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I love this story Maxx and all buddies are great, the story moves along with twists and turns.🥰🥰🥰🎉🎉 My only wish is for edits and updated the multiple copies of “chapters- don’t read the chapters that say chapter— only read chapters with names! The author is working on editing so be patient🎉
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i just started this book but i'm already looking forward to seeing how the story turns out. it has such a great potential and i'm lucky to be a part of it.
so this is like most of the stories, a bit cliche but still piqued my curiousity. this takes me back to when i was younger. im rooting for you author!
I love it. The story kept me from my seat! The author really brought out the substance of the characters so well. If any one love to read some teen, slice of life slash romance, here it is... feel the angst and sweetness of her two young lovers.
Okay, this is interesting. The first chapter was cute and fluffy. The flow of the story was interesting and I am looking forward more. Thank you for making this book author! You deserve a 5 stars
It's interesting just from the first chapter, I can't wait for the development of the two leads (kilig much)..... Excellent work author \(>0<)/
I'm going to say that honestly this is my favorite Romantic novel I have ever read, and believe me, I have read alot of them. I love how it starts like omg that frickin nanny had to come and stuff and I already cried when they departed it's so beautiful I'm so happy after reading the part where .... I won't say it cause that would spoil it too much, just read it y'all def ny fav romance novel ever and I read alot
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This story is so cute, it is such my cup of tea. Friendship to love and so I can't wait to know more about what will happen to them. It's intriguing me.
I started reading this novel last month and am continuing reading it now. The grammar has improved significantly, and this is lot better than before; I enjoy the story; it reminds me of wattpad story. Thankfully, the author does a good job of portraying it. You did an excellent job!
this story touches my heart, i like how the author wrote this story. this is my favorite book i've read in webnovel so i suggested this to my friends <3
This reminds me of someone.. We used to play 24/7 without getting tired.. But I was the one who left.. and until now we never meet again nor communicate.. This book is really great. Reading the chapter one, I know this will be interesting.. and Yes! I was right.. Please don't drop this boook and keep it updated! This is good! Goood luuuuckkk!! 😊
reminds me of good old times when I'm still addicted to bg! although I'm a BL-crazed idiot now, this one still made me want to read it (this is a positive thing lol what). If I'm being perfectly honest, this story has a good plot, for a plus. Nobody dislikes a childhood-sweetheart-handsome-man type novel after all, but the downside was the sometimes butchered grammar--as a commenter once told me. Just that one problem, if it's fixed id binge read this in one seating! Btw, this is truly great okay! Hope you keep updating!
This book is interesting and satisfying to read i got hooked by chapter 1 and I couldn't wait to read more! Kudos to my friend who wrote this story! I'll truly support you!
Nice! It’s a great novel. Can’t wait For the plot to deepen! Great work author! Keep writting and be inspired! Keep up the great work On this book!
Great story set in a high school backdrop that's so realistic and relatable, and the character dynamics are really sweet and endearing. I got slightly confused when the pov switched from 3rd to 1st, but after getting used to it I really enjoyed the new narrative style. Keep up the great work author!
I like this story soooo much. I can relate myself to the story and the character, The author has done a great job!! Continue writing author!!
Isn't there's anything wrong with self-sufficiency right?😂 First of all I'd like to express my gratitude to those who supported my book and those who read it. I was motivated to continue my story because of you guys.❤ There will be more twist in this story, and I hope you will stick with me until the end.☺️ By the way, I'm currently editing a few chapters to improve the grammar. And to make it look much better.😉
this is definitely intriguing. the prologue itself as well as the synopsis piques my interest. I love the way you write, the dialogue are also well expressed. good job!
great story... and author i liked the first statement... lesson or blessing! that was supercool... the story is truly very interesting.. Its just my 1st chptr yet I hope they will meet soon
The story is mesmerizing. I was hooked by ep 1. It's sad yet beautiful. I am in chapter 6 and will surely read all... added to my library. I hope you add more chapters consistently. Will surely support you😇[img=recommend]
I am glad I found this... I got hooked. I loved the way you write... It's full of emotions. Keep updating more! Will support you for sure😇😊
So far it seems really good but I only had time to look at chapters 1-3. I feel like some dialogue can be spaced with more descriptions of character actions to picture the scene better, but it's more or less optional up to the author. Be careful of some grammar and capitalization errors in your stories. When you have time I suggest going through some of the chapters and seeing at what needs to be fixed/edited. Keep up the good work tho.
