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Chapter 69: Shizuku becomes an adult

Since they were having sex from the day, their date only focused on that, and sex is what they only did for the whole day except when evening hit the day and replaced it. They went on an actual date and began strolling over the streets under the beautiful light from the moon that shone their ways when walking. Their date only lasted for two hours at most.

After that, they had sex again until tomorrow morning, and they did for fifty times. Eleonora's cumming twenty times while Tio has her pussy squirted for at least two hundred since she constantly squirts by the slight touches of Eleonora; because of how sensitive she becomes from the foreplay and steamy sex that she got from the young bluenette.

Because of how many times they had sex, Tio became addicted to the feeling of sex and Eleonora's humongous dick because it's huge and the length is really long and easily reaches her womb multiple times in a row. That dick of her can easily conquer any woman and makes them submit to Eleonora; maybe she even can cuck someone easily with her dick in front of their husband or boyfriends.

But it's not like she has that kind of thought, at least for now, since she is still young despite how mature her mind, behavior, and personality match her adult appearance. What doesn't fit is only her actual age and sometimes raises the question if she is genuinely thirteen years old young girl or not.

Eleonora and Tio walked together side by side right now. There's an unmistakable look of satisfaction on Tio's face since she was delighted with her date and the sex they had because the dragon princess only thinks that their sex is the main priority while the date is just an extra. After all, she is a perverted woman, and it's not surprising judging from her own race, which is a dragon and always has a high sexual drive; some only care about intimate relationships.

Tio, at the very least, has experienced a date with someone she loves. Also, she's graduated from being a virgin and is constantly mocked by her fellow dragon in her kingdom. Although her races are of noble beings, she is the opposite because of her newly awakened fetishes as a masochist and how she behaved when she requested to have wild and rough sex with Eleonora yesterday.

She can boast at her friends back in her home about that, but nonetheless, right now, her priority is not going back to her kingdom. Instead, she wants to follow Eleonora and live with her since the death of her parents and people avenged by the young bluenette when she killed Ehit.

Although it didn't stop her from planning to visit her parents' graves when she wanted it. She also has to visit her grandfather, who vows to protect Tio when her parents die and do anything for her happiness.

And as for now, Tio, who acts spoiled, are lovingly hugged Eleonora's right arm and doesn't want to let it go as they walk over their way to going back to the castle. The young chairman didn't mind it and feels happy since one of her lovers acted like this; it was a beautiful sight for her eyes.

"Looks like you suddenly act spoiled."

"Mhm. I cannot help it, Eleonora-sama. Forgive me for acting like this, but since you're the one I love, I can show you this side of me. If it is something inappropriate, I'm so sorry about that and will let it if you also don't like it."

But Eleonora quickly waves her hands to Tio as she is not bothered by the sudden change of the dragon princess since she finds it an adorable sight to sees. It's a feast for her eyes as it can slowly warm and soothe her mind and heart, which also somehow recharge her stamina and energy to feel refreshed.

"I do not dislike it. In fact, I love it and want to see this side of yours even more. Because seeing my lovers suddenly turned adorable like this is something I've unexpected."

Seeing Eleonora grinned like that causing the black-haired princess to blushes so hard on her cheeks and went embarrassed because of the compliment she got from her beloved person like that. But deep in her heart, she feels delighted, and she's fluttering while looked down as her body fidgeting.

"R-Really…?"

Tio asked her with stuttering while still couldn't look at Eleonora. But Eleonora nods her head easily and admits what she said since that's true for her.

"Yes, really. I'm not lying about that. Seeing my lovers like that is a small bit of happiness for me. As long as you and others are happy and not sad, I will also have that feeling. I'm not saying that all I forced myself to be like that, but that's what I truly feel."

"Eleonora-sama…"

All of a sudden, Tio felt the index finger of Eleonora on her lips as the young bluenette shook her head and smiled at the black-haired woman who is one of her lovers and soon-to-be wife. It's a warm and genuine smile.

"Not –sama, we are technically dating each other and soon becomes husband and wife. Isn't that right?"

