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Author seriously why did you stop writing this book it has great potential and less sparkles and emo drama! The Mc could could even give rosalie a baby and claim the denali sisters
Great story I really loved it. .................................................. ...... ..................
I Like this Story and please don't drop it.......pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
funny weird and not over the top dramatic over all it's a very good story and please more often if you can
....bella has to choose between the undead and the living OR bella has to choose between necrophilia and being a furry..................
better than most ff .but please update more chapters and dont do it life most ff just make edward life miserable and interisting ,,,thats all ...keep it up bro
very interesting story. It definitely adds more than most fan fics and also changes aspects for rebirth novels. the story is set at a medium pace, which is better than most that are either too fast with multiple time skips or to slow with to much backgroung that its hard to focus on the story. definitely a novel that has potential and should be continued in my opinion.
so hes bellas blood brother but also born a vampire this makes no sense at all he would need blood to survive so he drank no blood 17 years of life ???? why are almost all twilight fics like this u cant make a vampire the blood brother of a human girl it's just stupid
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I like this. Its different from the other Twilight ff I have read. So don’t drop
mooooooooooooooooorrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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more chapter please. ........................................................................................................................................................................................
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algo nuevo con respecto a historias de crespusculo , donde siempre son protagonista que piden sistemas , o lineas de sangres de animes Op , para luego nisiquiera usarlos , o el autor los nerfea. tambien me gusta a donde va esto , el ******o es mal visto por varios , pero es algo immoral bueno xD , siempre las relaciones son donde el protagonista reencarna y se empareja con la supuesta hermana de el pervertido edwar , o alice la vidente , el primero no me gusta , pero la segunda si por si personalidad burbujeante. - sigue adelante con el ******o , ya que veo que no dejara que nadies la toque (por que los vampiros de ese mundo son posesivos.).
interesing. ...............................................................................................................................................................................
good. ...........................................................................................................................................................................
Author seriously why did you stop writing this book it has great potential and less sparkles and emo drama! The Mc could could even give rosalie a baby and claim the denali sisters
Great story I really loved it. .................................................. ...... ..................
I Like this Story and please don't drop it.......pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
funny weird and not over the top dramatic over all it's a very good story and please more often if you can
....bella has to choose between the undead and the living OR bella has to choose between necrophilia and being a furry..................
better than most ff .but please update more chapters and dont do it life most ff just make edward life miserable and interisting ,,,thats all ...keep it up bro
very interesting story. It definitely adds more than most fan fics and also changes aspects for rebirth novels. the story is set at a medium pace, which is better than most that are either too fast with multiple time skips or to slow with to much backgroung that its hard to focus on the story. definitely a novel that has potential and should be continued in my opinion.
so hes bellas blood brother but also born a vampire this makes no sense at all he would need blood to survive so he drank no blood 17 years of life ???? why are almost all twilight fics like this u cant make a vampire the blood brother of a human girl it's just stupid
Reveal Spoiler I like this. Its different from the other Twilight ff I have read. So don’t drop
mooooooooooooooooorrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Exppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
more chapter please. ........................................................................................................................................................................................
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algo nuevo con respecto a historias de crespusculo , donde siempre son protagonista que piden sistemas , o lineas de sangres de animes Op , para luego nisiquiera usarlos , o el autor los nerfea. tambien me gusta a donde va esto , el ******o es mal visto por varios , pero es algo immoral bueno xD , siempre las relaciones son donde el protagonista reencarna y se empareja con la supuesta hermana de el pervertido edwar , o alice la vidente , el primero no me gusta , pero la segunda si por si personalidad burbujeante. - sigue adelante con el ******o , ya que veo que no dejara que nadies la toque (por que los vampiros de ese mundo son posesivos.).
interesing. ...............................................................................................................................................................................
good. ...........................................................................................................................................................................
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