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The mc is very op even after being born, if this isn’t your cup of tea I’d suggest dropping
I wouldn't complain about the MC being so ridiculously strong at the end of the whole story, but at the beginning of the story when he's a baby he's stronger than everyone else. I mean, he had to interact socially with people to move the story forward, so he had to gradually get stronger and build his mindset and relationships. But now he has a one punch man like power and actually the story and the naruto universe doesn't matter. At 10 or 20 years old, I doubt that all Otsutsuki will even matter. Actually he can do it at 5 because he has 2 more unlimited wishes.
Plot is below average even when it comes to wishfullfilment OP Mc’s. The MC is nothing really special, you won’t exactly hate nor love him, he is just there. Story is kinda clumsy and monotone and what bugs me more than anything author couldn’t be bothered to use proper punctuation like any normal person that has been through elementary school. Instead of basic quatation marks ie. ””, the author uses [ ] to mark speech in paragraphs which is annoying as h*ll considering most use ot for system remarks or voices inside a characters head, instead of regular speech. Grammar is meh aswell, it’s readable but you can find mistakes quite often. All in all, if you can find something better, you shouldn’t bother with this fic. Personally I’m scarping the bottom of Naruto fic barrel so here I am, left fisaapointed once again.
Writing is fine and grammar isn’t horrible Idk about updating since I only read 12 chaps Story is ridiculous man is getting op abilities from every anime has no story really. Was the strongest in Naruto before he even went on a mission or did anything really it’s just dumb like what am I gonna read him doing stupid system quests that are easy until meats Lafita which he will sneeze and she’s dead like garbage story
This story is simple wish fulfilment by the author. I read about 5 chapters and couldnt stand it anymore. How can there be meaningful struggle if the MC is stronger than anyone when he is born? The writing quality is also pretty bad.
ugh 😩 had a good start for a few paragraphs then got a whole lot of bs...i recommend don't read it as it's a waste of time i dropped it by the 2nd chapter. The author named the mc Alex uchiha just bcuz he can't pronounce any Japanese name and made him over powered when he was in the womb by giving him infinite kotoamatsukami...slrly author research something about the character if not atleast write them properly...fugaku is like evil father in all manhwas like happy for a strong child and mc is like I trained these jutsu's in my mother's womb. If I could i would have given a negative rating for this web novel
the wishes will pretty much ruin the story for anyone. god gives basically limitless gifts that destroy any chance of this being interesting beyond a overblown power fantasy.
chapter 17 and I'm out, one thing I can say read on your own risk, you either like it or despise it. the mc is too op and cringe i don't want to comment any further, this review might become so negative just read it and if you like it then cool. beware⚠️ author tend to contrast criticism to " hate comments ". it's so funny😂😂
a very fast-paced story . as soon as you started to get bored from some ark the next ark will start. 👍ending was too rushed that it doesn't make sense 😭satutsboard was displayed at the end of every chapters . 👍 it wasn't long or incorrect at anytime 👍
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well fanfic with so many contradictions and plot holes that i cant count them all. Fight scenes are hard to understand, as whole story goes. mc is a puppet not a character, lack of self, cant really read it anymore. op mc who can basiclly destroy the world cant save kushina and minato. makes no sense
Probably one of the worst fanfics I've read considering the fact that the author's grammar is good. By the time he's 6, he's got more chakra than the 9 tails, 8 tails and 7 tails combined. He's mastered every single jutsu in the past present and future, or rather he can if he wants to so I'll assume he can. And he's got 100% chakra control. Practically speaking this is what one needs to be a ninjutsu master. He can spam S can jutsus continuously but still somehow wants to follow the plot and let important characters like Minato die even though he has to power to save them, just for the plot. Because he wants to be able to predict the plot and where it goes. Kind of a stupid move because he can literally destroy konoha if he wants to even though he doesn't have shinobi experience. Too many plot holes. All in all you can't find a single unique part in this novel. It feels like he's just an extra following the canon and is stupidly OP and does things before the cannon characters do it. And also the author is bashing every single person who doesn't like his story in the chapter comments.
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I like the naruto ark I didn’t read the other arks to deeply since I’m not a deep reader
The MC got billions of chakra but crippled by story. Example: MC is fully capable to save naruto's parents but decide to let them die, maybe to make sure the plot doesn't change. But the nest instant he get rid of black zetsu and obito which contradicts it.
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the author needs to learn how to take criticism with positivity and improve his writing. I don't like his/her 'my way or highway' attitude. Now, coming back to the novel, it's a wet dream for 11 y/o kids. too childish and uninteresting
If you like a REALLY OP MC and a childish Author then this for you. I don't even know if consider this as an ff, since the author is just following some of the plot as the anime/manga. Killing some people is so unnecessary when the MC can change everything. AUTHOR JUST WANTS THE MC TO BE SO OVERPOWERED.
