -forget me too
Review may change but as of now the story is great and has a ton of potential. I am a big fan of Game of Thrones fanfics with the mc having abilities that are strong in that world but not something way to OP or crazy magic related.... super soldier serum is always perfect since it doesnt raise too many questions only that he was blessed by the warrior or whatever lol but regardless fantastic start hoping this keeps going!
More more more more more, reincarnated with arren one love, moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Very good fan of Game of Thrones, it didn't fall into the most stupid mistakes like a three year old giving orders to all the adults, and it's a relief since there aren't many Arryn fans and they are a great house with a lot to exploit unlike the most used ones like the Starks or Targaryen. Another positive point is that their desires are not totally extravagant which makes the story boring unlike many other fans who abuse their "wishes as reincarnation" and make the story absurd. Good work continues with the story 👍.
Interesting story so far. I eagerly await for more chapters. There are sadly not so many good fanfics in this fandom, this one looks to be on the way to becoming one of the great ones! I especially like the fact that the MC is a history buff. I really want to see snippets of his analisys of Planetos, it's realities, castles, etc. from that point of view. Main charater's choice of Origins and wishes is really good as well. Few people understand that Cap's serum in medieval settings is already OP on 'man vs man' and even 'man vs squad' level. That misunderstanding sadly leads to some cultivation OP bulls*it wishes which destroy the setting. Yours however should not detract from it since even knowledge wish only asks for Medieval and Renaissance knowhow, so that's great too. So, what I'm trying to say is: Author, please, continue this story, post more chapters and never be discouraged! I shall await for more most eagerly!!! **: On a personal note, couldn't agree more - F*ck the Tully, especially the wonder sister duo. Two dumb bit**es managed to kickstart so much s*it, I swear their childhood friend was soooo proud and happy... On that note, despite the respect his achievements garner, f*ck Littlefinger too. And the Riverlands as a whole while I'm ranting... PPS: Well, except for Blackfish, that one is badass as all hell.
Interesting! aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
I loveee your story, I really can't wait for the next chapter!!!