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Dis book is wonderful pls update the suspense is killing me It's a very interesting book I wonder how the competition will be or if he gets d girl how it ends overall it's a very interesting book
Keep On Writing. This is one of the few I read and I loved your writing style and character development. Your way of writing about characters is good. And the scenes description too
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Una novela aburrida como las del monton el personaje es una kk sin el sistema no es nadie y no tiene talento, el autor se quiere hacer el gracioso con los cofres y le da una habilidad inútil para tocarse la nariz con la lengua. Para que mierda sirve eso?
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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Read up to chapter 21 The story has just begun and so far it has really become very engaging. The writing quality is rather good and readable. Some small grammatical mistakes but nothing to really talk about. Theres also a lot of local terminology which if you are not a native of india or so you wouldn’t understand. Fortunately the author also understood this and helps with providing information either as context clues or in a “authors note”. As for the updates is has been pretty consistent with a chapter every day which a good amount of word count. The story does move along at a decent pace and some chapters theres no movement at all due to some important information being disclosed. As for the main character, I wont spoil much but he can be a type of dislike while liking him. Hes not the perfect person in a sense in where the things he does might confuse you but rather funny in some ways. The way he moves around the new world can be seem as arrogant but it can’t be helped considering he has many advantages. The character development is still proceeding since its only been 21 chapters but theres much potential as he grows to be more famous. There are some issues as to what his true goals are and why. Does he want to be number 1? Also why does he want to be number 1? In the first chapter you see his dreams and wants but not as to why he wants it or basically the motive. I would suggest giving the novel a chance for the first 5 chapters. Things start to pick up when he starts using his system abilities and his knowledge about the entertainment system.
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Hey Author, akar tum Indian ho toh jalti se chapters update karo.... I'm eagerly waiting for the update ... I wanna read more about this novel... Thank you will be waiting for the updates ..
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I like these kinda stories so 5 stars without reading any of the chapter i hope you succeed in making this great ..............................
I love this kind of genre about parallel world so please don't drop it i really enjoy it also the update is so slow i mean i'am not mad but i wish its a little faster
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I will put 5 stars to enourage the author, i like this GENRE SO FUCKING MUCH, after IRAS died i really wanted a novel wit this theme, but its always dropped.
Quick interview......Do you plan to write this till the end? Most work similar to this dropped and update stability is slow. Showbiz genre is a like a curse for me,it's really depressing
dude it was really good......sad that you dropped it.....by anychance you will continue it its really nice....................................
Dis book is wonderful pls update the suspense is killing me It's a very interesting book I wonder how the competition will be or if he gets d girl how it ends overall it's a very interesting book
Keep On Writing. This is one of the few I read and I loved your writing style and character development. Your way of writing about characters is good. And the scenes description too
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Una novela aburrida como las del monton el personaje es una kk sin el sistema no es nadie y no tiene talento, el autor se quiere hacer el gracioso con los cofres y le da una habilidad inútil para tocarse la nariz con la lengua. Para que mierda sirve eso?
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Ignore this!! Ignore this!! Ignore this!! Ignore this!! Ignore this!! Ignore this!! Ignore this!! Ignore this!! Ignore this!! Ignore this!!
Read up to chapter 21 The story has just begun and so far it has really become very engaging. The writing quality is rather good and readable. Some small grammatical mistakes but nothing to really talk about. Theres also a lot of local terminology which if you are not a native of india or so you wouldn’t understand. Fortunately the author also understood this and helps with providing information either as context clues or in a “authors note”. As for the updates is has been pretty consistent with a chapter every day which a good amount of word count. The story does move along at a decent pace and some chapters theres no movement at all due to some important information being disclosed. As for the main character, I wont spoil much but he can be a type of dislike while liking him. Hes not the perfect person in a sense in where the things he does might confuse you but rather funny in some ways. The way he moves around the new world can be seem as arrogant but it can’t be helped considering he has many advantages. The character development is still proceeding since its only been 21 chapters but theres much potential as he grows to be more famous. There are some issues as to what his true goals are and why. Does he want to be number 1? Also why does he want to be number 1? In the first chapter you see his dreams and wants but not as to why he wants it or basically the motive. I would suggest giving the novel a chance for the first 5 chapters. Things start to pick up when he starts using his system abilities and his knowledge about the entertainment system.
Reveal Spoiler Hey Author, akar tum Indian ho toh jalti se chapters update karo.... I'm eagerly waiting for the update ... I wanna read more about this novel... Thank you will be waiting for the updates ..
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I like these kinda stories so 5 stars without reading any of the chapter i hope you succeed in making this great ..............................
I love this kind of genre about parallel world so please don't drop it i really enjoy it also the update is so slow i mean i'am not mad but i wish its a little faster
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I hope you don't drop this novelllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
Reveal Spoiler I will put 5 stars to enourage the author, i like this GENRE SO FUCKING MUCH, after IRAS died i really wanted a novel wit this theme, but its always dropped.
Quick interview......Do you plan to write this till the end? Most work similar to this dropped and update stability is slow. Showbiz genre is a like a curse for me,it's really depressing
dude it was really good......sad that you dropped it.....by anychance you will continue it its really nice....................................