She was stunned at Eleonora's words and nodded, which made the bluenette feel even happier at that acknowledgement.

"Y-Yes, Ellen. I'm sorry about that and… I hope we can marry and have a child."

"Oh? So eager to have my child, aren't you?"

Tio's cheeks flushed in embarrassment at the teasing and made her turned away while Eleonora just let out a small laugh seeing that kind of reaction from the black-haired dragon princess of hers. A masochist and loves rough sex yet still can easily be embarrassed like that from Eleonora's light teasing.

She just thinks it's amusing.

"But I don't hate it. We will be married and have a nice family later. I promise you, Tio-san."

Stunned is the face that Tio has shown right now, and she nodded happily, knowing that.

"Yes, Ellen. I also want to have a nice and warm family with you. Soon if possible."

"Then, we have to spend our time more on baby-making if you want it soon."

"Fufu, I have no problem about that and am happy to do it with you."

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Another date is over, and two more dates have to be fulfilled. Both come from Yaegashi Shizuku and Liliana S. B. Heiligh. However, Eleonora will choose Shizuku first since she wants to compensate the black-haired swordswoman since she is basically still stranded in Tortus, although the young girl has the chance to go home with her classmate before. Still, instead, she chooses to stay over for the time being to accompany Eleonora. Because the young bluenette can just teleport her back to home as she wants and can do it easily, Shizuku isn't that worried, yet she also misses her family since they were gone for a few months.

Shizuku already knew about the date, and right now, she left her room after changed into her new clothes on her first date since she had never been in any.

Because Shizuku was too busy focusing on swordsmanship and school life, that's why romance was not her main priority. Her family is renowned in samurai martial arts, and if not, most of them are narrow-minded people who regard the spirit of Japanese highly on their family, unlike Shizuku. The latter actually doesn't want to learn about swordsmanship since she wants to have a normal life.

That's also why the black-haired ponytail swordswoman was incredibly happy when Eleonora asked for a date. It made her heart deep inside fluttering in happiness, and she could not maintain her cool beauty demeanor again while choosing the right clothes for it.

And now, since she can't contain the happiness flowing her mind, she smiling happily at the way to meet with Eleonora at the front gate of the castle Shizuku lived in and maybe her second home if she and Eleonora married according to the laws of this kingdom.

The thought of marrying someone of the same gender as her somehow surprised her. Since she never knew that something like that existed—because she never paid attention to things like that—also, someone would actually do that. That's why Shizuku was reluctant for a bit, but that does not last long as she quickly falls in love with Eleonora, and her love towards the young bluenette wash over all the doubt about the same-sex relationship.

So, in short, her love for Eleonora triumphant all the logic she has in her mind just like that.

"Ah, Shizuku-san."

Hearing her name being called, Shizuku blinked and looked at Eleonora, her date partner for today. The moment she laid eyes on the young bluenette, Yaegashi Shizuku has her cheeks went red in embarrassment and excitement, seeing how beautiful and elegant Eleonora Pendragon is right now. That part of her charm is still worked, and the ponytailed girl dares to say that Eleonora's charm even increased to the furthest level.

As if she was looking at a goddess. She cannot deny that Eleonora's charm is a kind of deity, but she doesn't mind it. Simple compliment alone won't be enough, according to her, but Eleonora always appreciates the honest feeling of people she cares about, and Shizuku knew of that fact; that's why she is trying to give her compliment about Eleonora.

Eleonora wears a white suit and matching tight pants with a red t-shirt and black undershirt on it. What she wears really shows and enhances the gentle and elegant aura from her even more. The blushes on Shizuku's face are clearly noticeable, but she can't blame herself since it's fascinating to see that fits her so much and almost makes her fainted if she's not controlling herself.

"You look so beautiful, Eleonora-san."

"I can say the same with you, Shizuku-san. You are so lovely, and I fell in love with you again."

