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I enjoy reading this book I can't wait for the next chapter every time I finish the one that just came out there isn't any big grudges or fight scenes all the time but the book itself is interesting enough that it doesn't need to rely on that to keep its readers. I didn't have much hope for the book when I first started reading it as I thought that making wine would be boring and I would end up dropping the book but next thing I knew my coins were flying away and I had no more chapters to read because I was hooked into the story so thank you author for this amazing book.
I love this novel, for some reason I feel at ease when I'm reading, it's a really strange feeling but when I read this novel all the stress or everything that I can usually feel in other LN isn't present, it's just calming and I want to congratulate and thank the author for this. Well, let's speak about the novel itself, first there aren't that many if any fault in the language. The way the author use the words is very pleasing and not repetitve. The phrasing is good and I must say that it is more and more difficult to find novel with this quality. Then about the updating stability, as you can see, the author is uploading 14 chapters / week, which is why I think he deserves 5 stars. The chapters are not that long but the writing quality make me feel that the author spend much time working on his novel. The world background is especially good here, we have some lead about the origin of the system but not all the fact, the world is structured, there is no incoherence and everything is clear, well thought, and nit over exaggerated. The universe described is plausible. And all of this lead to a good story development. Some might think that the author is too quick with the beginning but I think that it is a strength of this novel, it skipped the boring part and always show what is really interesting (I won't hide the fact that I would enjoy if the author decided to spend a little bit more time on each part because I really enjoy reading). If the author can continue this speed or slow down a little bit it would be perfect I think. The story itself is well built, it's coherent, the goal of the MC is clear and logic and ghe way he acts and how the story evolve is at the same time a little bit obvious (if you spent the last few years reading novels you will be able to see what's coming in the few next chapters) but also surprising (the way the author make the MC acts is different but coherent, logic and intelligent). And the good world background and story development is completed by the characters, the MC and first plan characters are all interesting and I hope they can progress along the MC so that they are not forgotten like in a lot of novel because each of them has a personality which is really cool. The MC development is particularly good, he is not oblivious and his stubbornness is justified but it doesn't stop him from evolving and developing feelings. The second plan character are less developed (which is logic) but they are not stupid or boring, they blend perfectly in the story. As for the characters that only appear occasionally they are qualified by something that make you recognize them even after long time not seeing them and they add rythm and consistency to the story. For the characters that only appeared once they are either here to make the story progress or for the comic relief. All in all a rare jewel on this app, worth reading, worth following. I would like to congrat and thank the author for this story. Keep up the good work, it's really good.
I've read till chapter 142 and I can tell this is a nice novel. The grammar is excellent without any mistakes that I could find. The story itself is also nice without any of the normal cliche or outdated plots and arcs. The MC also acts logically and didn't do things I found detestable. Unfortunately I chose to drop this novel cuz I found the flow a little too boring to my taste and without any excitement and suspense. But I would definitely recommend to anyone who like this type of genre to give it a try.
This story was good at first but I was forced to stop reading it because this author makes the most dimensional women characters I have ever seen. I kid you not, these women were willing to throw their lives away just to be less of an inconvience after only meeting the MC for less then a day. AND he didnt even do anything to warrent this, it was just him being handsome.
I found it to be quite enjoyable. Unfortunately, the whole wine thing was very lacking and unexplored. I think by the end of the novel, there were only 5 different types of wines introduced. And he only created one of those himself. When it comes to cultivation speed, it's good. The progress is very steady and the protagonist is never weak or bullied. (Secret 5 stars for Chad protagonist.) As for the worlds... They felt very small. The initial realm had 3 zones, and the supposedly far vaster higher realm didn't seem much bigger either. Just took a couple of hours for people to travel around those supposedly vast distances. Nothing was really explored. We got a desert wasteland and a central area. That's all that was introduced before the novel ended. Overall, I'd say it was worth reading. As with most novels, the ending was a disappointment. It really took a weird turn for no reason, and it certainly didn't have to end like that.
A nice refreshing read with an op mc. After reading so many novels with MC's barely surviving after going through countless dangerous plots this novel provided a nice new perspective.
I just finished this, and it was an excellent quality novel. There is amazing story development and just an overall satisfying read, with a great ending. The only thing I wish more out of this novel is chapters.
no connection is formed between the story and the reader. There is no incentive to read further as I don't feel anything for the mc Or any of the other characters which makes the story bland in the long run.
