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Its pretty good actuallythe way the mc not op at the beginning... Maybe you can added that he can use light element just unlike in naruto that used just for teleportation but for offense
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"...memories of itachi uchiha" MC: peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace
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So far so good, try to make the main character a little bit more brutal. Try updating more, don’t try to rush things just make the main character go through some character development and don’t make him too weak.
I want more of this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!! ! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I !!!!!!!!!!I!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Its pretty good actuallythe way the mc not op at the beginning... Maybe you can added that he can use light element just unlike in naruto that used just for teleportation but for offense
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"...memories of itachi uchiha" MC: peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace peace
Good 😊😊 good 👌👌☺️😊👍👊👍👍💪👍👍💪 the amazing workGood 😊😊 good 👌👌☺️😊👍👊👍👍💪👍👍💪 the amazing workGood 😊😊 good 👌👌☺️😊👍👊👍👍💪👍👍💪 the amazing work
Reveal Spoiler So far so good, try to make the main character a little bit more brutal. Try updating more, don’t try to rush things just make the main character go through some character development and don’t make him too weak.
I want more of this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!! ! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I !!!!!!!!!!I!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!