Shizuku becomes embarrassed again at the honest compliment from Eleonora as the young bluenette sees the lovely clothes that the ponytailed girl wears. It's a short red dress with a white cardigan that hugs her body, showing her curves and cleavage, causing her large breasts to stand out like that.

But to compose herself, Shizuku coughed and looked at Eleonora while still having some dust of pink on her cheeks, implied that she still had some embarrassment left within her but tried to ask Eleonora as she tried to get straight to the point.

"Ahem. Then, Eleonora-san… can we start our date?"

She was trying to be serious and strict yet failed since Eleonora easily noticed that. Still, she played along with it as she nodded at the ponytailed swordswoman of Yaegashi Dojo and showed her the kind and elegant smile.

Stretch out her right hand to Shizuku, she offers the girl something.

"Alright. Let's begin our date, Shizuku-san. I hope you will like the date we have right now after all of this is over."

The black-haired swordswoman couldn't help but let out a small 'pfft' seeing the sudden act of Eleonora being a gentleman and offering her to hold her hand while also goes far to send her a wink. Nonetheless, Shizuku simply nodded at her and accepting the offer, and held her right hand with hers.

"We won't know about that, but I hope it won't be turned out bad. I don't want my first date to have that kind of experience and want it to be memorable when trying to etch it on my memories. Isn't that right?"

She shows her genuine smile when saying that, and Eleonora couldn't disagree with that.

"Of course, that's why I will make sure you will get a lovely and memorable date ever."

"I'm looking forward to it."

As they held their hands together, both walked side-by-side on their ways, enjoying their date, especially Shizuku, who was excited on her first date since she most likely has the same behavior as when she goes on a date with Shea. Both really show her the excitement that came from them without them realizes it themselves. Eleonora did hold her laugh to not let the girl she dated has her mood let down.

Shizuku was smiling all the way during their date. She had never been this happy for a long time because of the pressures put on her while she arrived and lived in Tortus for months, not allowing her to have some fun and let out her stress.

All she has ever been in Tortus is solely focused on finding the way home and solving all problems that somehow keep increasing. This date allows Shizuku to throw some of her stress, if not all, to relax and calm her mind while having fun with Eleonora.

Eleonora was aware of the condition that Shizuku currently carries and intended to use this date as a way to make the ponytailed girl let off some steam out of her head. She knew how much stress burdened Shizuku since she was told by Shizuku, and that's a sign that the swordswoman loves Eleonora since she is willing to share some of her problems with the young bluenette without hesitated at all.

Stopping holding hands for a moment, Eleonora moved her right hand and gave Shizuku's hair a gentle stroke on it. At the same time, she smiled fondly at her lovers and giving her a peck on her lips which shocked the young swordswoman by the sudden action that Eleonora did to her.

Before Shizuku spoke, Eleonora did it first by saying this to her.

"Shizuku-san, you can be more selfish today. Actually, you can always become selfish with me around. Don't hesitate and just do whatever you want. I am your lover and couple who are supposed to rely on each other's back when needed. You can be your true self too. Don't be afraid to showing it with me around you."

Shizuku was stunned by that and went quiet for a while before showing a happy expression on her face while she replied to Eleonora's words.

"Yes, Eleonora. Thank you for saying that to me. That's means a lot to me, you know. You have to take the responsibility by being too awesome for me."

Eleonora chuckled at that.

"I'd love to take the responsibility and marry you. Even if your family is about to oppose our relationship when we introduce me, we will break that boundary and show our love to them. Is that acceptable, Shizuku?"

The soothing and gentle voice that came from Eleonora's mouth really can easily make any girl around enthralled by it alone; Shizuku was no exception and became the victim of the smooth talk of Eleonora like that. But luckily, it didn't affect her own mother, or that would be dangerous if that actually worked on her; she's not that low to seduce her own mother despite being capable of turning any straight woman into a lesbian easily.

"Y-Yes… that's very acceptable, Eleonora."

She stuttered a bit when trying to give a response to Eleonora. She still can't believe that her lover is four years younger than her with that adult-like appearance and mindset. She thought that it just existed in anime or manga, but that thought was broken by this fact, and she had no choice but to accept this strange thing and consider it a normal occurrence.