This book was a savior, literally, I was so bored today, I had nothing to do until I stumbled across the awesome author, this is a good book, writing can improve and I truly believe it will! So if you are bored or wanting to read a good story, this is a MUST! Keep up the good work!! I will be here to support you!
I amaze with the story, and what is genre? It's the most epic version of stories of twilight but you not have that have that creature, And I want us to collab sometimes!
Amazing!! It's really interesting and good. I love the starting, and look forward to reading more chapters[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
it has great story line...[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] keep up with the good work... glad i found this book <3 will definitely read it
Really loved how Author started the story. The childhood innocence was well displayed at the start. Great work author! I will be waiting for more chapters.
i am in love with it from the start itself...the intro kinda touched my heart....it seems kinda relatable...kuddos to the author...you know how to touch the heart of readers...will continue to read this
i thought I would read only the first three chapters just for the sake of a review...but yes...the first 3 chapters really are "golden" chapters...everything abou the story is so good...I dont read romantic stories much...but maybe from now on, I might... atleast this one...cuz it's super awesome.
If you're looking for a teen rom-com, this is it, and it has an interesting twist to it. The start was a bit sluggish to me due to the writing but I was glad to see the writing improved drastically by the newer chapters (it'd be nice for the older chapters to be updated, especially for new readers, but at the same time, it would be a welcome surprise to see the improvement as the chapters progressed). That being said, there is still more room for new improvements. I like the story and I hope it succeeds one day and becomes a comic. o(￣▽￣)ｄ
The Book is great... I love how it starts with the two little boy, though sad too... It's easy to get mesmerize in the book and make you wish for more...
Reveal Spoiler I love this story Maxx and all buddies are great, the story moves along with twists and turns.🥰🥰🥰🎉🎉 My only wish is for edits and updated the multiple copies of “chapters- don’t read the chapters that say chapter— only read chapters with names! The author is working on editing so be patient🎉
Reveal Spoiler i just started this book but i'm already looking forward to seeing how the story turns out. it has such a great potential and i'm lucky to be a part of it.
so this is like most of the stories, a bit cliche but still piqued my curiousity. this takes me back to when i was younger. im rooting for you author!
I love it. The story kept me from my seat! The author really brought out the substance of the characters so well. If any one love to read some teen, slice of life slash romance, here it is... feel the angst and sweetness of her two young lovers.
Okay, this is interesting. The first chapter was cute and fluffy. The flow of the story was interesting and I am looking forward more. Thank you for making this book author! You deserve a 5 stars
It's interesting just from the first chapter, I can't wait for the development of the two leads (kilig much)..... Excellent work author \(>0<)/
I'm going to say that honestly this is my favorite Romantic novel I have ever read, and believe me, I have read alot of them. I love how it starts like omg that frickin nanny had to come and stuff and I already cried when they departed it's so beautiful I'm so happy after reading the part where .... I won't say it cause that would spoil it too much, just read it y'all def ny fav romance novel ever and I read alot
Reveal Spoiler This story is so cute, it is such my cup of tea. Friendship to love and so I can't wait to know more about what will happen to them. It's intriguing me.
I started reading this novel last month and am continuing reading it now. The grammar has improved significantly, and this is lot better than before; I enjoy the story; it reminds me of wattpad story. Thankfully, the author does a good job of portraying it. You did an excellent job!
this story touches my heart, i like how the author wrote this story. this is my favorite book i've read in webnovel so i suggested this to my friends <3
This reminds me of someone.. We used to play 24/7 without getting tired.. But I was the one who left.. and until now we never meet again nor communicate.. This book is really great. Reading the chapter one, I know this will be interesting.. and Yes! I was right.. Please don't drop this boook and keep it updated! This is good! Goood luuuuckkk!! 😊
reminds me of good old times when I'm still addicted to bg! although I'm a BL-crazed idiot now, this one still made me want to read it (this is a positive thing lol what). If I'm being perfectly honest, this story has a good plot, for a plus. Nobody dislikes a childhood-sweetheart-handsome-man type novel after all, but the downside was the sometimes butchered grammar--as a commenter once told me. Just that one problem, if it's fixed id binge read this in one seating! Btw, this is truly great okay! Hope you keep updating!
