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I have thoroughly enjoyed this story so far. I feel like the characters are well developed, and that it has a good mix of humor and mystery. I know the author mentioned that English is not a first language, but you can hardly notice. If I were to be critical, then I would say that the only thing that feels a little on the back burner is the world building. I feel like that the mix of technology added to the constant conquest could possibly use more time to flesh out. But on the whole, it doesn't distract me from the story much.
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I have a very imp ques . is the world were tianxue lived in and the princess are same or not??? and I really don't get the timeline either. interpersonal relations with people in palace is pretty vague. the writing is good, but the world building and characters relations need some serious work. overall it's decent but it could be better. πππ
I would say that this book is very interesting when I read about this some part will make you excite on the next chapter especially feel the mystery on what really happened before that they became like that. Also I became curious about character ,who is the foe? or the relationship between them.
the concept and world background is unique and interesting, the writing quality is excellent too, but the pace is really slow to the point it's more like slice of life rather than fantasy, however the character design of the female lead is too prideful and annoying so i think I'll drop it, thanks for creating this novel it's interesting but sadly it's not my cup of tea, and looking at your writing skills I'm looking forward for your better creation in the future
I love this story...best story line everππππππππππππππππππplease author update more often...finally got to catch up with the story Started reading it about 2 months ago...I rate this story an A
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this book is amazing can't wait to read moreπππππππππππππππππ€
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Such a promising story. I started reading it and it intrigued me. I also don't believe that English is your second language, because you write pretty good. This one is highly recommended. And I would wait for more updates.
I never expected to actually like the story. Every chapter was hyping me up for more. I did saw that the writer had a few grammatical errors but it was unnoticeable because I thoroughly enjoyed reading the story. I like how simple and uncluttered the story was, the characters were interesting to read especially as the story progresses. Each character had a voice in my mind which makes it better for me, it made me more invested in the story than I originally planned to. The story plot had me intrigued for more, it makes the readers want to know what happens next and I love it. Although, I did find the characters lackingβyes, I did mentioned they were interesting but it works as a story but not as a character or was it because the story was fairly new? I want to know their quirks, personalities, interest, mannerisms and more. Are they relatable in some way? What I only caught from the heroine was that she was driven, determine to get back to her body. The story may be early, so maybe the character will get to grow as much chapters are going to be release. (I do hope thereβs not a love triangle going on because it would slightly make the story predictable.) I love how the writer slowly introduced the characters, they had dialogues and paragraphs that gave me hints on whatβs to come. The world building was decent, it needs work but itβs there. I can imagine some places in the story, I could see the characters conversed with each other. Overall, this is worth reading and youβll enjoy every minute of it.
English is your second language ? Wow, I would have never thought so when I read your work. Quite impressive if I may add. But aside from that, I read the whole story. Really captivating and realistic. Took me a while though to realize that the modern world and historical world was mixed, but overall no big complaints on anything. In terms of punctuation, I donβt see anything except maybe missing commas that should go in between compound sentences. Thatβs the only punctuation error I see, really. I definitely will place this is my library to read later. Keep it up author ! (*Β΄βο½*)
This is very good that I just can't stop myself from reading it. I like Tianshi as an fl and the flow of the story is just great. There may be a few mistakes but it doesn't affect the story as a whole. Please update soon :)
5 stars... Really really wonderful story. I am completely hooked up with your story. I really wish the ship of Tianshi Xue and Price Xiaodan could sail. I am loving that couple. Their interactions are very smooth and perfect. Loving the fact that after entering into the body of princess, still, Tianshi Xue is not able to accept her death. Really wondering what will happen when people around her will know. And yes super excited for the journey of Tianshi Xue and Third prince. Other than some small grammatical mistakes(not affecting the wonderful story at all) res your story is really great. Note: Please let me have all chapters in advance so I can read them all at once lol....hehe just being greedy here. Really good work. :)
Not a huge fan of romance myself, but the synopsis of this webnovel really drew me in. Not your typical reincarnation story either - I find this novel unique and well-written (especially for an English as second language author, just like myself!). I had expected grammar/punctuation mistakes, but the few I found can easily be overlooked. Good job, author!
I need moreeeee!!! The way you write this novel made it very enjoyable to read and I quite like the MC's character 'cause she's not your typical clueless FL. You seriously deserve more readers :>
An amazing novel that we can look upon to. The story is still developing and still has a lot to offer as the story progress. But this is my initial rate to the author to show my support.
Its a great book. I really like it.πππππ€©πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ Keep on with the good work.
i did not expect that the author to write well in english as she said in one of her disclaimers that it was not her first language. i noticed some punctuation errors and mispelled word but everything looked fine. the book is easy to read so far. nothing much to talk about yet but the synopsis sounds really interesting and i finally found a character who was reacting like a human waking up in another person's body π added to my library will update my review
Wow. You had written that English is your second language so I automatically assumed that there would be a lot of grammatical errors. Well, I was TERRIBLY WRONG. Your book is so refreshing and light. it was fun to read it. I loved the Fl and her reactions cracked me up. It's added to my library. Can't wait for the next update. Keep writing, author!!