"Well then, let's continue our date."

Eleonora said that while offering her right arm to Shizuku to link her arm on her, which was noticed easily by the beautiful swordswoman as she linked her arms to Eleonora's and walked together with the young bluenette and continue their date.

"Mhm. Let's continue it."

Both then continue their date and have fun as much as they want it. The expression shown by Shizuku is really refreshment since she rarely shows that, and anyone in her school, except Kaori, doesn't know the truth about that, even someone like Kouki, who is basically her childhood friend clueless about it.

Although Shizuku was sad that she was far away from her family and friends, she also felt happy because she found someone she genuinely loved from the bottom of her heart. She wants to have a romantic moment with Eleonora; she wants to feel more and want her heart filled with happiness. She always feels her heart fluttering in joy; she feels warm and comfortable whenever Eleonora is around her.

They then visited any shops or stalls whenever Shizuku spotted some cutes and adorable things that caught her interest. She isn't embarrassed to show her side to Eleonora since the young bluenette said that Shizuku can show her true self whenever they are alone.

Several hours have passed as they have fun on their date. The afternoon will be changed tonight in an hour. The joy of their date was almost over, but it was actually not yet since Shizuku planned to spend more time alone with Eleonora and get intimate with her lovers.

Although her cheeks flushed so hard from the embarrassment of it, she insisted on getting themselves an inn for the time being. Eleonora, who noticed this pattern, already knew where things were going. The direction of this development was so evident to her.

"Shizuku, are you serious about this…?"

Eleonora asked that carefully and trying not to make it sound like she didn't want it and make Shizuku disappointed by her choices of words.

"Yes, I've planned this since the moment I fell in love with you. The date we just have today enhanced my feeling to do it even more. I want it, Eleonora. This is my choice alone, and I want you to have my first time."

She confirmed it to Eleonora, so the young bluenette knows what Shizuku wants, and no one forced her to do that. She is the one who wants it, and the beautiful swordswoman intends to give that to Eleonora; she only wants the young chairman to claim her.

The sincere tone that came from Shizuku's voice is so apparent. Eleonora clearly can saw it through her red eyes. That's why to respond to the determination shown by Shizuku, Eleonora accepts it wholeheartedly and does not betray Shizuku's decision and determination.

To ease her feeling and lighten up the atmosphere, Eleonora brought the swordswoman's lips to hers and kissed her, giving her a light chaste kiss filled with love, and what her lover did makes Shizuku widen, yet she returned the kiss. Their lips connected and stayed like that for a few minutes before they broke the kiss.

There's a hint of faint blush on the black-haired ponytail girl's cheeks, but she has her smiling happy face.

"Eleonora, please go further."

"Then, what kind of sex do you want? Let me hear it from you."

She is unable to say anything for a second and seems reluctant, but she has to do it since she is the one who wants it and deepen their relationship. So she told Eleonora about what she wants while stuttering and has to bear the embarrassment from it.

"I… I want the gentle one… I want to be pampered when… having sex…."

She finally said that in a lower tone, and Eleonora somehow feels proud of Shizuku since she can say that on her own while still acting cute. The adorableness of Shizuku really makes Eleonora want to actually pamper her.

'By god… she's really adorable and cute when saying that. She was really behaving like a virgin schoolgirl.'

She thought of that when seeing the adorable reaction from Shizuku and keep her calm, or she would be screwed if Shizuku noticed that, but fortunately, the swordswoman didn't pay attention to that since she felt highly embarrassed; hence she tried to look away.

"I understand. If that is what you want, then I will certainly fulfil it."

After saying that, Eleonora kissed Shizuku's lips again with hers, and it was the same kiss while she had her right hand on the swordswoman's hair and giving it a gentle stroke, and her other hand occupied her partner's left breast; giving it a gentle squeeze.

The swordswoman let out a slight squeal because her lips and mouth were currently occupied by Eleonora's lips. She slowly feels something strange happened to her body; her arousal slowly builds by a small margin each time Eleonora kisses her, lovingly stroking her hair, and gently squeezes her left breast like that.