This book is interesting and satisfying to read i got hooked by chapter 1 and I couldn't wait to read more! Kudos to my friend who wrote this story! I'll truly support you!
Nice! It’s a great novel. Can’t wait For the plot to deepen! Great work author! Keep writting and be inspired! Keep up the great work On this book!
Great story set in a high school backdrop that's so realistic and relatable, and the character dynamics are really sweet and endearing. I got slightly confused when the pov switched from 3rd to 1st, but after getting used to it I really enjoyed the new narrative style. Keep up the great work author!
I like this story soooo much. I can relate myself to the story and the character, The author has done a great job!! Continue writing author!!
Isn't there's anything wrong with self-sufficiency right?😂 First of all I'd like to express my gratitude to those who supported my book and those who read it. I was motivated to continue my story because of you guys.❤ There will be more twist in this story, and I hope you will stick with me until the end.☺️ By the way, I'm currently editing a few chapters to improve the grammar. And to make it look much better.😉
this is definitely intriguing. the prologue itself as well as the synopsis piques my interest. I love the way you write, the dialogue are also well expressed. good job!
great story... and author i liked the first statement... lesson or blessing! that was supercool... the story is truly very interesting.. Its just my 1st chptr yet I hope they will meet soon
The story is mesmerizing. I was hooked by ep 1. It's sad yet beautiful. I am in chapter 6 and will surely read all... added to my library. I hope you add more chapters consistently. Will surely support you😇[img=recommend]
I am glad I found this... I got hooked. I loved the way you write... It's full of emotions. Keep updating more! Will support you for sure😇😊
So far it seems really good but I only had time to look at chapters 1-3. I feel like some dialogue can be spaced with more descriptions of character actions to picture the scene better, but it's more or less optional up to the author. Be careful of some grammar and capitalization errors in your stories. When you have time I suggest going through some of the chapters and seeing at what needs to be fixed/edited. Keep up the good work tho.
This book was a savior, literally, I was so bored today, I had nothing to do until I stumbled across the awesome author, this is a good book, writing can improve and I truly believe it will! So if you are bored or wanting to read a good story, this is a MUST! Keep up the good work!! I will be here to support you!
I amaze with the story, and what is genre? It's the most epic version of stories of twilight but you not have that have that creature, And I want us to collab sometimes!
Amazing!! It's really interesting and good. I love the starting, and look forward to reading more chapters[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
it has great story line...[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] keep up with the good work... glad i found this book <3 will definitely read it
Really loved how Author started the story. The childhood innocence was well displayed at the start. Great work author! I will be waiting for more chapters.
i am in love with it from the start itself...the intro kinda touched my heart....it seems kinda relatable...kuddos to the author...you know how to touch the heart of readers...will continue to read this
i thought I would read only the first three chapters just for the sake of a review...but yes...the first 3 chapters really are "golden" chapters...everything abou the story is so good...I dont read romantic stories much...but maybe from now on, I might... atleast this one...cuz it's super awesome.
If you're looking for a teen rom-com, this is it, and it has an interesting twist to it. The start was a bit sluggish to me due to the writing but I was glad to see the writing improved drastically by the newer chapters (it'd be nice for the older chapters to be updated, especially for new readers, but at the same time, it would be a welcome surprise to see the improvement as the chapters progressed). That being said, there is still more room for new improvements. I like the story and I hope it succeeds one day and becomes a comic. o(￣▽￣)ｄ
The Book is great... I love how it starts with the two little boy, though sad too... It's easy to get mesmerize in the book and make you wish for more...
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