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The story can be confusing when it jumps from scene to scene with large time skips in between. That said, the story is compelling and the characters are well made. The grammar is good and has little errors. The story has potential and I hope the author continues it.
i like the story but to bad the story make me confused, the content wasn't clear enough, the contents of the story do not connect with each other, so sometime i need to pay attention more to understand the content.
I like how the FL ain't so weak and flimsy, she's got a straight up attitude and doesn't let herself be pushed around. i think the writing is good and i like the ML's personalities so far, I personally think khaled should be the one to end up with her tbh he's so funny and easy to talk with and knows FL's situation i really like this story and can't wait for the next update! [img=recommend]
I like this novel. A lot! Every time this book, I would read it. Same with the other books the author made. I don't understand why there's not that much comments like you can't just look at the cover of a novel and think 'Oh, this is gonna be terrible' but you haven't even read it yet! Keep up the good work author! 😁
The story can be confusing when it jumps from scene to scene with large time skips in between. That said, the story is compelling and the characters are well made. The grammar is good and has little errors. The story has potential and I hope the author continues it.
i like the story but to bad the story make me confused, the content wasn't clear enough, the contents of the story do not connect with each other, so sometime i need to pay attention more to understand the content.
I like how the FL ain't so weak and flimsy, she's got a straight up attitude and doesn't let herself be pushed around. i think the writing is good and i like the ML's personalities so far, I personally think khaled should be the one to end up with her tbh he's so funny and easy to talk with and knows FL's situation i really like this story and can't wait for the next update! [img=recommend]
I like this novel. A lot! Every time this book, I would read it. Same with the other books the author made. I don't understand why there's not that much comments like you can't just look at the cover of a novel and think 'Oh, this is gonna be terrible' but you haven't even read it yet! Keep up the good work author! 😁