She cannot help but feel overwhelmed by the feeling she experienced. Her honey pot now becomes wet from the foreplay that she received from Eleonora, and because of that, she had her first orgasm. She squirted since Eleonora did that to Shizuku for at most ten minutes before breaking the kiss and let the poor swordswoman catch a breath since she's running out of oxygen.

The swordswoman was gasping slowly and trying to restoring the loss of breath to herself. Shizuku experienced something feels good than masturbating, and that's a hundred times better than what she always did alone whenever she had the chance to pleasuring herself.

'That felt good… even better than what I've done alone… I want more of it. I want to be pampered by Eleonora and claimed by her.'

She thought of that with her pupil suddenly turned to heart-shaped and went in trance because Shizuku's arousal suddenly rose but then, she lay down on the bed, spreading her arms and smiling at Eleonora in front of her.

"Eleonora, please do it. Let me feel you inside me…."

"Don't worry, there's no need to rush. I will actually do it."

Listening to the swordswoman's request, Eleonora went closer and got on top of Shizuku. They kissed each other lips once again while Eleonora was positioning her dick to Shizuku's wet pussy and could notice the shudder of it when the young bluenette had her tip touches the entrance of her lover's pussy.

While kissing each other, Shizuku wrapped her arms around Eleonora's neck and giving it a loving, tightly hug so she wouldn't be separated from her lovers. Eleonora then proceeds to push her hips and dick onto the pussy of her lovers with a bit of strength, causing Shizuku to winced a bit. Still, she becomes shocked when the huge glands of the dick successfully slid inside and tore her hymen, resulting in blood leaking out of her pussy.

Yet instead of pain, what she feels is a pleasure, and she feels good from it. She didn't hurt at all; she was just shocked when she felt how huge Eleonora's glands of her dick were. Eleonora buried her entire dick inside the pussy she currently occupied for a few minutes and let it quiet for a while to adapt to the tightness of Shizuku's virgin pussy.

Stopping their kisses, both looked at each other, and Eleonora could see the overwhelmed face of Shizuku because of the kisses alone. The face is shown by the swordswoman somehow is adorable to her eyes, and she loves it.

Although Shizuku has been overwhelmed, she slowly gets used to its feeling and gets back on her senses faster than before. Her expression returned normal again after five minutes, and she gave Eleonora a peck on her lips.

"…I know what you have in mind. You can move it, you know."

"Really, Shizuku? I'm allowed?"

Shizuku simply just nodded at Eleonora and giving her the permission that the young bluenette needed.

"Then, I'll do it so gently and makes you comfortable."

"Please do."

Under that order, Eleonora started moving her hips slowly and let her fifteen-inch dick grind inside the hole she filled. While doing that, the young bluenette makes the swordswoman opened her mouth and moan but fortunately for the couple, Eleonora already cast [Soundproof] within the room so they could freely have sex in loud noises.

Shizuku's lips locked on Eleonora's, and they began to kisses each other. Although Eleonora's hips' speed is gentle and slow, that's not the same with their kisses that change into passionate smooch and even resort to french kisses, causing their lips to be tangled and connected to each other.

The ex-virgin Shizuku tried her best to match her kisses pace with her lovers so Eleonora could feel good and happy too by what she did at this. She doesn't want to be only good at swordsmanship; she wants to please her lovers and do whatever she wants. She will do everything for Eleonora no matter what kind of thing that young bluenette ordered or told her about.

Knowing how determined Shizuku was from her eyes alone, Eleonora responded by teaching her the arts of kissing passionately or, to be specific, in a lewd way, something that the swordswoman with ponytail hairstyle was never fond of it because of how inappropriate is it.

But Shizuku does not care about that for her lover as long as it makes Eleonora happy and satisfied. Even if she knew that young girl wouldn't do anything like forgets or abandon her, she just wanted to be a good lover or wife since she already planned to spend her life with Eleonora as a housewife.