I have thoroughly enjoyed this story so far. I feel like the characters are well developed, and that it has a good mix of humor and mystery. I know the author mentioned that English is not a first language, but you can hardly notice. If I were to be critical, then I would say that the only thing that feels a little on the back burner is the world building. I feel like that the mix of technology added to the constant conquest could possibly use more time to flesh out. But on the whole, it doesn't distract me from the story much.
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I have a very imp ques . is the world were tianxue lived in and the princess are same or not??? and I really don't get the timeline either. interpersonal relations with people in palace is pretty vague. the writing is good, but the world building and characters relations need some serious work. overall it's decent but it could be better. πππ
I would say that this book is very interesting when I read about this some part will make you excite on the next chapter especially feel the mystery on what really happened before that they became like that. Also I became curious about character ,who is the foe? or the relationship between them.
the concept and world background is unique and interesting, the writing quality is excellent too, but the pace is really slow to the point it's more like slice of life rather than fantasy, however the character design of the female lead is too prideful and annoying so i think I'll drop it, thanks for creating this novel it's interesting but sadly it's not my cup of tea, and looking at your writing skills I'm looking forward for your better creation in the future
I love this story...best story line everππππππππππππππππππplease author update more often...finally got to catch up with the story Started reading it about 2 months ago...I rate this story an A
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Such a promising story. I started reading it and it intrigued me. I also don't believe that English is your second language, because you write pretty good. This one is highly recommended. And I would wait for more updates.
I never expected to actually like the story. Every chapter was hyping me up for more. I did saw that the writer had a few grammatical errors but it was unnoticeable because I thoroughly enjoyed reading the story. I like how simple and uncluttered the story was, the characters were interesting to read especially as the story progresses. Each character had a voice in my mind which makes it better for me, it made me more invested in the story than I originally planned to. The story plot had me intrigued for more, it makes the readers want to know what happens next and I love it. Although, I did find the characters lackingβyes, I did mentioned they were interesting but it works as a story but not as a character or was it because the story was fairly new? I want to know their quirks, personalities, interest, mannerisms and more. Are they relatable in some way? What I only caught from the heroine was that she was driven, determine to get back to her body. The story may be early, so maybe the character will get to grow as much chapters are going to be release. (I do hope thereβs not a love triangle going on because it would slightly make the story predictable.) I love how the writer slowly introduced the characters, they had dialogues and paragraphs that gave me hints on whatβs to come. The world building was decent, it needs work but itβs there. I can imagine some places in the story, I could see the characters conversed with each other. Overall, this is worth reading and youβll enjoy every minute of it.
English is your second language ? Wow, I would have never thought so when I read your work. Quite impressive if I may add. But aside from that, I read the whole story. Really captivating and realistic. Took me a while though to realize that the modern world and historical world was mixed, but overall no big complaints on anything. In terms of punctuation, I donβt see anything except maybe missing commas that should go in between compound sentences. Thatβs the only punctuation error I see, really. I definitely will place this is my library to read later. Keep it up author ! (*Β΄βο½*)
This is very good that I just can't stop myself from reading it. I like Tianshi as an fl and the flow of the story is just great. There may be a few mistakes but it doesn't affect the story as a whole. Please update soon :)
5 stars... Really really wonderful story. I am completely hooked up with your story. I really wish the ship of Tianshi Xue and Price Xiaodan could sail. I am loving that couple. Their interactions are very smooth and perfect. Loving the fact that after entering into the body of princess, still, Tianshi Xue is not able to accept her death. Really wondering what will happen when people around her will know. And yes super excited for the journey of Tianshi Xue and Third prince. Other than some small grammatical mistakes(not affecting the wonderful story at all) res your story is really great. Note: Please let me have all chapters in advance so I can read them all at once lol....hehe just being greedy here. Really good work. :)
Not a huge fan of romance myself, but the synopsis of this webnovel really drew me in. Not your typical reincarnation story either - I find this novel unique and well-written (especially for an English as second language author, just like myself!). I had expected grammar/punctuation mistakes, but the few I found can easily be overlooked. Good job, author!
I need moreeeee!!! The way you write this novel made it very enjoyable to read and I quite like the MC's character 'cause she's not your typical clueless FL. You seriously deserve more readers :>
An amazing novel that we can look upon to. The story is still developing and still has a lot to offer as the story progress. But this is my initial rate to the author to show my support.
Its a great book. I really like it.πππππ€©πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ Keep on with the good work.
i did not expect that the author to write well in english as she said in one of her disclaimers that it was not her first language. i noticed some punctuation errors and mispelled word but everything looked fine. the book is easy to read so far. nothing much to talk about yet but the synopsis sounds really interesting and i finally found a character who was reacting like a human waking up in another person's body π added to my library will update my review
Wow. You had written that English is your second language so I automatically assumed that there would be a lot of grammatical errors. Well, I was TERRIBLY WRONG. Your book is so refreshing and light. it was fun to read it. I loved the Fl and her reactions cracked me up. It's added to my library. Can't wait for the next update. Keep writing, author!!