Amazing novel everything was good. The character design was amazing and the world building too and the descriptions as well. Although the first hundred chapters had a few things that used to make me annoyed what made me even more annoyed was the moment you enter chapter 500 everything just starts becoming rushed the worst thing was how rushed the ending was which made it horrible i was loving the novel until the ending made me feel like I wasted my time the novel couldve instead kept on progressing with the mc killing (dont wanna spoil) the enemy and then progressing to the next relam after breaking through and taking his family with him or just going there and one day his son also reaches that relam and they progress on together which would’ve been amazing
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Started reading this with high hopes that it wouldn't turn into a cliche and was then disappointed...this has become a strange haremesque type of story where the MC seems to contradict his own actions and personalities. He is supposed to be so focused on wanting to regain his cultivation, yet gives those items that can help him away and surrounds himself with simp females...
really liked it till that Shulan girl was announced kept resding till his store in demon continent cause i could already see the same thing he did in the profound dragon continent he will do again over there so i dropped it. too bad was really liking where it was going
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the start of the novel wasnt bad till it reached a certain point where i dont understand most of the characters (some even got their personality changed without a true reason...even the protagonist and noone thought it was strange.........), some characters even got almost cancelled for exemple the purple feathered flame eagles, for the mc they should be extremely important for when he ill be back to the big continent but when he got there Aren got mentioned only one time and no more and there are more like him.... i still read it cause the overall of the story wasnt bad but are you serius about ending this story like this?... truly unsetting. From this point is spoiler: I can understand make him to die like that(i actually didnt understand very much but okay.) but shouldnt he come back to life? why ending this so sad like this? it was never a sad novel so why like this? truly hate this ending .
what a lackluster read. expected it to be more about brewing wine. instead it was more about an immortals cultivation back to the top to get revenge with some fun points inbetween. if I was expecting a cultivation novel it would be fine but I was expecting more about brewing wine. also the ending was absolutely disappointing. I feel I wasted my time reading this.
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amazing start lukewarm development Absolutely underwhelming ending good read to pass time but disappointing in the end nonetheless
it's a pretty good novel but the only thing that kinda bugged me was how the author randomly decided to switch the style of names from a western to Chinese style seemingly out of nowhere. At first, it was only the MC with a Chinese name which made sense since he was some bigshot that reincarnated in what I thought was a western fantasy world based on the name of the empire and royal family. Even the MC's servants have names you would expect from a western fantasy world. But then it just randomly swaps as if the author couldn't be bothered to continue coming up with more of these names and chose what they were used to and now you suddenly have Xue and He families running around that has suddenly made every previously named character feel out of place. I don't really have a preference for either type of naming style but I would at least hope that you would have a basic enough sense of continuity to not randomly switch mid way. But that's still a pretty minor nitpick in an otherwise very interesting story
This story is pretty decent, not overly cliche but it has some here and there. It's worth a read. I liked it and would read it again if the time comes. I can't say that about every book on here I've read though but this one is a bit refreshing.
A great story and I would highly recommend reading it. I rated the update stability 1 star because the author doesn’t always update regularly and has gone weeks or months without an update. Everything else I rated as 5 stars.
This is a good novel and unique one at that. I recommend reading this novel if you are bored and what something to remove your boredom. I don't understand why this is low rated.
The book title is Immortal Wine's Store yet after reading 500 chapters there are only a couple of wines selling in his store. The Book itself is ever-changing, sometimes the mc would cook or will create weapons, etc... which is quite disappointing. If not for the fact that the story is quite good I already abandon this.
This story is probably one of the greatest story about shopkeepers on this site that I have found so far, I'll be honest when I first saw this was about wine making I kept putting off reading it but boy was I wrong the story is great, so is the way the author describes the background and information about the world all together I would say this is a great story
Why is there no update for a whole month?🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
Dropped at chp 255 I don’t have much expectation on this novel, and yep as expected, boring For me, the fun part of store with system is the journey with the system, this novel is quite bland even the system has less word count than side characters, mission appear only at convinient time, rewards are bland and useless, there are barely any interaction between mc and system. The author think giving more freedom to mc would be good, on other perspective, chp 255 literally describing whats bad about it, and the system can’t do anything
Ice yawned and decided to take a nap on Jiu Shen's lap. The battle was just too boring for her to continue watching. chapter 99...I so agree with her
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Pretty good over all has good everything just feel that he cultivates a bit slowly even though it's a wine making novel but he still wants revenge and imo he's being a bit slow. Apart from that it's great honestly really good concept and nice novel .
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This is Malignant, the rewriter of this book. This book was originally the work of Condemned, but due to certain reasons, he placed the book on hiatus. Now, I got his permission to continue writing this craft. Why did I rate it so low? It's not because the book is subpar or mediocre, but because I want the book to start at the very bottom. Only you, the readers will tell the quality of this book. Of course, I hope that before you guys decide to write a review, you will take time to read more than ten chaps at the very least. Anyway, I will leave this review here to indicate the new start of this craft.
