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such a great story author good job! but just got to ask "you still alive"? been along time since you updated.
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Muy buena historia muy bien desarrollado vemos un personaje que desde el inicio de la historia va mejorando la narrativa de historia está muy bien plantada te surmeje en la lectura
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Really like this novel so far, will you keep udating? Do you have any kind of social media or discord I can follow to know the updating time? Thanks x.
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This story is fun and a great change from so many other copy/paste stories out there. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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honestly I'm extremely surprised at how well this is written, my only complaint is how rarely it's updated but considering the amount of support this gets, its not too surprising. Author-chan please update more...
Very disappointed as the beginning of the story showed lots of potential. Got to chapter 80 and gave up…lllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
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If you really want something to just straight up ecchi. I have to say that this book is it. I really liked the character of Devon and is contrast with how he was in the past.
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YOU LISTEN HERE MATE IT'S BEEN MORE THAN A WEEK SENSE YOU DONE A CHAPTER NOW UNLESS YOU ARE GOING TO SURPRISED US WITH A LOT OF CHAPTERS (but also tell us that you are done with it and don't want to continue than I accept it for it is your choice and I won't show hate or saltiness for you dropping it was a awesome book☺️😁👍) BUT I SWEAR IF YOU DON'T......... I'll be sad
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Overall so far story is a bit boring. Main character has no drive and Goes along ra.ping everyone. no meaningful relationships or at least not enough development. could possibly get good but chapters are short and not much actually progresses. not dropped yet but im becoming indIfferent to the story as a whole.
Really like it so far. The main character is just so funny and can't wait to read more. Also doing this for the exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp expexp exp exp exp expexp exp exp exp expexp exp exp exp exp
Novel is nice and there is also some plot twist you people gonna like it.author will written s** is also well and I love it..... You people gonna also try it.it gonna be a good novel......
ahhh I really wasted my time reading it -_- such a dumb book -_- why why is it soo slow grower cant it get chapters faster why author-kun why ... u better update fast or I'll find u and ... make u write like a slave for me day and night hmph
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It’s really good for an ero novel and as long as you’re not a snowflake you’ll most likely enjoy it. It’s plot is quite good and i mean both kind ;). Disclaimer if your a simp then it’s juts not for you, several instances of r**e and doesn’t seem like it’ll stop any time soon.
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such a great story author good job! but just got to ask "you still alive"? been along time since you updated.
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Thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks
Muy buena historia muy bien desarrollado vemos un personaje que desde el inicio de la historia va mejorando la narrativa de historia está muy bien plantada te surmeje en la lectura
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Really like this novel so far, will you keep udating? Do you have any kind of social media or discord I can follow to know the updating time? Thanks x.
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This story is fun and a great change from so many other copy/paste stories out there. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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honestly I'm extremely surprised at how well this is written, my only complaint is how rarely it's updated but considering the amount of support this gets, its not too surprising. Author-chan please update more...
Very disappointed as the beginning of the story showed lots of potential. Got to chapter 80 and gave up…lllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
good book .............................................................................................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
If you really want something to just straight up ecchi. I have to say that this book is it. I really liked the character of Devon and is contrast with how he was in the past.
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YOU LISTEN HERE MATE IT'S BEEN MORE THAN A WEEK SENSE YOU DONE A CHAPTER NOW UNLESS YOU ARE GOING TO SURPRISED US WITH A LOT OF CHAPTERS (but also tell us that you are done with it and don't want to continue than I accept it for it is your choice and I won't show hate or saltiness for you dropping it was a awesome book☺️😁👍) BUT I SWEAR IF YOU DON'T......... I'll be sad
just wish the updateing would happen more and in more amount tfgdshtgdthsfghsgjgfgtdkdmgdkgedmg.xgekhxkgxigdm xmv ymxbxkyekvxjfkegdmgxkgzjgxkgdkdgdgk
Reveal Spoiler Overall so far story is a bit boring. Main character has no drive and Goes along ra.ping everyone. no meaningful relationships or at least not enough development. could possibly get good but chapters are short and not much actually progresses. not dropped yet but im becoming indIfferent to the story as a whole.
Really like it so far. The main character is just so funny and can't wait to read more. Also doing this for the exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp expexp exp exp exp expexp exp exp exp expexp exp exp exp exp
Novel is nice and there is also some plot twist you people gonna like it.author will written s** is also well and I love it..... You people gonna also try it.it gonna be a good novel......
ahhh I really wasted my time reading it -_- such a dumb book -_- why why is it soo slow grower cant it get chapters faster why author-kun why ... u better update fast or I'll find u and ... make u write like a slave for me day and night hmph
yep. seggs. seggs. seggs. seggs. catgirl seggs. hot neko seggs. seggs. seggs. seggs. seggs. seggs. seggs. seggs. r*pe seggs. more seggs. seggs. seggs[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp]
It’s really good for an ero novel and as long as you’re not a snowflake you’ll most likely enjoy it. It’s plot is quite good and i mean both kind ;). Disclaimer if your a simp then it’s juts not for you, several instances of r**e and doesn’t seem like it’ll stop any time soon.
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