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it has the naruto verse vibe which is very good, but the story is so messy as the MC got billions of chakra but crippled by story. example, MC is fully capable to save naruto's parents but decide to let them die, maybe to make sure the plot doesn't change. but the nest instant he get rid of black zetsu and obito which contradicts everything his belief. i am wondering is the MC the power hungry type? I dont think so since the MC is already too OP since birth. But why just to be a jinchuriki he feels that minato and kushina must die lol....thats soo stupid
the tasteless, the worst fanfic ever. second bad self insert i hv ever read. and the worst of all, the MC is a slave system. why u make a wish to be a slave for the system?
This isn’t great. I tried, in the end I couldn’t. Honestly I comment a lot of flames cuz I get upset when I see a juicy story ruined by sum so stupid. This was just not interesting for me. I love OP fics. I guess I don’ like some of your reasons and AU themes I guess.
Not recommended, but aggregate score is semi accurate at the point I had gotten to. Reasons: The writing is awkward, example, characters frequently "scream". Great Fire Ball Jutsu, "insert character screamed". The wishes the character got are OP, but poorly utilized. Example, he gains 3 tail worth of Chakra every year from birth that his body will perfeclty adapt to...but thinks that he needs to become Juubi jinchuurki for the chakra. He is an Uchiha, brother of Itachi and friend of Shisui, but plans to let Minato, Kushina and Shisui die because he must preserve the canon and was concerned about surviving the Uchiha Massacre. Itachi was around 13 years during the massacre. At that point the MC will have 29x the chakra of the 3-tails, and 13 years of training to prepare. At 5 year old he has mastered the Flying Raijin beyond Minato, but Itachi and Obito are a supposed threat.... If that is a genuine threat, he would have learned Jutsu to mask his power to get more time to prepare. Instead he is Uber genius with amazing affinities, sharingan mastery, etc, etc.
idk what to say man. this is just bad. mc is instantly a gary stu character. insta op. why he need system? losers wish to be more handsome this the second worse self insert i read. the stor has nothing unique to it. i would say its the blandest fanfic i have ever seen.
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Really liked the Story, always a higher world. Although I don’t really know what to think about the change from the HxH world to Cultivation and I kinda felt like it was really rushed. But all in all i liked it.
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It's an amazing story keep it up although I feel as though the power progression could be a bit more stable and the pacing needs a bit of work i really like the world building that u have done so ye all around it's a very good fanfic
The mc is very op even after being born, if this isn’t your cup of tea I’d suggest dropping
I wouldn't complain about the MC being so ridiculously strong at the end of the whole story, but at the beginning of the story when he's a baby he's stronger than everyone else. I mean, he had to interact socially with people to move the story forward, so he had to gradually get stronger and build his mindset and relationships. But now he has a one punch man like power and actually the story and the naruto universe doesn't matter. At 10 or 20 years old, I doubt that all Otsutsuki will even matter. Actually he can do it at 5 because he has 2 more unlimited wishes.
Plot is below average even when it comes to wishfullfilment OP Mc’s. The MC is nothing really special, you won’t exactly hate nor love him, he is just there. Story is kinda clumsy and monotone and what bugs me more than anything author couldn’t be bothered to use proper punctuation like any normal person that has been through elementary school. Instead of basic quatation marks ie. ””, the author uses [ ] to mark speech in paragraphs which is annoying as h*ll considering most use ot for system remarks or voices inside a characters head, instead of regular speech. Grammar is meh aswell, it’s readable but you can find mistakes quite often. All in all, if you can find something better, you shouldn’t bother with this fic. Personally I’m scarping the bottom of Naruto fic barrel so here I am, left fisaapointed once again.
Writing is fine and grammar isn’t horrible Idk about updating since I only read 12 chaps Story is ridiculous man is getting op abilities from every anime has no story really. Was the strongest in Naruto before he even went on a mission or did anything really it’s just dumb like what am I gonna read him doing stupid system quests that are easy until meats Lafita which he will sneeze and she’s dead like garbage story
This story is simple wish fulfilment by the author. I read about 5 chapters and couldnt stand it anymore. How can there be meaningful struggle if the MC is stronger than anyone when he is born? The writing quality is also pretty bad.
ugh 😩 had a good start for a few paragraphs then got a whole lot of bs...i recommend don't read it as it's a waste of time i dropped it by the 2nd chapter. The author named the mc Alex uchiha just bcuz he can't pronounce any Japanese name and made him over powered when he was in the womb by giving him infinite kotoamatsukami...slrly author research something about the character if not atleast write them properly...fugaku is like evil father in all manhwas like happy for a strong child and mc is like I trained these jutsu's in my mother's womb. If I could i would have given a negative rating for this web novel
the wishes will pretty much ruin the story for anyone. god gives basically limitless gifts that destroy any chance of this being interesting beyond a overblown power fantasy.