While Eleonora's hips moving steadily and keep hitting Shizuku's g-spot, making her moan in delight every time she feels it. The kisses had also become hot and sexy because of how fast Shizuku mastered them in such a short time.

She is a quick learner, and that causing Eleonora surprised for a bit.

Somehow she wondered what if Shizuku had her talent, she might be at her level quickly.

Shizuku felt her erogenous zone twitched slightly as it kept getting hit by Eleonora's thick and hard glans over by over. She felt her whole body gone numb for a second and shuddered in pleasure since her arousal increased all over. Her eyes roll for a second, and the sloppy yet passionate kisses they did increase her body sensitiveness.

Within no time, she feels her entire pussy that is currently wet and soaked while delightful from Eleonora's dick, becomes twitched and pulsating because of the warmness from the young bluenette's fifteen-inch dick. Not only her, Eleonora, who began to pulsating, also feels so good from the strong suction from Shizuku's pussy folds and cannot holding her urges anymore.

Feeling it, Shizuku tightened her folds and sucked Eleonora's dick firmly since her lovers sped up the pace of her hips by a bit and still trying to be gentle. Within a short time, Eleonora's glans hitting Shizuku's womb and pouring her futanari semen inside; she filled the whole bowl of her womb with a single shoot alone. Shizuku's pussy and womb also spraying out her thick and hot love juice when she feels that Eleonora's dick filled her like that.

Their kisses forcefully stopped when they went climax together. Their saliva comes out and tangled together as the result of their passionate and lewd kisses. But Eleonora didn't stop her semen from pouring the rest of it, her abnormal cum being shot a few times before it's destroyed after the ten times, and that makes Shizuku's stomach look like someone pregnant for a nine-month.

Both were losing their breath and panting heavily, especially Shizuku, who had her first sex and her virginity taken by Eleonora. She is thrilled and not regretting it at all. She felt happiness flowing through her body, and her arousal increased again just by that.

With a tone that's still messed up while she was trying to let herself spoke, Shizuku has her eyes locked on Eleonora.

"Eleonora, I want more of it."

There's no hint of embarrassment. Shizuku was absolutely better than before and bold enough to ask that to Eleonora. She already has her first sex and won't stay the same back then, so she boldly asks her lover.

Eleonora just chuckled amusedly. But she nodded at Shizuku, which made the young swordswoman with a ponytail hairstyle beamed happily, seeing the response she got from her lover.

"Absolutely. I want to do it more with you, Shizuku."

"Mhm. I want us to stay together like this for a bit longer. No, I don't want to be separated from you for a while. Forever stayed with you. Not only in sex, but in another thing too."

"Fufu, that's mean you propose me. Isn't that right?"

Shizuku's cheeks went red for a moment before nodding to confirm what Eleonora had said about that. She won't deny it and wants to be honest with her lover since she trusts the young bluenette with her entire life and Eleonora, who also put her trust in Shizuku with her life.

"You got it right. I don't want to be swordswoman and want to be your wife taking care of our house and our kids when we married."

This got Eleonora's slightly raise eyebrows.

"Are you sure about that, Shizuku? Won't that waste your entire time for that training? You have been doing that for years, right?"

"That's right, but if you want, then I don't mind keeping the Yaegashi Style of samurai martial arts. Although this is somewhat a blessing in disguise that is somehow useful for me, it's also something that I don't want to learn, and it seems I can't be selfish at this part. Right?"

Eleonora shakes her head regarding that and embracing Shizuku by hugging her head.

"Nonsense, you have your own freedom and your choice to choose to keep or abandon it. I won't be disappointed or regretting your choice no matter what. Sorry for questioning it, Shizuku."

"Uhm. That's okay; I knew that you were just concerned about me, and that's enough moping around."

Shizuku kissed Eleonora's cheeks and smiled at her.

"Let's have another round of this. I knew you won't be satisfied with only this and so do me."

The young bluenette snickered at that and nodded.

"Then, let's take our sweet and quality time slowly."


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