I enjoy reading this book I can't wait for the next chapter every time I finish the one that just came out there isn't any big grudges or fight scenes all the time but the book itself is interesting enough that it doesn't need to rely on that to keep its readers. I didn't have much hope for the book when I first started reading it as I thought that making wine would be boring and I would end up dropping the book but next thing I knew my coins were flying away and I had no more chapters to read because I was hooked into the story so thank you author for this amazing book.
I love this novel, for some reason I feel at ease when I'm reading, it's a really strange feeling but when I read this novel all the stress or everything that I can usually feel in other LN isn't present, it's just calming and I want to congratulate and thank the author for this. Well, let's speak about the novel itself, first there aren't that many if any fault in the language. The way the author use the words is very pleasing and not repetitve. The phrasing is good and I must say that it is more and more difficult to find novel with this quality. Then about the updating stability, as you can see, the author is uploading 14 chapters / week, which is why I think he deserves 5 stars. The chapters are not that long but the writing quality make me feel that the author spend much time working on his novel. The world background is especially good here, we have some lead about the origin of the system but not all the fact, the world is structured, there is no incoherence and everything is clear, well thought, and nit over exaggerated. The universe described is plausible. And all of this lead to a good story development. Some might think that the author is too quick with the beginning but I think that it is a strength of this novel, it skipped the boring part and always show what is really interesting (I won't hide the fact that I would enjoy if the author decided to spend a little bit more time on each part because I really enjoy reading). If the author can continue this speed or slow down a little bit it would be perfect I think. The story itself is well built, it's coherent, the goal of the MC is clear and logic and ghe way he acts and how the story evolve is at the same time a little bit obvious (if you spent the last few years reading novels you will be able to see what's coming in the few next chapters) but also surprising (the way the author make the MC acts is different but coherent, logic and intelligent). And the good world background and story development is completed by the characters, the MC and first plan characters are all interesting and I hope they can progress along the MC so that they are not forgotten like in a lot of novel because each of them has a personality which is really cool. The MC development is particularly good, he is not oblivious and his stubbornness is justified but it doesn't stop him from evolving and developing feelings. The second plan character are less developed (which is logic) but they are not stupid or boring, they blend perfectly in the story. As for the characters that only appear occasionally they are qualified by something that make you recognize them even after long time not seeing them and they add rythm and consistency to the story. For the characters that only appeared once they are either here to make the story progress or for the comic relief. All in all a rare jewel on this app, worth reading, worth following. I would like to congrat and thank the author for this story. Keep up the good work, it's really good.
I've read till chapter 142 and I can tell this is a nice novel. The grammar is excellent without any mistakes that I could find. The story itself is also nice without any of the normal cliche or outdated plots and arcs. The MC also acts logically and didn't do things I found detestable. Unfortunately I chose to drop this novel cuz I found the flow a little too boring to my taste and without any excitement and suspense. But I would definitely recommend to anyone who like this type of genre to give it a try.
This story was good at first but I was forced to stop reading it because this author makes the most dimensional women characters I have ever seen. I kid you not, these women were willing to throw their lives away just to be less of an inconvience after only meeting the MC for less then a day. AND he didnt even do anything to warrent this, it was just him being handsome.
I found it to be quite enjoyable. Unfortunately, the whole wine thing was very lacking and unexplored. I think by the end of the novel, there were only 5 different types of wines introduced. And he only created one of those himself. When it comes to cultivation speed, it's good. The progress is very steady and the protagonist is never weak or bullied. (Secret 5 stars for Chad protagonist.) As for the worlds... They felt very small. The initial realm had 3 zones, and the supposedly far vaster higher realm didn't seem much bigger either. Just took a couple of hours for people to travel around those supposedly vast distances. Nothing was really explored. We got a desert wasteland and a central area. That's all that was introduced before the novel ended. Overall, I'd say it was worth reading. As with most novels, the ending was a disappointment. It really took a weird turn for no reason, and it certainly didn't have to end like that.
A nice refreshing read with an op mc. After reading so many novels with MC's barely surviving after going through countless dangerous plots this novel provided a nice new perspective.
I just finished this, and it was an excellent quality novel. There is amazing story development and just an overall satisfying read, with a great ending. The only thing I wish more out of this novel is chapters.
no connection is formed between the story and the reader. There is no incentive to read further as I don't feel anything for the mc Or any of the other characters which makes the story bland in the long run.