chapter 17 and I'm out, one thing I can say read on your own risk, you either like it or despise it. the mc is too op and cringe i don't want to comment any further, this review might become so negative just read it and if you like it then cool. beware⚠️ author tend to contrast criticism to " hate comments ". it's so funny😂😂
a very fast-paced story . as soon as you started to get bored from some ark the next ark will start. 👍ending was too rushed that it doesn't make sense 😭satutsboard was displayed at the end of every chapters . 👍 it wasn't long or incorrect at anytime 👍
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well fanfic with so many contradictions and plot holes that i cant count them all. Fight scenes are hard to understand, as whole story goes. mc is a puppet not a character, lack of self, cant really read it anymore. op mc who can basiclly destroy the world cant save kushina and minato. makes no sense
Probably one of the worst fanfics I've read considering the fact that the author's grammar is good. By the time he's 6, he's got more chakra than the 9 tails, 8 tails and 7 tails combined. He's mastered every single jutsu in the past present and future, or rather he can if he wants to so I'll assume he can. And he's got 100% chakra control. Practically speaking this is what one needs to be a ninjutsu master. He can spam S can jutsus continuously but still somehow wants to follow the plot and let important characters like Minato die even though he has to power to save them, just for the plot. Because he wants to be able to predict the plot and where it goes. Kind of a stupid move because he can literally destroy konoha if he wants to even though he doesn't have shinobi experience. Too many plot holes. All in all you can't find a single unique part in this novel. It feels like he's just an extra following the canon and is stupidly OP and does things before the cannon characters do it. And also the author is bashing every single person who doesn't like his story in the chapter comments.
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I like the naruto ark I didn’t read the other arks to deeply since I’m not a deep reader
The MC got billions of chakra but crippled by story. Example: MC is fully capable to save naruto's parents but decide to let them die, maybe to make sure the plot doesn't change. But the nest instant he get rid of black zetsu and obito which contradicts it.
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the author needs to learn how to take criticism with positivity and improve his writing. I don't like his/her 'my way or highway' attitude. Now, coming back to the novel, it's a wet dream for 11 y/o kids. too childish and uninteresting
If you like a REALLY OP MC and a childish Author then this for you. I don't even know if consider this as an ff, since the author is just following some of the plot as the anime/manga. Killing some people is so unnecessary when the MC can change everything. AUTHOR JUST WANTS THE MC TO BE SO OVERPOWERED.
Reveal Spoiler it has the naruto verse vibe which is very good, but the story is so messy as the MC got billions of chakra but crippled by story. example, MC is fully capable to save naruto's parents but decide to let them die, maybe to make sure the plot doesn't change. but the nest instant he get rid of black zetsu and obito which contradicts everything his belief. i am wondering is the MC the power hungry type? I dont think so since the MC is already too OP since birth. But why just to be a jinchuriki he feels that minato and kushina must die lol....thats soo stupid
the tasteless, the worst fanfic ever. second bad self insert i hv ever read. and the worst of all, the MC is a slave system. why u make a wish to be a slave for the system?
This isn’t great. I tried, in the end I couldn’t. Honestly I comment a lot of flames cuz I get upset when I see a juicy story ruined by sum so stupid. This was just not interesting for me. I love OP fics. I guess I don’ like some of your reasons and AU themes I guess.
Not recommended, but aggregate score is semi accurate at the point I had gotten to. Reasons: The writing is awkward, example, characters frequently "scream". Great Fire Ball Jutsu, "insert character screamed". The wishes the character got are OP, but poorly utilized. Example, he gains 3 tail worth of Chakra every year from birth that his body will perfeclty adapt to...but thinks that he needs to become Juubi jinchuurki for the chakra. He is an Uchiha, brother of Itachi and friend of Shisui, but plans to let Minato, Kushina and Shisui die because he must preserve the canon and was concerned about surviving the Uchiha Massacre. Itachi was around 13 years during the massacre. At that point the MC will have 29x the chakra of the 3-tails, and 13 years of training to prepare. At 5 year old he has mastered the Flying Raijin beyond Minato, but Itachi and Obito are a supposed threat.... If that is a genuine threat, he would have learned Jutsu to mask his power to get more time to prepare. Instead he is Uber genius with amazing affinities, sharingan mastery, etc, etc.
idk what to say man. this is just bad. mc is instantly a gary stu character. insta op. why he need system? losers wish to be more handsome this the second worse self insert i read. the stor has nothing unique to it. i would say its the blandest fanfic i have ever seen.
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Really liked the Story, always a higher world. Although I don’t really know what to think about the change from the HxH world to Cultivation and I kinda felt like it was really rushed. But all in all i liked it.
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It's an amazing story keep it up although I feel as though the power progression could be a bit more stable and the pacing needs a bit of work i really like the world building that u have done so ye all around it's a very good fanfic