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Trash novel with th mc gettimg dumber every chapter until heโs regressed back to a toddlers intellect.
mc has no brain, there is no logic, the plot does not make sense, mc plays the hero. the powers are again in the hands of the wrong person.... ........
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first I was very excited about this fan fiction then totally ๐ฎ 1 power level very stupid 2 mc stupid 3 A.I. why stupid personality 4 mc can't change timeline but in original mcu/marvel comics many times timeline change ex. Kang 5 celestial power 5 percent but weak๐ 6 shield๐ก introgression overall this is ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ
I mean it's just wish fulfillment, no depth whatsoever in the story. But not bad enough to cause brain damage so that's that. Read if you're bored lol
To The Author, Kindly continue the novel Make the MC an Anti-Hero with Full Solid Black Assassin Suit with best material, A Master of All Things in everthing beyond any level we can imagine - Magic( Rune, Wizardry, Sorcery, etc.,) Martial Art( Chi, Cultivator and varies combat Arts) Science(Inventor, Scientist, Engineer,Medicine and Doctor etc.,) and many more things to Mastery. Make him the best in intellect(Science) and Combat Arts In level beyond the level even Bruce Wayne(BATMAN) can't imagine. Make Mutants into Meta-Humans. Also, Keep the Characters from Both Western and Eastern Heroes from Comics and already known characters. Hope to see these soon! Thanks! Reader. 2. To the author, since your fanfic is mostly like the Mix of MCU and EARTH 616 - Make to MC to go back in the past in The Library Of Calegastro learn all the Magic there copy all those books distribute to Kamar Taj and copy for himself as well make him go to Mimir and Yggdrasil to gain more about Runes and Knowledge of Various ARTS(Magic, Combat, Tech-Magic or Etc., just make it up also make him do the works to influence people on Earth to save nature through Tech-Magic to save Earth Environment To Make the Qi, Ki, Chi , Mana Richer on Earth than any other place in the whole Multiverse) of the whole Universe or Multiverse. Make him a Grand-Master to teach all people Combat Arts and Magic Arts - ( Manupulation and uses of Chi, Ki , Qi and Mana into various Arts ) especially on Earth as his base operation. Thanks! - Reader.
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Author pls fix the mc it's really annoying ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
i love it please don't drop xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
well i love everything except mc's wife i dont like that idea tho its also good idk what i should say =_= also i cant get what or why one below all is that strong isnt one below all kinda weak title well i will know soon so i cant really complain
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First off, the story was fine in maybe the first ten or so chapters. But it kinda went down hill, espicially in the last one where it introduces a... problem... I think most agree with me with this, but whenever an author writes a fanfic on an anime or tv show with their own OC or self-insert, they always seem to mess it up there causing for it to no longer be enjoyable. Plus this story hasn't updated for 9 months sooo... The guy himself is well... no issues really except for the fact how he interacts with the characters.
๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐โบ๏ธ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐โบ๏ธ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐
This is everything I didn't realize that I wanted. bit campy and just good feels. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Plz write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!....................................................:.....................................................
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I recommend this if you want something to pass time. If you are someone who reads stories and rates them honestly, like a normal person, then I don't recommend this. If you are, however, someone like me, then I would definitely suggest you read this. You may just come to know about your purpose in life.
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First of all I dropped at chapter 25. So what I can say is that there is no point reading this story if you want to read a Marvel ff. Even if he is in the MCU Author is just bullshiting around the Main story line of MCU. The MC is unlikeable and does shit he thinks it is smart (spoiler alert) it isn't.
La historia esta buena las habilidades tienen mucho potencial pero es cierto que como un devorador le faltรณ la productividad creo que el fallo es no darle una mentalidad diferente despuรฉs de todo ya no es humano y eso le pasa a muchos MC, bueno igual la historia esta buena espero mas caps๐๐ป๐๐ป
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It started good... And unique setup but then the mc became a bit.ch... so if you don't mind reading an op mc with a fk crap character who likes to be a dog of furry just for fun and gets captured and says he can change the timeline?? then you can give it a try...
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I absolutely love this idea. I've seen this concept in 2 other fics before, but they were sadly dropped(I assume since neither of them have been updated in over a year). I will be very sad if you drop this fic Author-sama. (I always make my first review have 3 stars before I read a promising novel/fic and will post an updated review/rating with my thoughts on the novel/fic after I've read a few chapters, but since I like the concept so much I will give you a 4 star rating for the first review.)
Shameless author review. this novel is really good. Good Grammer. flowing storyline. Good character design. just created to stave of boredom. didn't find anything to read on this site so thought maybe create some of my own.
This is a great novel to read[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Trash novel with th mc gettimg dumber every chapter until heโs regressed back to a toddlers intellect.
mc has no brain, there is no logic, the plot does not make sense, mc plays the hero. the powers are again in the hands of the wrong person.... ........
๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ
first I was very excited about this fan fiction then totally ๐ฎ 1 power level very stupid 2 mc stupid 3 A.I. why stupid personality 4 mc can't change timeline but in original mcu/marvel comics many times timeline change ex. Kang 5 celestial power 5 percent but weak๐ 6 shield๐ก introgression overall this is ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ
I mean it's just wish fulfillment, no depth whatsoever in the story. But not bad enough to cause brain damage so that's that. Read if you're bored lol
To The Author, Kindly continue the novel Make the MC an Anti-Hero with Full Solid Black Assassin Suit with best material, A Master of All Things in everthing beyond any level we can imagine - Magic( Rune, Wizardry, Sorcery, etc.,) Martial Art( Chi, Cultivator and varies combat Arts) Science(Inventor, Scientist, Engineer,Medicine and Doctor etc.,) and many more things to Mastery. Make him the best in intellect(Science) and Combat Arts In level beyond the level even Bruce Wayne(BATMAN) can't imagine. Make Mutants into Meta-Humans. Also, Keep the Characters from Both Western and Eastern Heroes from Comics and already known characters. Hope to see these soon! Thanks! Reader. 2. To the author, since your fanfic is mostly like the Mix of MCU and EARTH 616 - Make to MC to go back in the past in The Library Of Calegastro learn all the Magic there copy all those books distribute to Kamar Taj and copy for himself as well make him go to Mimir and Yggdrasil to gain more about Runes and Knowledge of Various ARTS(Magic, Combat, Tech-Magic or Etc., just make it up also make him do the works to influence people on Earth to save nature through Tech-Magic to save Earth Environment To Make the Qi, Ki, Chi , Mana Richer on Earth than any other place in the whole Multiverse) of the whole Universe or Multiverse. Make him a Grand-Master to teach all people Combat Arts and Magic Arts - ( Manupulation and uses of Chi, Ki , Qi and Mana into various Arts ) especially on Earth as his base operation. Thanks! - Reader.
...... ........... .......... ........... .............. .............................. ... .... ...... ....... ......................,.....
Author pls fix the mc it's really annoying ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
i love it please don't drop xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
well i love everything except mc's wife i dont like that idea tho its also good idk what i should say =_= also i cant get what or why one below all is that strong isnt one below all kinda weak title well i will know soon so i cant really complain
Reveal Spoiler please don't stop and keep going [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
ะััะพั ะณะพะฒะฝะพ ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ
First off, the story was fine in maybe the first ten or so chapters. But it kinda went down hill, espicially in the last one where it introduces a... problem... I think most agree with me with this, but whenever an author writes a fanfic on an anime or tv show with their own OC or self-insert, they always seem to mess it up there causing for it to no longer be enjoyable. Plus this story hasn't updated for 9 months sooo... The guy himself is well... no issues really except for the fact how he interacts with the characters.
๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐โบ๏ธ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐โบ๏ธ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐
This is everything I didn't realize that I wanted. bit campy and just good feels. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Plz write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!....................................................:.....................................................
Reveal Spoiler I recommend this if you want something to pass time. If you are someone who reads stories and rates them honestly, like a normal person, then I don't recommend this. If you are, however, someone like me, then I would definitely suggest you read this. You may just come to know about your purpose in life.
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I want more. I want more. I want more. I want more. I want more. I want more. I want more. I want I want more. I want more. I want more. I want more. I want more. I want more. I want more. I want more. I want more. I want more.
First of all I dropped at chapter 25. So what I can say is that there is no point reading this story if you want to read a Marvel ff. Even if he is in the MCU Author is just bullshiting around the Main story line of MCU. The MC is unlikeable and does shit he thinks it is smart (spoiler alert) it isn't.
La historia esta buena las habilidades tienen mucho potencial pero es cierto que como un devorador le faltรณ la productividad creo que el fallo es no darle una mentalidad diferente despuรฉs de todo ya no es humano y eso le pasa a muchos MC, bueno igual la historia esta buena espero mas caps๐๐ป๐๐ป
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Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to email rebecca.review@outlook.com. We are mainly looking for adventure novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game). A brief introduction, along with a few samples or links, will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
It started good... And unique setup but then the mc became a bit.ch... so if you don't mind reading an op mc with a fk crap character who likes to be a dog of furry just for fun and gets captured and says he can change the timeline?? then you can give it a try...
Reveal Spoiler I absolutely love this idea. I've seen this concept in 2 other fics before, but they were sadly dropped(I assume since neither of them have been updated in over a year). I will be very sad if you drop this fic Author-sama. (I always make my first review have 3 stars before I read a promising novel/fic and will post an updated review/rating with my thoughts on the novel/fic after I've read a few chapters, but since I like the concept so much I will give you a 4 star rating for the first review.)
Shameless author review. this novel is really good. Good Grammer. flowing storyline. Good character design. just created to stave of boredom. didn't find anything to read on this site so thought maybe create some of my own.