Amazing novel everything was good. The character design was amazing and the world building too and the descriptions as well. Although the first hundred chapters had a few things that used to make me annoyed what made me even more annoyed was the moment you enter chapter 500 everything just starts becoming rushed the worst thing was how rushed the ending was which made it horrible i was loving the novel until the ending made me feel like I wasted my time the novel couldve instead kept on progressing with the mc killing (dont wanna spoil) the enemy and then progressing to the next relam after breaking through and taking his family with him or just going there and one day his son also reaches that relam and they progress on together which would’ve been amazing
Reveal Spoiler Started reading this with high hopes that it wouldn't turn into a cliche and was then disappointed...this has become a strange haremesque type of story where the MC seems to contradict his own actions and personalities. He is supposed to be so focused on wanting to regain his cultivation, yet gives those items that can help him away and surrounds himself with simp females...
really liked it till that Shulan girl was announced kept resding till his store in demon continent cause i could already see the same thing he did in the profound dragon continent he will do again over there so i dropped it. too bad was really liking where it was going
Reveal Spoiler the start of the novel wasnt bad till it reached a certain point where i dont understand most of the characters (some even got their personality changed without a true reason...even the protagonist and noone thought it was strange.........), some characters even got almost cancelled for exemple the purple feathered flame eagles, for the mc they should be extremely important for when he ill be back to the big continent but when he got there Aren got mentioned only one time and no more and there are more like him.... i still read it cause the overall of the story wasnt bad but are you serius about ending this story like this?... truly unsetting. From this point is spoiler: I can understand make him to die like that(i actually didnt understand very much but okay.) but shouldnt he come back to life? why ending this so sad like this? it was never a sad novel so why like this? truly hate this ending .
what a lackluster read. expected it to be more about brewing wine. instead it was more about an immortals cultivation back to the top to get revenge with some fun points inbetween. if I was expecting a cultivation novel it would be fine but I was expecting more about brewing wine. also the ending was absolutely disappointing. I feel I wasted my time reading this.
Reveal Spoiler amazing start lukewarm development Absolutely underwhelming ending good read to pass time but disappointing in the end nonetheless
it's a pretty good novel but the only thing that kinda bugged me was how the author randomly decided to switch the style of names from a western to Chinese style seemingly out of nowhere. At first, it was only the MC with a Chinese name which made sense since he was some bigshot that reincarnated in what I thought was a western fantasy world based on the name of the empire and royal family. Even the MC's servants have names you would expect from a western fantasy world. But then it just randomly swaps as if the author couldn't be bothered to continue coming up with more of these names and chose what they were used to and now you suddenly have Xue and He families running around that has suddenly made every previously named character feel out of place. I don't really have a preference for either type of naming style but I would at least hope that you would have a basic enough sense of continuity to not randomly switch mid way. But that's still a pretty minor nitpick in an otherwise very interesting story
This story is pretty decent, not overly cliche but it has some here and there. It's worth a read. I liked it and would read it again if the time comes. I can't say that about every book on here I've read though but this one is a bit refreshing.
A great story and I would highly recommend reading it. I rated the update stability 1 star because the author doesn’t always update regularly and has gone weeks or months without an update. Everything else I rated as 5 stars.
This is a good novel and unique one at that. I recommend reading this novel if you are bored and what something to remove your boredom. I don't understand why this is low rated.
The book title is Immortal Wine's Store yet after reading 500 chapters there are only a couple of wines selling in his store. The Book itself is ever-changing, sometimes the mc would cook or will create weapons, etc... which is quite disappointing. If not for the fact that the story is quite good I already abandon this.
This story is probably one of the greatest story about shopkeepers on this site that I have found so far, I'll be honest when I first saw this was about wine making I kept putting off reading it but boy was I wrong the story is great, so is the way the author describes the background and information about the world all together I would say this is a great story
Why is there no update for a whole month?🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
Dropped at chp 255 I don’t have much expectation on this novel, and yep as expected, boring For me, the fun part of store with system is the journey with the system, this novel is quite bland even the system has less word count than side characters, mission appear only at convinient time, rewards are bland and useless, there are barely any interaction between mc and system. The author think giving more freedom to mc would be good, on other perspective, chp 255 literally describing whats bad about it, and the system can’t do anything
Ice yawned and decided to take a nap on Jiu Shen's lap. The battle was just too boring for her to continue watching. chapter 99...I so agree with her
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Pretty good over all has good everything just feel that he cultivates a bit slowly even though it's a wine making novel but he still wants revenge and imo he's being a bit slow. Apart from that it's great honestly really good concept and nice novel .
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This is Malignant, the rewriter of this book. This book was originally the work of Condemned, but due to certain reasons, he placed the book on hiatus. Now, I got his permission to continue writing this craft. Why did I rate it so low? It's not because the book is subpar or mediocre, but because I want the book to start at the very bottom. Only you, the readers will tell the quality of this book. Of course, I hope that before you guys decide to write a review, you will take time to read more than ten chaps at the very least. Anyway, I will leave this review here to indicate the new start of this craft.